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Hello i would like to be in the Tanki Online Press here is my story:

A long time ago well not really long there lived an taker named @444mihai444 he loved exploring new maps and he was a gold box hunter but next morning an Mysterious Tank named @Godmode_ON he stole the TankiOnlineTrophy that belonged in the Tank Mueseum. The staff asked the gallant @444mihai444 to go bring the Trophy back!


ALAS,@Godmode_ON lived in an secret lab he stole all of the Tanki M3s and he was found out that when he gets destroyed Millions of goldboxes drop what an miracle!

Lets get on with the story...

as i said @444mihai444 was the bravest of them all as he upgraded his Twins m1 and Railgun m1 he continued the adventure...


LOL i didnt finish it and i hope i get in the press i will continue it when i have ideas!


:)


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This is annoying me a lot, this guy is not good at writing. I could have written this in under five minutes, better and more complete. This is my fifteen minute version. 

 

A long, long time ago (not very long ago) there was a tank named 444mihai444. He hunted goldboxes across the diverse land of Tanki Online.

A big part of tanki online was the Tanki Online Trophy. It was presented to the best tanker every year, but it had been a long time since it had been given out. Currently, it resided in the Tanki Online museum. Every year there was a contest in which many good tankers battled to win the trophy. 

But, one day, the dreaded fiend Godmode_ON stole the trophy right out of the museum. There was a frantic investigation, but Godmode, and the trophy, were no where to be found. 

The tanki online police still searched, but they knew they needed help. 444mihai444 was a famous gold hunter, who knew his way around everywhere in tanki online. So they asked him to help with the investigation. 

Gallantly, 444mihai444 accepted the challenge. 

 

MEANWHILE, the devious Godmode_ON continued with his plots. In a bold move, he stole every last one of the M3 tanks. Now there were no more M3s! Everyone was happy but the Brigadiers and higher. Some scientists discovered a strange fact: Whenever Godmode died, millions of goldboxes would drop. It was very odd. 

Godmode_ON lived in a secret laboratory. No one would find him here. He began experimenting on the M3 tanks...

 

The brave 444mihai444 upgraded his Twins M1 and Dictator M1. He began his search. Could Godmode be hiding in Lost Temple? It didn't seem like it. 444mihai444 explored numerous maps. Garder, Osa and Brest did not host Godmode_ON. Where could be be?

444mihai444 was desperate. The Generalissimos were starting an uprising. They wanted their M3s back, and the vile developers had taken them, just like they had taken crystal boxes! The generalissimos were riling everyone up. If 444mihai444 didn't find the trophy and Godmode soon, there would be a revolution. 

444mihai444 didn't know where to do. He explored Polygon, and then began his search in Rio. Several clues made him be suspicious of Rio. A lot of the map was actually outside of the maps boundaries. This included sky scrapers, alleyways, tree, and platforms. Also, the entire map used very modern props. Also, once there was a video in which Godmode_ON had fallen on top of the Rio scyscraper. 

He hopped over a fence, and found himself in the outskirts of the red team. On the back of a building, written in blood red graffiti, were the words, "Beware of Godmode_ON". A second after reading these words, a shadow loomed in his vision. A massive dictator/smoky was charging towards him. It was the despicable S.C.Y.T.H.E!

S.C.Y.T.H.E was famous for annoying people and writing ridiculously long text walls. 

Desperate to avoid death, 444mihai444 flanked the dictator. It didn't even turn its turret! 

What a nug, 444mihai444 thought. He can't even turn his turret! The smoky shot, but missed by a lot every time. 444mihai444 froze S.C.Y.T.H.E with his freeze, and began his interrogation.

"Who do you work for?" 444mihai444 demanded.  

"Snakey123." S.C.Y.T.H.E answered. 

"Who is Snakey123?" 444mihai444 asked again.

"Who cares! Let me go, you creep!"

"WHERE IS GODMODE_ON?" 444mihai444 screemed, shooting S.C.Y.T.H.E three times with a thunder. 

"I don't know! Why do you want to know?"

"I know that you know! Tell me right now, or I will kill you until you are dead!" 444mihai444 declared.

S.C.Y.T.H.E, horrified at the nonsensicality of what mihai had just said, answered.

"He is inside the sky scraper!"

444mihai444 now knew the secret. He let S.C.Y.T.H.E leave, and put on a wasp and ricochet. Using a nitro, he flung himself off a ramp, headlong into the central sky scraper. Absurdly, he went through the sky scraper, and landed in a dark tunnel. Cautiosly, he drove up the ramp. Computer screens illuminated the path. Eventually, 444mihai444 saw a huge, looming shape. It was a Mammoth M3 and a Thunder M3. It was Godmode_ON. 

444mihai444 almost turned tail and ran, but he continued. Godmode was dormant. Beside him, were thousands of rows of M3s-- any possiblilty of turret and hull. But something wasn't right about them... 444mihai444 didn't have time to investigate further, because Godmode had suddenly driven forward. 444mihai444 realized he would only survive one thunder blast, as he was using Wasp M0. 

He used his flanking strategy, and swerved to the rear of Godmode_ON. Strangely, Godmode_ON was also a nug and couldn't turn his turret! He pounded Godmode_ON with his M0 wasp 300 times, until Godmode eventually blew into smithereens. 

The brave 444mihai444 found the trophy, and returned the M3s. The tanki online staff awarded him the trophy for his bravery.

 

But something was wrong. The M3s weren't normal-- in twisted experiments, GodmodeON had fused turrets and hulls together. Strange mutations has developed. The Generalissimos wanted revenge on the developers. 

 

Three questions haunted 444mihai. Will the M3s ever be returned to their original state? Will the Generalissimos successfully revolt? And most of all, Who Is Snakey123???

 

To Be Continued...

Edited by S.C.Y.T.H.E

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This is annoying me a lot, this guy is not good at writing. I could have written this in under five minutes, better and more complete. This is my fifteen minute version. 

 

A long, long time ago (not very long ago) there was a tank named 444mihai444. He hunted goldboxes across the diverse land of Tanki Online.

A big part of tanki online was the Tanki Online Trophy. It was presented to the best tanker every year, but it had been a long time since it had been given out. Currently, it resided in the Tanki Online museum. Every year there was a contest in which many good tankers battled to win the trophy. 

But, one day, the dreaded fiend Godmode_ON stole the trophy right out of the museum. There was a frantic investigation, but Godmode, and the trophy, were no where to be found. 

The tanki online police still searched, but they knew they needed help. 444mihai444 was a famous gold hunter, who knew his way around everywhere in tanki online. So they asked him to help with the investigation. 

Gallantly, 444mihai444 accepted the challenge. 

 

MEANWHILE, the devious Godmode_ON continued with his plots. In a bold move, he stole every last one of the M3 tanks. Now there were no more M3s! Everyone was happy but the Brigadiers and higher. Some scientists discovered a strange fact: Whenever Godmode died, millions of goldboxes would drop. It was very odd. 

Godmode_ON lived in a secret laboratory. No one would find him here. He began experimenting on the M3 tanks...

 

The brave 444mihai444 upgraded his Twins M1 and Dictator M1. He began his search. Could Godmode be hiding in Lost Temple? It didn't seem like it. 444mihai444 explored numerous maps. Garder, Osa and Brest did not host Godmode_ON. Where could be be?

444mihai444 was desperate. The Generalissimos were starting an uprising. They wanted their M3s back, and the vile developers had taken them, just like they had taken crystal boxes! The generalissimos were riling everyone up. If 444mihai444 didn't find the trophy and Godmode soon, there would be a revolution. 

444mihai444 didn't know where to do. He explored Polygon, and then began his search in Rio. Several clues made him be suspicious of Rio. A lot of the map was actually outside of the maps boundaries. This included sky scrapers, alleyways, tree, and platforms. Also, the entire map used very modern props. Also, once there was a video in which Godmode_ON had fallen on top of the Rio scyscraper. 

He hopped over a fence, and found himself in the outskirts of the red team. On the back of a building, written in blood red graffiti, were the words, "Beware of Godmode_ON". A second after reading these words, a shadow loomed in his vision. A massive dictator/smoky was charging towards him. It was the despicable S.C.Y.T.H.E!

S.C.Y.T.H.E was famous for annoying people and writing ridiculously long text walls. 

Desperate to avoid death, 444mihai444 flanked the dictator. It didn't even turn its turret! 

What a nug, 444mihai444 thought. He can't even turn his turret! The smoky shot, but missed by a lot every time. 444mihai444 froze S.C.Y.T.H.E with his freeze, and began his interrogation.

"Who do you work for?" 444mihai444 demanded.  

"Snakey123." S.C.Y.T.H.E answered. 

"Who is Snakey123?" 444mihai444 asked again.

"Who cares! Let me go, you creep!"

"WHERE IS GODMODE_ON?" 444mihai444 screemed, shooting S.C.Y.T.H.E three times with a thunder. 

"I don't know! Why do you want to know?"

"I know that you know! Tell me right now, or I will kill you until you are dead!" 444mihai444 declared.

S.C.Y.T.H.E, horrified at the nonsensicality of what mihai had just said, answered.

"He is inside the sky scraper!"

444mihai444 now knew the secret. He let S.C.Y.T.H.E leave, and put on a wasp and ricochet. Using a nitro, he flung himself off a ramp, headlong into the central sky scraper. Absurdly, he went through the sky scraper, and landed in a dark tunnel. Cautiosly, he drove up the ramp. Computer screens illuminated the path. Eventually, 444mihai444 saw a huge, looming shape. It was a Mammoth M3 and a Thunder M3. It was Godmode_ON. 

444mihai444 almost turned tail and ran, but he continued. Godmode was dormant. Beside him, were thousands of rows of M3s-- any possiblilty of turret and hull. But something wasn't right about them... 444mihai444 didn't have time to investigate further, because Godmode had suddenly driven forward. 444mihai444 realized he would only survive one thunder blast, as he was using Wasp M0. 

He used his flanking strategy, and swerved to the rear of Godmode_ON. Strangely, Godmode_ON was also a nug and couldn't turn his turret! He pounded Godmode_ON with his M0 wasp 300 times, until Godmode eventually blew into smithereens. 

The brave 444mihai444 found the trophy, and returned the M3s. The tanki online staff awarded him the trophy for his bravery.

 

But something was wrong. The M3s weren't normal-- in twisted experiments, GodmodeON had fused turrets and hulls together. Strange mutations has developed. The Generalissimos wanted revenge on the developers. 

 

Three questions haunted 444mihai. Will the M3s ever be returned to their original state? Will the Generalissimos successfully revolt? And most of all, Who Is Snakey123???

 

To Be Continued...

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