Contest [Issue 28] Continue the Story! [Chapter 3]

[Raredust 454]

Note : I made up my own story,so don't mess up with the real world war and this one (Just to notify :P)

You can't start a new story, you have to continue the winning one.

[MeepTheObliberator 2]

by the way, when is the closing date for this competition?

[Aditya15723 125]

You can't start a new story, you have to continue the winning one.

Oh

I didn't know that sorry

I can Write one again,anyways

[Aditya15723 125]

That isn't allowed you must CONTINUE the story...

True.

I gotta start all over again too....:(

[Aditya15723 125]

by the way, when is the closing date for this competition?

25th November

[Aditya15723 125]

I almost fainted when I saw this, "Boris…you betrayed your own motherland?” I asked. He said "I never even belonged to that country. I always wanted revenge from Russia".   While Boris was saying that I almost had a mini-heart attack. Then he continued,” You have two choices in your way, to help us or Suffer death. “I couldn't reply because I knew he loved our motherland - Russia. Still I tried to reply, I asked in an agitated way, “What do you want from me?” He said “Nothing much, just a little information to crack that motherland of yours...Because, Well I'm a teeny weeny Sergeant while you - A Major"

 

I was totally shocked. Boris was saying this for the first time ever in these 25 years of friendship. I replied, “Well then I would select....” Boris and his companions, the Germans, got ready to attack me right at that moment. After noticing that, I said, “Of course, I’ll help you! “Boris was of course happy, but he was hiding his feelings. He knew that I'm a Major, I may try anything tricky. But I fell into the thought that he is a Sergeant, he won't know anything that a person may be thinking.

 

If I would have known, Boris was trained to do this from the very beginning - at the age of nine itself. He was also a skilled German who was sent to Russia to live, talk and stay in between of them .Well, that was what he was trained for. Well, I was smiling the whole time, thinking of a way of getting out of this wretched place in Germany. I thought they would let me out a few times and I could see all the systems and securities of the place and think of some plan to escape.

 

But no, I was wrong. In fact, very wrong. I was taken into a prison type of cell to stay. I was going to faint again when Boris said, “You are going to stay here, as a prisoner.” He said with an evil smile on his face. I did not know what he planned to do with me, but I felt like I am going to be here for a long time. While I was thinking, I heard a sound of a click on the door of the prison cell with a person standing there wearing a brown coat and face covered….

 

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Up-vote please !

I hope you like it

[greyat 2,972]

 

Deadline is 25th November! Late entries may not be considered!

 

"may"? XD

[IzzetFanatic_TURBO 3]

Chapter 3: Escape

Panic gripped me like a straitjacket grips it’s victim. Boris smiled cruelly and softly spoke. “You little bastard! You believed me to be your friend, your brother but I guess the secret had to come out at some point.” He then raised his gun and shot at me. My cat like reflexes saved me as I ducked and rolled between his spread legs. I then pulled out my own pistol. And pressed its cold metal ring to his head. I hear him panting with defiant fear. The door blew open and revealed two German soldiers. The silence is profound. The Germans look astonished. The sound off a battle raging on in the background only stokes the flames that have been residing inside me for months. All the horror when I thought I could not get into the building to save him, and the good hearted man Dragovich, dead for nothing. the little ***** had betrayed us. With tears silently rolling down my face I pull the trigger and dove out off the way of the way of the oncoming bullets. I took cover behind a decaying desk as the German’s pepper it with bullets. A piece of shrapnel slices through the tender flesh near my throat. Terror coursed through my veins mixing with adrenaline. My hand struck a piece of warped metal. I swiftly stood up and hurled the piece of metal at the encroaching Germans. The dust was thick and swirling which distorted my vision and my aim was off. If only I had my grenades it wouldn’t matter if my aim was off. The building shifted due to one of the many panzer explosions. I turned and saw my way out.
 

I crouched low for a moment longer and then fish boned my way across the expanse of open space. The blood from my neck flowed freely down my shirt as the germans sprayed me with bullets. I felt one enter my calf and I stumbled. I continued to claw my way through the rubble but it was in vain. The Nazis continued forwards as I cowered in dread. It looked as if they had not seen me yet and I used that to my advantage. Flinging a piece of metal would buy me only a few seconds. And then I saw it. It was crazy but those ideas work in war because war is crazy.

I chucked the piece of metal at the unsuspecting soldier in a high ark. His head snapped up to follow the trajectory of the metal. I then pulled out my gun realizing that there would be no time for reloading if luck was such. A sharp snap reverberated through the gutted office and the soldier collapsed in a heap I glanced down at my pistol and realized that I had one more shot left. I had to make it count.     

Edited November 6, 2014 by IzzetFanatic_TURBO

[Aditya15723 125]

Chapter 3: Escape

Panic gripped me like a straitjacket grips it’s victim. Boris smiled cruelly and softly spoke. “You little bastard! You believed me to be your friend, your brother but I guess the secret had to come out at some point.” He then raised his gun and shot at me. My cat like reflexes saved me as I ducked and rolled between his spread legs. I then pulled out my own pistol. And pressed its cold metal ring to his head. I hear him panting with defiant fear. The door blew open and revealed two German soldiers. The silence is profound. The Germans look astonished. The sound off a battle raging on in the background only stokes the flames that have been residing inside me for months. All the horror when I thought I could not get into the building to save him, and the good hearted man Dragovich, dead for nothing. the little ***** had betrayed us. With tears silently rolling down my face I pull the trigger and dove out off the way of the way of the oncoming bullets. I took cover behind a decaying desk as the German’s pepper it with bullets. A piece of shrapnel slices through the tender flesh near my throat. Terror coursed through my veins mixing with adrenaline. My hand struck a piece of warped metal. I swiftly stood up and hurled the piece of metal at the encroaching Germans. The dust was thick and swirling which distorted my vision and my aim was off. If only I had my grenades it wouldn’t matter if my aim was off. The building shifted due to one of the many panzer explosions. I turned and saw my way out.

 

I crouched low for a moment longer and then fish boned my way across the expanse of open space. The blood from my neck flowed freely down my shirt as the germans sprayed me with bullets. I felt one enter my calf and I stumbled. I continued to claw my way through the rubble but it was in vain. The Nazis continued forwards as I cowered in dread. It looked as if they had not seen me yet and I used that to my advantage. Flinging a piece of metal would buy me only a few seconds. And then I saw it. It was crazy but those ideas work in war because war is crazy.

I chucked the piece of metal at the unsuspecting soldier in a high ark. His head snapped up to follow the trajectory of the metal. I then pulled out my gun realizing that there would be no time for reloading if luck was such. A sharp snap reverberated through the gutted office and the soldier collapsed in a heap I glanced down at my pistol and realized that I had one more shot left. I had to make it count.     

To much abusing content

you may get banned ok :P

[Aditya15723 125]

Best of luck everyone ^_^

Thx

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There is NO RESERVE guys

So quit saying reserved again n again -_-

[Kevred 1,586]

^^What do you mean by "there is no reserve"?

[greyat 2,972]

Thx

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There is NO RESERVE guys

So quit saying reserved again n again -_-

Are you misunderstanding the use of "reserved"?

[FaaiqBilal1 795]

Chapter 4: A traitor; or not? 

I was blinded by bewilderment. I was not sure what was happening... and if I try to recall, there were so many thoughts on my mind that it was nearly impossible to pay attention to anything that was actually happening. I remained motionless, making no attempt to grab the gist of the moment. The staccato of bullets which was clearly audible a few moments ago, had gone. To me, there was a silence, a silence that went both ways, I was unable to utter any sound, nor was I able to hear anything otherwise. 

 

My emotions, now reigning over me completely filled me with disbelief of my companions betrayal. I stood motionless, loosening my grip over my rifle, and eventually dropped it. I looked around myself, two Germans fidgeting around with a computer-like device. Leaving beside my vast knowledge over military equipment, I was unable to recognise the device at first sight. Perhaps it was the complex thoughts that reigned my consciousness, that I was unable to give any firm thought towards any particular subject. 

 

'Cuff him', Boris ordered. 

Without any hesitance, a soldier complied. I offered my hands freely to him, as I had no hope of exodus. All I saw was Boris's cold eyes - a look I had never before seen of, at least not on him. All my previous thoughts and condolences with him were lost, I now had just one though about him: Traitor.

 

I remained in a corner of the room, tied to a chair for about half an hour during which I regained my senses. The sound of bullets had quietened down - it looked like both sides had taken rest from battle. 

 

'Time to go' Boris ordered. Though hesitantly, I complied; there wasn't really a choice. 

 

As I regained my footing, I felt a small twitch in my arm, Boris was trying to shove something down my sleeve. We maintained no eye contact, and moved on towards the German camp. We were escorted by a few other German soldiers. I looked around myself, the German camp was in no good shape, blood and bodies could be seen as far as sight served. There was just one thing I was wondering, what was Boris up to?

[VarunLegend 4]

Chapter 3: Mission: Search for Boris

   

 I don’t know what happened. I was blindfolded and I was taken somewhere. I heard the sound of helicopter... then someone said “Boris are you sure, is he is the one” Yeah I'm sure. That voice sounded familiar.

            

                 Then the helicopter overheard them saying we have to clear all evidences especially of this soldier. I was …I didn't know what to do, and then someone opened my cuff. I couldn't see anyone and then suddenly Ahh! …I lost my consciousness. (Everything dimmed). In late night I woke up, I blinked slowly. I found myself in a hut. I took a quick glimpse out, saw some group of tribal people took something; at the time I was shocked that I was going to die. All of a sudden someone opened the hut and spoke something to them in their language. I couldn't understand.  Then the man came there he said “Hello. Are you a solider?” he asked. I was silent for few seconds then I replied” Yes yes, what happened” He said “We found you in down town; you were injured, so we brought you here. “Brother, Can you helps us please” he asked. I said “How can, I help you”. You see all children, family, and the other soldiers destroying our village the young man said.

              

                Then I looked around, I saw an entire village plundered. They were all pathetic I saw flood of blood of my soldiers… My tears were out of my eyes. Then after few more days I got better. I wouldn't stop thinking of Boris “God, Please let this not be truth” how can he do this to me. When I got better I asked direction to the city, and I went there. I sat down somewhere to relax. I felt something was familiar around that area. I remember I used to come here with my friends during training for relaxing. I went near the shop and I saw my friends. They were surprised to see me. I asked”Hey, you aren't dead, how did you guys escape from the war field “. We were actually left there, but we took a bus from a nearby town to the city. I asked them “Have you guys saw Boris?” but the reply was not favour for me. I asked them for help to Find Boris. They agreed so we went to our camp but there was nothing left but blood. We all lost hope and we moved to the underground station. We heard a noise, we hid ourselves and I was in command and asked my friends as a solider”Red,you go that way””Green the other way” I've go this way. We shall meet at the main room. We went our various ways before I reached the main room I heard some were murmuring I hid myself. But my friends went in before; I could open my mouth before but they were shot dead. They smiled at me before they died.” Oh god, what have I gotten myself into. Now my soldiers have to die. I went in slowly I peeked from a hole. I went in slowly in. I saw my general, I was shocked. Then I saw Boris was acting strange. I said myself” Why is he acting like this” then he removed the mask

 

That wasn't him.                                                                                                                                                                  

 

But where is Boris?                                                                                                                                                                 

 

Oh God!  … 

 

 

Will Be Continued

Edited November 25, 2014 by VarunLegend

[Devil-Joy 0]

Reserved

[Scarrock 4]

"It.. it can't be!" I stutter. Boris gives me such a look of hate it could not be him.

 

"What have they done to you!" I ask.

 

"Nothing, nothing but open my eyes." He spits. 

 

I slowly inch toward Boris the man i once knew, scared at what he has become. With a fear unimaginable by human standards I ask what happened.... "After you left me in the hands of the Germans they started interrogating me. As they were pounding me with question after question I realized that they were never wrong" Boris says.

 

"The pathetic Russian's were wrong." "The Russian's with a soldier who would leave a brother behind to save himself." Boris is yelling now. "I told them everything i knew and afterwards," He sneers, "Afterwards, I asked if i could join them." 

 

"They accepted me after a brief physical analysis" "You see they saw the talent. The talent that was hidden in your shadow, the talent that you stepped on, the talent that was forced to be hidden inside that so that YOU could have the spotlight. I was always the better soldier. I had the initiative, and the ability." "But you had one thing I didn't. "YOU had the charisma!" The "Bravado!" "You little pathetic, cowardice, punk! Boris hollers, "I hate you, get him out of my face" Boris demands as he calms himself down.

 

The two German  soldiers come and take me away. As they brutally drag me across the cold, brick floor i think to myself. "What has he done to himself?" I have never seen Boris this way. 

 

I snap out of my train of thought as the two German's throw me into dirty cell with a dirty floor and even dirtier bench.

 

"Have fun." One of the soldiers sneer in a sarcastic voice. The other soldier laughs and locks the door. As they walk away I sit on the bench and think. I really feel sorry for Boris. "Is it my fault he has become this monster?" "Will he realize the evilness of his actions?" Will he ever come back to normal?" I think to myself as i cry myself to sleep.

 

I have no idea how long I have been in this hell hole of a cell. It is just a series of wake up, think, sleep. That all changed when one day I wake up to the sound of my cell door opening. I can't believe my eyes as I look to see who it is...

 

"It's time to leave, pretty boy" Nikolai says...

Edited November 14, 2014 by Scarrock

[blackflag444 256]

Chapter 3: Ambush

All can do is stare.

 

"B-B-Boris??" I manage to mutter. "Why?" "It's simple." he say's with a proud, confident voice. "Duck." he says. Then I realized it. And I thought to my self “That's my--” "BANG! BANG! BANG!". “Thump! Thump! Thump!” I hear as the mangled, bloody body's of the German soldier's rolling over Drakovitch's body. I was so relieved. Not only that I was alive but that Boris wasn't a traitor.

 

"Time to get to work" he say's, reminding me of the giant task at hand. "Right" I quickly reply in a low, yet happy voice. Once we get out the building, there's German soldier... but I immediately stab him in the face. We start off, taking down any German we see. And out of nowhere a couple of German tank's come rolling on the battlefield, squashing the dead body's. “Take cover!!!” we yell in unison. All of the soldier's from our the unit hear us and take cover.

 

Nearby I notice the soldier that I just stabbed also had a rocket launcher. I rush towards it not even realizing that the tank's would see me. I swiftly pick it up and shoot down one of the tank's “Kaboom!” “One down, one to go.” I say to myself. The other one tank fire's, but misses. Then I quickly reload and shoot the other tank. “KABOOM!” All the blood and flesh goes flying everywhere, covering all the dead body's. It's shame that they can't get a proper funeral. But they signed up for this, knowing the risk. And you can't do anything about that. The other soldier's rush over and cheer, including Boris. “Nice move” he says in a rather congratulating tone. “Let's get back to work” I tell him with a wink.

 

We calm down all the soldier's and tell them: “We need to get to the headquarter's of this damned stronghold” I tell them. “But sir” the unit's commander, sergeant Vaikov adds. “Some of my men are stuck on the roof of that building!”. We need to rescue them! “There trapped by the sniper's in this building, plus there sending some men in to kill them!” “Vaikov, take some of you're men in there to take out the snipers. The rest of you are with me. Give me a signal when you're done in there.” “Yes sir!” he replies. They start rushing in, and i call out: “Do it quickly. They don't have much time.” He quickly nods his head and starts back in. Before we can make it to the building we hear the signal “Good to go!” Vaikov shouts. “Could have been more creative” i mutter.

 

By the time we get to the top the German's were there. But they hadn't shot yet. We quickly gun them down. Before we can get going I faintly hear “Fire!” I turn around and then I see it. The Berlin headquarters. I look up and see mortar shell's. “N-N-No”

Edited November 12, 2014 by blackflag444

[r_Annihilator01270 4]

Victory?!

 

Boris stood still with that conceited look engraved to his face. I stood there petrified with a raging storm of unanswered questions clouding my mind. His words echoed in my mind “Don’t be surprised”. After I recovered from my instant shock I worked up the courage to say something.

 

“But... but why Boris?” i said rather whiny.

 

“Well if I told you that would ruin all the FUN now wouldn't it?” he said with a sly tone.

 

Fun! We had all lost close allies...close friends in this war. Here he stood smug calling it fun. I could feel my anger swelling up. In fact, I felt so many emotions all at once, anger, hatred, disgust, confusion, disappointment. Although it was quite peculiar why he intended to kill me. This is the same nice, kind, caring Boris we’re talking about. There was definitely something up and I intended to find out. Immediately there was a loud vibration on a building close to ours. Boris however seemed to ignore this.

 

As his finger slowly approached the trigger I could feel my heart rate growing faster. Would he really commit such a cruel crime as to kill his best friend?

 

The rumble was even louder this time. This time too loud to ignore even for Boris. I still couldn't help wondering what Boris meant by fun? Had he intentionally got himself captured. Was he a secret spy? These questions hopefully would be answered soon.

 

This building practically tipped over this time sliding us down the length of the building. My instinct was of course to escape this building. Grabbing the frame of a window I spotted the biggest jet fighter I’d ever seen dropping bombs on all the building, bringing them down like jenga blocks. This jet fighter was obliterating everything in its path.

 

With sudden fright I knew the building we were in was next. In a feeble attempt to live I jumped out the window hoping  ever so much to land not on my face. The building came down as though it had been plunged in the side with a flaming wrecking ball.

 

I lay still in my back, aching in pain. This immediately vanished when I saw Boris flying away on the ladder of a chopper. His snickered in a rude manner.

 

“Booooooorrrriiiiiissss!!!”

 

No this couldn't be happening. I this the last I saw of Boris? I then noticed no enemy in sight. Then emerging from behind a tank were my comrades yelling VICTORY. I really wasn't in a festive mood at the moment.

 

In the distance was a large cloud, miles long.

 

“What that?” I questioned.

 

“A counterattack” my comrades yelled in horror. “This isn't over,” they said.

Edited November 10, 2014 by r_Annihilator01270

[DarthvaderjonGTR 615]

Hmmm,, considering whether to try or not. A few stunningly good entries so far and definitely many more to come :) I would like to thank Kirby for allowing my story to be the foundation of this awesome contest. Thanks!

 

Good luck to everyone else :)

 

Edit: Just noticed that there seems to be a lot of buildings collapsing in the numerous quality entries :o

Edited November 12, 2014 by DarthvaderjonGTR

[TriNitroToIuene 4,765]

Hmmm,, considering whether to try or not. A few stunningly good entries so far and definitely many more to come :) I would like to thank Kirby for allowing my story to be the foundation of this awesome contest. Thanks!

 

Good luck to everyone else :)

 

Edit: Just noticed that there seems to be a lot of buildings collapsing in the numerous quality entries :o

Hahahaha! :lol:  True

[blackflag444 256]

Hmmm,, considering whether to try or not. A few stunningly good entries so far and definitely many more to come :) I would like to thank Kirby for allowing my story to be the foundation of this awesome contest. Thanks!

 

Good luck to everyone else :)

 

Edit: Just noticed that there seems to be a lot of buildings collapsing in the numerous quality entries :o

once i read your story, i knew i had to put in ALOT more detail... i put in too much :). my story originally had 657 words now its just under 500.

p.s. thankyou for "inspiring" me

and notice the quotation marks :)

[Mr.Eswar 188]

                                                            PART-3

 

 

when i woke,my body pains and i can't move my right hand .I don't remember what has happened ,my eyes are blurring and now where am i? i look around there's nobody but the floor is wet with blood  .I hear a chopper sound from backside of building . the metal door opens and i hear boris voice he is saying "soldiers let's go,lets go and get our victory . I feel utterly sad ,only one sentence roams in my mind 'what,what has happened to boris ?why he has changed against his country ? I have no answers for these questions .'This hurts me alot ' with these emotional touch ,I got up from my seat with the pain in my heart and in my hand ,with the help of the wall i walked out through the metal door .street is full of dead bodies ,blood and gun bullets ,no where peace ,all are fighting .A loud noise it was like a blast ,3 buildings infront of me touchs the ground (collapses) i can't see anything expect smoke and dust ,pieces of bricks were falling from sky a small brick hit me to keep myself safe ,i hid myself behind the metal door  after few minutes i came out ,peace is allover the place near me i don't see anyone alive i thought all german soldiers  were dead by falling under the buildings but they are not.I took a gun (pistol) which was beside a dead german soldier, i walked slowly towards the backside of building to find boris  but he is not there .chopper is broken and 2 germans were under it i went near to one of the german who is alive i him 'where is boris ??he did'nt reply me i shouted at him' where is he '??he answered that boris is in one of the buildings .i kicked him with my leg and walked towards the street again but i want to know onething answer for one question i rushed to the german ,i asked him what did you to my friend??? why you have changed him??? he laughed and he said you will never knew that i took my pistol out and i said to him so,why should you be alive? i shooted him and insearch of boris i  reached a building ,untill  now whole place was in peace but our tanks and comrades has arrived and they are shooting in sky from leftside of me german soldiers are coming ,i left all of it and i walked into the building on roof i found boris he is with 2 germans beside him standing with SMG's i shouted loudly saying  Boris my friend i found you and what happened to you ?why your changed against to your country ???? boris said 'who is your friend??im not your friend and russia is not my country . Im shocked i screamed how would you say it i know this germans had done something to you ,don't worry boris all will be allright please come back here . he took his gun up and he aimed at me he said sorry im not going to come and listen carefully Im a german soldier not russian i was sent to your military to pass the information to our country army ,it was my job and he said slowly you had knowed this,so you must be dead .i shouted bitterly you betrayed us ?? you cheater i will kill you . Boris laughed again he said before you take out your gun to shoot me i will shoot you , to save me slowly took a rock from down and i throwed at borishe sliped and he fell in a broken water tank to save him both germans ran i took my pistol out and i shooted one of them another soldier jumped from a steps to down then  i walked towards boris   he is injured a a iron rod fell on his leg i hear someone coming up i heard sound of his shoes ad he is coming by shooting ,boris is front of me he laying on floor  i  said to him 'Boris ,i hate cheaters like you who cheat countries and i wont let them live on earth im sorry boris good bye i loaded my pistol i aimed at boris and i kept my hand near trigger but then the door opens behind me .......

Edited November 24, 2014 by Mr.Eswar

[hogree 4,179]

Very impressed with some of the entries this issue. Keep it up. 

Edited November 14, 2014 by hogree

[Aditya15723 125]

Are you misunderstanding the use of "reserved"?

No

Just that they write reserved instead of trying to win this

[Aditya15723 125]

Very impressed with some of the entries this issue. Keep it up.

 

How's mine hows mine hows mine ?

PLZ say before the contest closes