Im Writing a song, can you guys help?

[yakety_yak 2]

It goes along the lines of this:

 

I'M a noob and i can not lie, all the other noobs cant deny, when someone walks in with their m1 guns we all RUN, and I'll tell you why. We're all scared for our tanki lives.

 

as you can see, its not very long, can someone help me think of more lyrics, once it's all done i might even make a video :D

[shadewarttt 3,350]

Roses are red, violets are green. 

This doesn't rhyme and I adore potatoes. 

 

Hope you liek my contribution. :)

[yakety_yak 2]

Roses are red, violets are green. 

This doesn't rhyme and I adore potatoes. 

 

Hope you liek my contribution. :)

That was a work of ART  ART I TELL YOU

[MA3CTPO_HA_XAHTEP 832]

:lol:

[ALEKSEJ0077 150]

In the background there should be someone saying Nooby Noobs all the time

[pizzaslad 471]

And then 'Milky milky noobs' Or 'Noobies want milk. Needa grow up?'

 

 IDK don't ask why

Edited December 23, 2014 by pizzaslad

[ALEKSEJ0077 150]

And then 'Milky milky noobs' Or 'Noobies want milk. Needa grow up?'

 

 IDK don't ask why

Now I know how trom felt when I was telling him that he is a blonde emo

[r_davinson46463a0 147]

Make a song about my 3k refund

[ArcticCow 454]

^Can you stop with that 3k fund.

[AngeIs.And.Demons 1,988]

I could give you music :D 6 years of experience

[X-x-A-x-X 144]

My big fund brings all the noobs to the battle and their like I'm not living this game.

[AngeIs.And.Demons 1,988]

Honestly, that was SO lame pig ._.

[Superlative 500]

^ Lol. :P ^_^

 

 

Just a suggestion: Don't use "Can't" there go for cannot. Rhymes better. :)

[X-x-A-x-X 144]

You ask for help, I give it to you, then you disrespect me by down voting, fo you know how insulting that is? Don't get on my bad side, I'll leave this forum again.

[jokersus.cava 1,503]

Roses are red

(but also come in white, purple, orange, black, yellow and pink varieties)

Violets are violet

(Hence the name)

I might not be good at poetry;

But at least I am

Botanically accurate

[TURBO_KING_9000 1]

.........  I suck at ryhmes

Edited December 31, 2014 by TURBO_KING_9000

[SicTransitGloria 76]

Haikus are easy

But sometimes they don't make sense

Refrigerator

[GG_reg 1,524]

I would help (Grade 6 piano grade 4 organ) but I can't really work with bad lyrics :D No offence. How about you make it into a poem with a structure then it's easier to structure as a song.

[yakety_yak 2]

Honestly, that was SO lame pig ._.

lol +1

[cornierauto 9]

MY TANK NOOBS

RATHER MY M2S

I RATHER DIE QUICK

BUT I CAN HIT BRICK

YES YOU THE ONE WHO KILLED ME,YOU JUST MADE A BLUNDER

WITH THIS NOISY THUNDER

DONT SAY NOT YOUR FAULT

ITS ALL HOW I DO ASAULT

SALUTE TO YOU I AM DEAD

WHEN THE GOLD NOTE APPEARED IN RED

THATS ALL HAPPENED IN SILENCE

SEE YOU IN VOILENCE

THATS WHAT YOU MAKE THEM FAIL

WITH YOUR LITTLE RAIL YOWS THAT

[yakety_yak 2]

MY TANK NOOBS

RATHER MY M2S

I RATHER DIE QUICK

BUT I CAN HIT BRICK

YES YOU THE ONE WHO KILLED ME,YOU JUST MADE A BLUNDER

WITH THIS NOISY THUNDER

DONT SAY NOT YOUR FAULT

ITS ALL HOW I DO ASAULT

SALUTE TO YOU I AM DEAD

WHEN THE GOLD NOTE APPEARED IN RED

THATS ALL HAPPENED IN SILENCE

SEE YOU IN VOILENCE

THATS WHAT YOU MAKE THEM FAIL

WITH YOUR LITTLE RAIL YOWS THAT

Wow...  that...was...amazing

[cornierauto 9]

thanks

[TriNitroToIuene 4,765]

I would help (Grade 6 piano grade 4 organ) but I can't really work with bad lyrics :D No offence. How about you make it into a poem with a structure then it's easier to structure as a song.

Grade 6 Piano too!

Is this a rap?