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Lol seems like you got really busy during Winter  :P  Keep up the good work!!  ^_^

Thanks :) I am actually almost done writing the next part of Rabbit Tanker, spent all my vacation on it.

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Nice writing bro! Though you want to darken the colour, yellow hurts my eyes. Your guides are awesome but stories could do with a few determiners, you know, to keep the flow moving! Awesome plots!

 

PS Can you tell me how you did this - 

 

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I mean the heading

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Nice writing bro! Though you want to darken the colour, yellow hurts my eyes. Your guides are awesome but stories could do with a few determiners, you know, to keep the flow moving! Awesome plots!

 

PS Can you tell me how you did this - 

 

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I mean the heading

Thanks.

cooltext.com, but you have make an account and a lot of other stuff. PM me for more info :)

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ARTICLE #8 IS OUT!

It's been quite a while since the last part of The Rabbit Tanker was published, but I'm back with Part 4 of The Rabbit Tanker! Go to the main page of this topic to read it! Who was the one to escape? How will they all break free from our new villain @sachet100? All will be revealed!

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Imo you jumped from one thing to another and others, Confusing but understandable and somewhat enjoyable. 

Thanks :) I think.

 

Good story but you need to watch your spelling .

I'll try harder. thanks. :)

 

I really like this. :)

 

(By the way, in your Skybox article, you spelled "Gay Sheet" instead of "Gray Sheet") :P

:lol: Maybe that's why I got rejected that 1st time, oh well.

Fixed.

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Nice story Rabin! Part 4 was so cool and i was in the story  :) .  "Master Sachet"  B)

Thanks. I found a list of people who told me they'd like to be in it, and since you were on it, why not? Mhm, Master Sachet.

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