Contest [Issue 34] Continue the Story... Returns! [Chapter 1]

[Quarks 2,255]

The attack of the corrupt

Part 1... Why is it always the good who die young.

¨Lieutenant Johnson, we have another problem, we lost privaten Adams¨ Spits off Sergeant Timothy with all haste.

¨Which one Sergeant Timothy, we seem to lose privates on a constant basis, have you seen the funds on those battles, they are terrible.¨ Said the Lieutenant.

¨ Sir, this isn't tanki, this is real life, we have a man MIA, possibly KIA, and yes the funds in those battles are not good, I know.¨ He replies with vigor and aggravation.

¨ Come on Timothy, let me finish this duel with Kevred, I'm beating him right now, first time for everything.¨

Timothy groans, ¨How many times have I told you, this is real life, I don't care about your battle, you can start it again.¨

¨ Fine, let us go, where was he was seen, was it obscure or in a place like a Godmode_On appearing or anything in Gubakha...¨

¨Will you just shut up about tanki, this is the only time I will say this, we will go now, before I report to the captain about your problem.¨ I began to reply angrily, I forgot about how I can't right in third person, this is now first person, screw the rules now.

¨Fine, where was he last seen?¨

He finally got back on point again, can't get overly annoyed, but at some point I will have to give in, now isn't the time.

¨Ḧe was last seen in The alleyway between 43 st, and 23 av.Ḧe was investigating a drug cartel recently, he was going at it with our colonel, Jameson, he said he need back up, cartels are very annoying to bust. ¨ Now naturally, the lieutenant decides to interject with more of his completely on topic ideas, but then again, he is trying, but I still don't know how he ranked up so quickly, he started three years ago.

¨Why didn't he go off with a SWAT team, it is a cartel right??¨ Fine this one was on topic, I'm still not used to anything like this.

¨This was completely incognito, we was unable to come in with back up, or they would be uncovered, this was a low talk investigation, They talked to me first, but I said only 2, I was surprised when only the colonel only came back, stuttering about a recon party, and they only took private, while hide his rear end in the trash can. that doesn't sound like the Colonel though, he was never a scared man, something doesn't add up here. I am taking the Colonel with us for questioning on what happened.¨

Still on topic, he replies, ¨All right, let us go, and try and figure this out, only one clip of ammo, we don't want to be seen as a threat,¨ Why only one clip, he always says to get enough clips, and then three more?? Whatevs, this can't be too bad, right? I'll take an extra clip just in case.

¨Ready Sergeant, The car is revving, and I want to get going. Actually, If you could wait a sec, I need to make a call.¨

¨Fine, make it quick though, you have five minutes, or I'm coming and we are going.¨

He finished in a minute, most not have been important, or so I thought, but I mean, what could go wrong…

When we got to the crime scene, he told me to look for clues, forensics, brass, grass, speed, anything that might help us.

I did find a pack of speed, put on some gloves, and brought it to the forensics container in the back of the Queen Victoria, we still have one of those for some reason.

When I was almost done, I heard one click, like a hammer getting cocked back, just a loud click, then another, then a wave of them. I heard the Colonel speak.

¨Thanks to the Lieutenants good work, we have you, we liked you, but you were too nosy to be left around, now you can join the Private in hell, after we get you to the cartel, and have some fun. Oh yeah, we killed the private.¨

I just stood there, two guns pointed at me, one at my head, one at my heart, my gun was in the trunk somewhere, maybe I could reach it, but it won't be worth it.

I turned around, hands in the sky, ¨What do you want with me?¨

¨I want to send you and this city to burn in Hell, but you are going to lead this city to Hell.¨

To be continued in part 2

It is about 800 words, but I went for quality, and that happened with quantity, as a good story needs exposition, I thought that some tanki jokes would be amusing.

P.S. Kev, I'm sorry I had you losing a duel to the bad guy of the story, but hey, you technically won, since he left before the match finished. :P 

 

 

 

 

Edited May 19, 2015 by Quarks

[metalista123 9]

app ._.

[Quarks 2,255]

app ._.

to who

[Bugs.meeny 1,013]

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[Michalus 182]

 My homeland won't fall today

Twenty years ago on one nice Sunday evening, started bloody war between two big tank armies , between good and evil. Do not think this is a fairy tale or remote future, it is a harsh reality. Battlefield is now everywhere, but center of this massacre is one big city called Siege. Absolutely destroyed city is the main place of this war. On one side is good, and on second evil. Lot of factories, skyscrapers, highways and bridges were destroyed here, squares are full of rusty tanks and you won´t find here silence, explosions are worse than big storm full of thunders and lightning. One of the survivors is Vasili Bacnakov. He isn´t tank driver, he is a spy which is every night  send into enemy territory. He need to find hidden anti-tank mines and write down the coordinates.  Another man, which is long time surviving has name Maxim Gromushkin. He is a tank repairer. If he has good quality hammer and screwdriver, he will repair everything. And third is leader of tankist division III called Sergei Aleksandrovsk. General Fuji Sakura has created plan for the last fight called "Inferno". Good side is preparing for the last invasion of more than five thousand tanks, because Vasili has

done again great work. They must defend Siege before will arrive reinforcements.

 

14th November , 23:47 , Siege

 

Silence before the storm. Tankers of good side are preparing for big invasion. Leaders of divisions have double armored tank for better protection against every turrets. Veteran Sergei Aleksandrovsk is with his tank standing in the middle of the Kirov´s square and waiting for enemies.

 

14th November , 00:02 , Siege

 

From behind ruins of houses started flying molotovs and damaged lot of tanks. Silence turned into noise and five thousand tanks from evil side started fighting against three thousand tanks from good side.

Radio : ,, Don´t let enemies capture the city, reinforcements are on the way, ETA twenty minutes. "

Fight started. Sky was full of sparks and flashes from shots and explosion. Lead, metallic or armored tanks, nobody cares, everything was exploding. For a while, city was full of rusty tanks and very spiky rocks, so there was minimal place to move your tank. But every tanker on the good side was motivated to win this massacre. Reinforcements was near, so Sergei  has issued a special order : ...

 

( word count - 392 )

Edited May 19, 2015 by Michalus

[Bugs.meeny 1,013]

Scorran dashed through the old stone city, feeling his shirt every few minutes to be sure that his prize was still there. His lightweight silky clothes were comfortable to run in, but he couldn't go on forever. The streets were empty in the growing shadows of twilight. Alarm bells were dinging furiously because they must have found the body. He stopped to catch his breath, and heard the pounding of boots and clanging of armor that signaled his closing in pursuit. He knew it was just one man by the sound, and decided not to take the chance that the man wouldn't call for reinforcements. He slid into the darkness beside a small archway, pulled out his rusty sword, and waited for the guard to come through. When the soldier rushed past, Scorran slashed hard across his midsection. The guard looked shocked as he crashed to the ground dead. Scorran ran away from his second murder that night, fearing that others would have heard the noise. Soon he heard shouts all around, and he turned down a dark cramped alley. When he heard the soldiers still on his trail he decided to hide. Scorran scurried up a small abandoned house and hid on the moldy thatched roof. Now the sky was completely black covered in thick dark clouds. Soldiers with torches ran into the alley, and a man quickly ran from one of the houses and whispered something to the captain while pointing to the roof that Scorran was hiding on. The captain grinned wickedly and stepped forward. He shouted, "Murderer of the king and thief of the crown, you are under arrest!". Then the rain started. The rain poured down as if all the gods in the sky were weeping. It pattered on the soldiers armor filling the air with raucous music.  Scorran knew this was his last chance to escape. He slid off the roof and darted past the surprised guards. He had to make it to the city gates.  

 

word count: 332

Edited May 20, 2015 by Bugs.meeny

[TriNitroToIuene 4,765]

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DOGFIGHT WW2

 

Chapter 1- Air Raid Alert.....

 

(1942, The Second World War; RAF Squadron 83 base camp, Greece.)

    

     ‘Pilot Officers of squadron 83!’, the deep voice of the commander reverberated inside the hangar.  ‘Air Raid Alert! Prepare and Patrol 8000ft, 300-325 degrees. The riggers had done their best towards the hurricanes and the pilot officers in charge of the monoplanes rushed into action. Among the 23 pilots, Gregory Hudson, 6’1’’, 20’ too hopped inside the cramped cockpit.

     ‘Take off- Runway clear!’, As the instructions were given, the hurricanes- in single line formation, rose to the blue heavens and dispersed in patrol.

     The Nazis were planning a surprise attack on the hangar, but a spy had leaked the news to Commander Andrews, who took immediate action to defend the last airbase of the RAF in Greece.

     Hudson was keeping a hawk eye on the sky and contemplating on the futility of war. ’How wonderful the skies are!’ he reflected, gazing at the Mediterranean sky. Not much far away, he noticed two German Messerschmitt 110s were charging towards him.

     Switching on the reflector sight, Hudson calibrated the aircraft and sat stiff, experiencing rush of adrenaline and perspiration.

     The 110s were now getting closer. Hudson opened fire. The machine gun pellets zoomed through the propeller and perforated one of the enemy 110’s tail plane. Both the 110s opened fire.

     Deafening gunfire followed. Hudson managed to mow down the enemy he hit initially, but the other 110 was in the hands of an experienced pilot. As Hudson continued fire, a lucky bullet hit the foe and the Messerschmitt reeled forward and downward, patched in red on the windshield. But, that wasn’t the end.

     Reinforcements of the enemy were arriving. Hudson opened fire, but no fire opened from the iron mouth of the machine gun. Having understood that he was out of ammo, Hudson was also aware that he was almost out of fuel, and that squadron 83 base camp was 30 miles due South-South-East. He turned bearing 170 degrees towards base, but the enemies were on the trail, not far.....

 

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The Missing Piece

“It can’t be true.” he said to himself as he drove his jeep through the forest, to where his family treasure was. His name was Kurt, a tall dark haired 16 year old with dark blue eyes. When he made it to the spot, all he found was a hole.

“It’s true.” he said quietly as he stared at the empty hole. Then he saw something by the hole, half buried in leaves and sand. He pulled it up and studied it. Some of it was rubbed off, but what he could make out read

“O-ce you fi-d a-d ge- the tr---u-e, ta--it to me at th- u-derg-o-und i-nven---er’s ro-m, a-d we w-l- -sp-it   b-t -et--en the c-ew.”

What are the missing letters? He thought to himself as he turned over the paper to look on the other side. Nothing there.

 

“This is all you found? They didn’t leave anything else, just this? No footprints or tracks or anything?” His brother Mike asked after reading the note left behind by the robbers. He was 18 and little taller than his brother but had the same blue eyes.

“I don’t know, I came home as soon as I found this.” Kurt replied.

“Then what are we waiting for? Let’s go look for tracks and other clues.” Mike half-shouted

 

“See any foot prints?” Kurt asked Mike

“No I don’t s- no wait! There’s some!” Mike said as he pointed down and a little to the right. Kurt and looked in the direction Mike was pointing. He saw large boot prints that stopped after a couple yards, then tire tracks lead on for miles.

“Think we should follow them?” Kurt asked.

“Yes, I think we should. Let’s go home to pack some food and water for the trip.”

After they packed, they set off in the direction of the tracks, not knowing what was waiting for them less than a few miles away. 

 

 

Word count: 327

 

 

[Quarks 2,255]

 My homeland won't fall today

Twenty years ago on one nice Sunday evening, started bloody war between two big tank armies , between good and evil. Do not think this is a fairy tale or remote future, it is a harsh reality. Battlefield is now everywhere, but center of this massacre is one big city called Siege. Absolutely destroyed city is the main place of this war. On one side is good, and on second evil. Lot of factories, skyscrapers, highways and bridges were destroyed here, squares are full of rusty tanks and you won´t find here silence, explosions are worse than big storm full of thunders and lightning. One of the survivors is Vasili Bacnakov. He isn´t tank driver, he is a spy which is every night  send into enemy territory. He need to find hidden anti-tank mines and write down the coordinates.  Another man, which is long time surviving has name Maxim Gromushkin. He is a tank repairer. If he has good quality hammer and screwdriver, he will repair everything. And third is leader of tankist division III called Sergei Aleksandrovsk. General Fuji Sakura has created plan for the last fight called "Inferno". Good side is preparing for the last invasion of more than five thousand tanks, because Vasili has

done again great work. They must defend Siege before will arrive reinforcements.

 

14th November , 23:47 , Siege

 

Silence before the storm. Tankers of good side are preparing for big invasion. Leaders of divisions have double armored tank for better protection against every turrets. Veteran Sergei Aleksandrovsk is with his tank standing in the middle of the Kirov´s square and waiting for enemies.

 

14th November , 00:02 , Siege

 

From behind ruins of houses started flying molotovs and damaged lot of tanks. Silence turned into noise and five thousand tanks from evil side started fighting against three thousand tanks from good side.

Radio : ,, Don´t let enemies capture the city, reinforcements are on the way, ETA twenty minutes. "

Fight started. Sky was full of sparks and flashes from shots and explosion. Lead, metallic or armored tanks, nobody care, everything was exploding. For a while, city was full of rusty tanks and very spiky rocks, so there was minimal place to move your tank. But every tanker on the good side was motivated to win this massacre. Reinforcements was near, so Sergei  has issued a special order : ...

 

( word count - 392 )

this is not about Tanki, right??????

cause it looks like that to me.

Edited May 14, 2015 by Quarks

[Michalus 182]

this is not about Tanki, right??????

cause it looks like that to me.

Story isn´t game, but there are words from game because I wanted them there :)

[Quarks 2,255]

Story isn´t game, but there are words from game because I wanted them there :)

OK, decent idea, I like mine more, not biased.  B)  B)  B)

[kedar2 28]

Keep me reserved

Edited May 15, 2015 by kedar2

[kedar2 28]

My World Of Souls

 

My soul is going to walk out on me one of these days. I’m sure of it. That damn soul is going to walk out of me, and go some place else. It’s going to shrug me off the way we shrug off our rain coats, overcoats and Ulster coats. Ah the Ulster, such an elegant garment. I remember my mom owned one. Hers was a black velvet thing cinched at the waist. She had inherited it from her mother. She called it allester. She also called cheese cheech. Her rustic Indian English used to get on my nerves. I didn’t know then she’d pawned her jewelry to put me in the Convent school.

 

 

My mother was beautiful and carried a scent around her that only someone from an old family could possess. She had many old things; stuff she’d inherited and which were still around, not sold or pawned. That Ulster Coat was one. I wanted it. I wanted my mom’s smell too, and her thick long black hair, her soft belly, her sheer marble-like skin. But I could hardly get near her. And because I couldn’t get near her I foraged among her clothes. I once slyly and hurriedly wore an English lace blouse she used to wear before she became a married woman and put on weight. She used to be slim hipped as a girl, but had boobs. I thought I was old enough to fit into the spaces where her boobs went in.

 

 

 

It’s a strange feeling: me looking back at her to a time when I didn’t even exist. My soul wrenches when I do that, much like the raw chicken leg you twist and turn and finally wrench free of the carcass. And I am sure my soul will walk out one of these days. I won’t be dead after that. I’ll look at the back of my soul walking away. I’ll feel empty in a place, the way, I assume, an apple feels after it has been cored. And I’ll keep thinking of my mother and how she lived. Always thinking of dying, and wanting it so desperately, but always condemning suicide as the worst sin a soul could commit. Poor thing. She should have gotten rid of her soul instead.

Word Counts:-383

Edited May 15, 2015 by kedar2

[OscarWatkins 64]

 

 

 

 

Part I: The Unknown Danger

James Howard Ford found himself in an awfully familiar room. All its walls were furnished in white paint, at the wall opposite to the entrance hung a picture of a man very much familiar to James, it must have been him, of course, just when he felt blood rush his head.

He quickly recalled how he was tossed onto the floor easily by two masked thugs, his big head went to work.

“Who were they? Why did they want him?”, James asked himself just when he suddenly hit his shirt pocket,” it was gone!” The only thing that proved the years he spent in the lab was not a waste. He searched everywhere; he put his plump arms into his deep pockets only to assured that it was missing. The pen drive was nowhere to be found. He rose from the floor, made for the door trying to open it but failed. It was locked from the outside, probably chained to the door handle judging from the loud cling.

Suddenly, the door opened as James flew away from the area onto the floor, again, with a loud thud. As a moment of intense fear engulfed the brain of scientist, two masked men entered into the small office; outside he saw a fuzzy vision of several masked men searching his lab, and next to the corner were his colleagues made squat with their hands behind their heads.

“Where is it?”, growled the bulky man. As from the effect of the hit, James suddenly blacked out.

“We need to take him to safety, Oliver”, came the voice from the second person. She reached out her hand and placed it onto James’ neck.

“He’s lost conscious. Could you be more careful next time?”

“How was I to know he stood by the doorway, Jenna?”

“Arrgh! Men.”, said Jenna with a sense of distaste. 

 

 

 

 

[OscarWatkins 64]

Welcome to the second edition of continue the story! If you have not heard about this contest before, you can find all the previous chapters of the first edition in the newspaper archive. The final product is here:

 

http://en.tankiforum.com/index.php?showtopic=236842

 

The idea is for you, the readers, to write the entire story. Each issue will ask for a new chapter to be written, as a continuation to the winning chapter form the previous issue. As this is the first chapter, you can write about literally anything you want! (Within reason)

 

The winner will receive a 50,000 crystal reward, and the recognition of their extract being featured in the next issue.

 

Your entry will be judged on the following, in order of importance:

• It must be your own work, completely original.
• Content - it must be interesting, and something that has potential to continue on to be a great story.
• Quality of writing.

Furthermore, to emphasise quality over quantity, there is an informal word limit of 500 words. Slightly over is acceptable, but not too long please! Make every word count!

 

Deadline is 20th May! Late entries may not be considered!

 

Other notable entries will receive a 10,000 consolation prize.

 

Good luck!

Is there a minimum word limit? 

[1stsuperwhitedragon 408]

Is there a minimum word limit?

no but for me, it's 300 my minimum limit

[Darren4Turbo 4,913]

The Marvel Story

 

 

One upon a time, Flash (me) and Robin (1stsuperwhitedragon) just stopped a bad guy robbing a bank. After, we head back to the base and Batman (scarlet_shahid), Wonder Woman (navi613) & Superman (TheLostLegend) said that they need to stop their archenemy again, The Legend of Doom. "Again?!" Robin said. "Yep, again: because he escaped from prison." "Oh." I said. So we all headed out and we tracked his footprints to the sewer. "Ew!" Karate Kid (Penguin40) said,"it's disgusting down there!" "As usual," I said,"but it stinks." As soon as we all went down there, it was so strange because it wasn't stinky or nasty. It was all clean and it had arrows on the walls. "What does it say??" I asked. Then Robin replied,"'This way to our base'. How interesting..." So we all followed the arrows & we got lost because we went to different tunnels. So we all ran and we suddenly crashed to each other! "Hey, get off of me!" Wonder Woman said. "Sorry but your face is on mine," Robin said. "Hey guys," Batman and Superman said," keep it down." Then we all kept quiet, stood up and followed them and the strange voices until we stopped for no reason. "Keep moving." I said but Robin said it wasn't a good idea. "If we advance further then they will see us and it's not necessary yet." So we stayed kind of behind the corner and listened to their conversation and looked at them without them looking at us. "Finally," said The Legend of Doom,"the past portal is ready to go and all fixed." "Good!" replied a voice we do not know,"in a few hours, we will enter that portal and destroy those three people before they became heroes so nothing will be in our way!" "Which heroes are they talking about?" I whispered. "I don't know," Robin said,"but I don't like it." "Neither do I," said Batman and Wonder Woman. "Who are we talking about, Time Trapper?" said TLD. Time Trapper?? We have never heard of him before... "You know, Superman, Wonder Woman and Batman!" "That does it!!" said Robin. Before he even entered Robin angrily threw a bomb at him but the Time Trapper dodged it and it hit the portal instead. "Ah!" he exclaimed,"we were just talking about you earlier!" Then he pointed his laser beam at us but we all dodged it then Robin was hit by it indirectly. Then Batman, Wonder Woman and Superman were electrified before they even reach him. I tried to stop all of them but I failed because the Time Trapped stopped me. "Nice try, the Avengers," he said,"but I have lots of stuff to do, so ta-ta! Prepare the portal!" They replaced the destroyed one with the real one!! What?! It was fake all this time! Then Karate Kid kick TT before he even entered so he pushed him back hard and ran to the portal. "You won't get away with this!" Karate Kid said. "I already have!" TT said as he disappeared in the portal. Then Robin and I went in there one second before it was turned off. While we try to stop him, the others have to deal with the rest.

To be continued
Words counted: 543

Edited May 15, 2015 by Darren4Turbo

[1stsuperwhitedragon 408]

 

 

The Marvel Story

 

One upon a time, Flash (me) and Robin (1stsuperwhitedragon) just stopped a bad guy robbing a bank. After, we head back to the base and Batman (scarlet_shahid), Wonder Woman (navi613) & Superman (TheLostLegend) said that they need to stop their archenemy again, The Legend of Doom. "Again?!" Robin said. "Yep, again: because he escaped from prison." "Oh." I said. So we all headed out and we tracked his footprints to the sewer. "Ew!" Karate Kid (Penguin40) said,"it's disgusting down there!" "As usual," I said,"but it stinks." As soon as we all went down there, it was so strange because it wasn't stinky or nasty. It was all clean and it had arrows on the walls. "What does it say??" I asked. Then Robin replied,"'This way to our base'. How interesting..." So we all followed the arrows & we got lost because we went to different tunnels. So we all ran and we suddenly crashed to each other! "Hey, get off of me!" Wonder Woman said. "Sorry but your face is on mine," Robin said. "Hey guys," Batman and Superman said," keep it down." Then we all kept quiet, stood up and followed them and the strange voices until we stopped for no reason. "Keep moving." I said but Robin said it wasn't a good idea. "If we advance further then they will see us and it's not necessary yet." So we stayed kind of behind the corner and listened to their conversation and looked at them without them looking at us. "Finally," said The Legend of Doom,"the past portal is ready to go and all fixed." "Good!" replied a voice we do not know,"in a few hours, we will enter that portal and destroy those three people before they became heroes so nothing will be in our way!" "Which heroes are they talking about?" I whispered. "I don't know," Robin said,"but I don't like it." "Neither do I," said Batman and Wonder Woman. "Who are we talking about, Time Trapper?" said TLD. Time Trapper?? We have never heard of him before... "You know, Superman, Wonder Woman and Batman!" "That does it!!" said Robin. Before he even entered Robin angrily threw a bomb at him but the Time Trapper dodged it and it hit the portal instead. "Ah!" he exclaimed,"we were just talking about you earlier!" Then he pointed his laser beam at us but we all dodged it then Robin was hit by it indirectly. Then Batman, Wonder Woman and Superman were electrified before they even reach him. I tried to stop all of430 them but I failed because the Time Trapped stopped me. "Nice try, the Avengers," he said,"but I have lots of stuff to do, so ta-ta! Prepare the portal!" They replaced the destroyed one with the real one!! What?! It was fake all this time! Then Karate Kid kick TT before he even entered so he pushed him back hard and ran to the portal. "You won't get away with this!" Karate Kid said. "I already have!" TT said as he disappeared in the portal. Then Robin and I went in there one second before it was turned off. While we try to stop him, the others have to deal with the rest.

 

To be continued

Words counted: 543

awesome! did you read my story?

[Quarks 2,255]

Have fun reading all of these Kirby, it should be a ... blast ...  :lol:

[kedar2 28]

Can we write 2 storys ?? 

Edited May 16, 2015 by kedar2

[sachin02 2]

Bee In A Cloud

My sister Bink turned twenty-six two weeks ago. It wasn’t easy to pry her out of her room for her party and cake and the present Dad bought at Big!Lots. The truth is Bink hadn’t been out of her room for at least three years. She agreed to a bath but screamed the whole time. It took me and DJ and Little Crisp and Dad to hold her down in the tub. I lifted her belly flap and Little Crisp washed under with the wash cloth while Bink screamed. Dad sang the horse song then Bink simmered down and sang along as Dad scrubbed her poof of thin pink hair.

 

Luckily none of the birthday guests could hear. It was hard enough to cram four extra people into our kitchen. They ate DJ’s party snacks—bologna with spray-on cheese smiley faces a bowl of Bac-O-Bits raw hot dogs on sticks that were really yellow straws with bendy tops and punch he mixed in a bucket starring a giant can of Hawaiian fruit punch vanilla ice cream and little marshmallows. DJ was the house cook and he did pretty good for a six year old. You couldn’t complain. Seriously you couldn’t. One time I hid a pork chop under the couch and DJ found it and bit me on the thigh. That kid’s teeth are sharp. The bite got infected and stayed full of puss all summer.

 

Bink whimpered as Little Crisp and Dad got her dressed. Dad slipped her wings on but the elastics twisted and Bink said they pinched her arm fats. Little Crisp sat on Bink’s stomach as Dad struggled to pull up her socks and tie her shoes. Each time Dad got one tied Bink kicked it off. She ended up wearing just the one. Then Little Crisp dried Bink’s hair with the hair dryer that looked like a Martian gun until it puffed up all around her head.

DJ refused to entertain the party guests and was outside riding his Disney Princess bike in ever widening circles out of the yard and down the street and back. Dad put the cake in front of Bink and she blew out the candles. She knocked her birthday present off the table with her arm. Dad said “Happy birthday Bink. You look real pretty today.” Bink shoved a handful of cake in her mouth. Aunt Lucy said “It’s true Bink you look young as ever.” Uncle Lou looked at his feet. Cousins Eldon and Bethany made faces at each other as Bink opened the present. It was a blond wig with bangs and a black head band permanently attached. Everyone took turns trying it on and laughing at each other and when Little Crisp finally pulled it over Bink’s head Dad took pictures and made everyone say CHEESE. No one knew where DJ had got off too. We looked outside for him but couldn’t find him anywhere. We’re still waiting for him to come home.

 

Word Count : 500

Yay! My Frist Post Ever

Edited May 16, 2015 by sachin02

[Armoured_Phoenix 294]

            WITHIN THEIR HOPES

 

Chapter One:Memory's Findings

"Darren!!Darren jump now!!Jupm!!"
Those words were echoing in his mind as he opened his eyes. But he was still half conscious.
He was not aware of his surroundings yet. He sat down to regain his strength and tried to
remember what happened. Then he remembered that he jumped from his ship. His mind slowly came to senses. His body had a few scratches from falling.

Colonel David found himself in some sort of a forest. He saw a black cloud of smoke rising
from the West. That was his ship......burning to ashes. He slowly started to remember how he
ended up there. He needed to regroup but his equipment was lost. He knew staying there longer would be dangerous, so he started moving to the East in hope to meet with other members ofthe team. He remembered that Captain White jumped before him so he won't be far from him. He knew Officer Darren, Captain White and Major Golden all needed his help."Were they even alive?" A strange thought came to his mind. He shook his head...as he knew they were not so easy to take down.

He was in hostile territory. Moving through a forest while remaining undetected was not so
easy, but he was a veteran of war. He passed by several enemy search patrols undetected. Just as he was crossing a cave, a flashback occurred:
 
"Captain White, have you located Officer Navi yet?""We received some binary codes through
our low frequency radar.""Did you trace its location?""Yes sir, it was transmitted
from a village near the enemy's base camp. We believe it's her.""Don't jump to conclusions so
easily Captain, has the massage been decoded?""Darren's working on it Sir.""OK then Where's Turbo?"

The flashback ended, he was on a field now. He saw a backpack there. David rushed towards it. It belonged to Officer Darren. But where was Darren himself? Probably caught by enemy patrols. He hoped that the same fate was not of Captain white and Turbo. He searched in the backpack and found the decoded message sent by Navi. The message said:

"The object V is to be transported at 2300 hours from base camp to experimental facility
it will pass near those coordinates N80 S45.5 E74.3 W13.54 we must strike and obtain object
V at all costs. That tech will change the tide of war. It’s our only hope now."

Colonel David stood there confused. He located the coordinates and he was five miles from
that location. But why that object V was so important? Was it a trap? His mind confronted with
 his own thoughts. Soon another flashback occurred:

"Where's Turbo?""Sir he left alone to rescue Officer Navi.""What?He disobeyed my orders again?"
Alarm goes off.

"Captain White what's happening?""Sir the enemy is upon us. Five formations are advancing to our position.""That's impossible!!our radar must have spotted them.""What are your orders Colonel?"
"Prepare to engage, White Darren Golden!!come to my ship,we will give them a hard time if they want to invade our land."

New memory made him more confused. Was he to save his comrades or to get Object V? Time was running short, he had to make a choice. Finally, making up his mind, he stood up saying:
                                                     "I'll not let their hopes down."

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Edited May 19, 2015 by Armoured_Phoenix

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            WITHIN THEIR HOPES

 

Chapter One:Double Minded

 

"Darren!!Darren jump now!!Jupm!!"

Those words were echoing in his mind as he opened his eyes.But he was still half concious

as his brain was still dizzy,vision blurry and focus lost.He was not aware of his 

surroundings yet.He tried to stand up but his legs trembled and he had to sit down to 

regain his strength and tried to remember what happened.Then he remembered that his

condition was due to the pain reliver he took before......and he remembered,he jumped from

his ship.The effects of the pain releiver were wearing off and he gained full conciousness.

His body had a few scratches from falling.

 

Colonel David found himself in some sort of a

forest.He saw a black cloud of smoke rising from the West.That was his ship......no longer

the fear of skies but a pile of rubble and burned metal and ash.He slowly started to 

remember how he ended up there.He needed to regroup but he had no equipment with him.he

knew staying there longer would be dangerous,so he started moving to the East as in hope

to meet with other members of the team.He remembered that Captain White jumped before him

so he won't be far from him.He knew Officer Darren,Captain White and Major Golden all 

needed his help."But are they even alive?" A strange thought came to his mind.He shook his

head...as he knew they were not so easy to take down.

 

They were in hostile territory.Moving through an enemy crouded forest while remaining

undetected was not an easy task,but the camoflauge was doing it's job well.He passed

through several enemy search patrols and they could not notice their primary target getting

away right under their noses.Just as he was crossing a cave,a flashback occured:

  

"Captain White,have you located Officer Navi yet?""We recieved some binary codes through

our low frequency radar.""Did you trace it's location Captain?""Yes sir,it was transmitted

from a village near the enemy's base camp.We beleive it's her.""Don't jump to conclusions so

easily Captain,has the massage been decoded?""Officer Darren's working on it Sir.""Where's

Captain Turbo?"

 

As the flashback finished,he was on a grassy patch,no trees there.He saw a backpack there

lying alone.David rushed towards it.It belonged to Officer Darren.But where was Darren

himself?Probably caught by enemy patrols.He hoped that the same fate was not of Captain

white and Turbo.But he knew he could do more than just hoping.He searched in the backpack

and found the decoded message sent by Navi.The message said:

"The object V is to be traslocated at 2300 hours from base camp to experimental facility

it will pass near those coordinates N80 S45.5 E74.3 W13.54 we must strike and obtain object

V at all costs.Do not come for me,that tech will change the tide of war.It's our only

hope now."

 

Colonel David stood there confused.He located the coordinates and he was five miles from

that locatoin.But why that object V was so important that Navi had to give up her location?

Was it a trap?His mind confronted with his own thoughts.Soon another flashback occured:

"Where's Captain Turbo?""I'm afraid Sir but he left alone to rescue Officer Navi.""What?

He disobeyed my orders again?If he makes it out of there alive I'll kill him myself."Alarm

goes off."Captain White what's happening""Sir the enemy is upon us sir.Five formations are

advancing on our positon.""That's impossible!!our radar must have spotted them.""Sir what

are your orders?""Prepare to engage,White Darren Golden!!come to my ship,we will give them 

a hard time invading our land."

 

His mind was still unclear.The sun was about set.He could save his fellow comrades or

obtain object V.Mind divided by two options.He cleared his mind and focused on the best way

to follow.He was double minded and could not focus.But he remembered who he was and for

whom he served,his country and freedom.At last he stood up and made his mind saying:

                          "I'll not let their hopes die.I'll do what's best for everyone."

 

Good Story dude  :)

[1stsuperwhitedragon 408]

 

WITHIN THEIR HOPES

 

Chapter One:Double Minded

 

"Darren!!Darren jump now!!Jupm!!"

Those words were echoing in his mind as he opened his eyes.But he was still half concious

as his brain was still dizzy,vision blurry and focus lost.He was not aware of his

surroundings yet.He tried to stand up but his legs trembled and he had to sit down to

regain his strength and tried to remember what happened.Then he remembered that his

condition was due to the pain reliver he took before......and he remembered,he jumped from

his ship.The effects of the pain releiver were wearing off and he gained full conciousness.

His body had a few scratches from falling.

 

Colonel David found himself in some sort of a

forest.He saw a black cloud of smoke rising from the West.That was his ship......no longer

the fear of skies but a pile of rubble and burned metal and ash.He slowly started to

remember how he ended up there.He needed to regroup but he had no equipment with him.he

knew staying there longer would be dangerous,so he started moving to the East as in hope

to meet with other members of the team.He remembered that Captain White jumped before him

so he won't be far from him.He knew Officer Darren,Captain White and Major Golden all

needed his help."But are they even alive?" A strange thought came to his mind.He shook his

head...as he knew they were not so easy to take down.

 

They were in hostile territory.Moving through an enemy crouded forest while remaining

undetected was not an easy task,but the camoflauge was doing it's job well.He passed

through several enemy search patrols and they could not notice their primary target getting

away right under their noses.Just as he was crossing a cave,a flashback occured:

 

"Captain White,have you located Officer Navi yet?""We recieved some binary codes through

our low frequency radar.""Did you trace it's location Captain?""Yes sir,it was transmitted

from a village near the enemy's base camp.We beleive it's her.""Don't jump to conclusions so

easily Captain,has the massage been decoded?""Officer Darren's working on it Sir.""Where's

Captain Turbo?"

 

As the flashback finished,he was on a grassy patch,no trees there.He saw a backpack there

lying alone.David rushed towards it.It belonged to Officer Darren.But where was Darren

himself?Probably caught by enemy patrols.He hoped that the same fate was not of Captain

white and Turbo.But he knew he could do more than just hoping.He searched in the backpack

and found the decoded message sent by Navi.The message said:

"The object V is to be traslocated at 2300 hours from base camp to experimental facility

it will pass near those coordinates N80 S45.5 E74.3 W13.54 we must strike and obtain object

V at all costs.Do not come for me,that tech will change the tide of war.It's our only

hope now."

 

Colonel David stood there confused.He located the coordinates and he was five miles from

that locatoin.But why that object V was so important that Navi had to give up her location?

Was it a trap?His mind confronted with his own thoughts.Soon another flashback occured:

"Where's Captain Turbo?""I'm afraid Sir but he left alone to rescue Officer Navi.""What?

He disobeyed my orders again?If he makes it out of there alive I'll kill him myself."Alarm

goes off."Captain White what's happening""Sir the enemy is upon us sir.Five formations are

advancing on our positon.""That's impossible!!our radar must have spotted them.""Sir what

are your orders?""Prepare to engage,White Darren Golden!!come to my ship,we will give them

a hard time invading our land."

 

His mind was still unclear.The sun was about set.He could save his fellow comrades or

obtain object V.Mind divided by two options.He cleared his mind and focused on the best way

to follow.He was double minded and could not focus.But he remembered who he was and for

whom he served,his country and freedom.At last he stood up and made his mind saying:

"I'll not let their hopes die.I'll do what's best for everyone."

nice. who's captain white?

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nice. who's captain white?

You  :P