Contest [Issue 36] Continue the Story... Returns! [Chapter 3]

[1stsuperwhitedragon 408]

It's not even 400 :P I had exams k

And please, call me praty. Nitro is my new nickname. And, even if you want to give a nickname to that nickname (pun?), then call me TNT

you're reminding me of ExplodingTNT on YouTube

[History-boy 0]

inner turths

chapter-3; Reality and confusion

 

   He closed the door and i didnt knew what happened he slowly closed the door and get out from the home and he went and he go to some where to make druggs businesse but still that i dont remeber anything .

    ??? i dont remeber anything about happene after ''sleep.he went to  some one else's home and the man make the plan  to do with the gun.

 I wake up and told where was he'' was so scardie told where were is he. While i was thinking its like i is  like drugged and felt down i did'nt knew what happened  he finally knew that some one give druggs to him and while he knew it i went near the mirror and watch the mirror in my backbone some of the attacks are  there hurted. ''''damn i shouted very louder i was scard and  i went near the door and try to open the door OMG the door is locked i shouted 5 times and i cried and telling some body same me...

 

 God dman the i say the hammer

 ahhh ha he knew to do something with the hammer

 I took the hammer and hit the door with hammer. after i break the door ran very faster and get out of the house. warggggdruuushh''''''

  Finally i get out of there and went to my real home told everything about that bussnies  to my brother.

   my brother was an police men.

My brother told that he  must stop that dangerous drug dealer that bussiness men was an mexico dangerous drugg dealer but my brother told me that he cannot catch that busennse man cuz he dont have any full eveidence to catch.The drugg dealer was one of the person who get out of the prison my brother told. police mens younger brother was so hungry so mu brother  gave me something to eat and my younger brother thx the police men who was mybrother.

  finally they the polices saw that death man will they catch them but that evil business man ran once again will the police stop them.

      to 435words

Edited July 18, 2015 by History-boy

[History-boy 0]

i check my spelling mistake also :D

[1stsuperwhitedragon 408]

i check my spelling mistake also :D

it's chapter/part 3, not 1

[TriNitroToIuene 4,765]

 

Nope, you have to continue the story given on the first page, not make your own.

[1stsuperwhitedragon 408]

 

inner turths

chapter-3; Reality and confusion

 

The man closed the door and the boy didnt knew what happened the man slowly closed the door and get out from the home and the man went and the man go to some where to make druggs businesse but still that boy dont remeber anything .

??? the boy dont remeber anything about happene after ''sleep. The man went to some one else's home and the man make the plan to do with the gun.

Boy wake up and told where was he'' was so scard he told where were is he . While he was thinking its like he is like drugged and felt down he did'nt knew what happened he finally knew that some one give druggs to him and while he knew it he went near the mirror and watch the mirror in his backbone some of the attacks are there hurted. ''''damn he shouted very louder he was scard and he went near the door and try to open the door OMG the door is locked he shouted 5 times and he cried and telling some body same me...

 

God dman the boy say the hammer

ahhh ha he knew to do something with the hammer

the boy took the hammer and hit the door with hammer. after he break the door ran very faster and get out of the house. warggggdruuushh''''''

Finally he get out of there and went to his real home told everything about that bussnies to his brother.

his brother was an police men.

His brother told that he must stop that dangerous drug dealer that bussiness men was an mexico dangerous drugg dealer but his brother told him that he cannot catch that busennse man cuz he dont have any full eveidence to catch.The drugg dealer was one of the person who get out of the prison his brother told. police mens younger brother was so hungry so his brother gave him something to eat and his younger brother thx the police men who was his brother.

finally they the polices saw that death man will they catch them but that evil business man ran once again will the police stop them.

to 435words

you were suppose to say "I/me/my", not "he/him/his" unless you mean the other person

 

Edited July 16, 2015 by 1stsuperwhitedragon

[deadmanrising 715]

Inner truths

 

Part 3: Retaliation

 

As he continued shutting the door my heart began to fill with displeasure; an uncomfortable type of feeling, a feeling that I don’t think I have ever experienced before. I kept on asking myself “What could I have possibly have done to deserve such pondering?”

 

The man in particular had a trendy accent, most probably Spanish, he looked very angry and agitated; not the type of person any guy would want to mess with...

 

I started to lash out at the man, “Why am I here? What do you want?!”

 

But he simply just kept on walking, never before have I felt so intimidated.

 

 As I started to tremble in my frustrations the man finally spoke, “You have something that belongs to me”.

 

At first I have no idea what he’s talking about, then all of a sudden I have these terrible thoughts flowing through my head, “That money I found, perhaps that’s what he’s after”,  as I shook in fear I started spewing all the money I had from my pockets, perhaps that’s what he was after right?

 

“Enough! I am not after your money; you have something that I need”

 

Ok so he’s after something, but what? First i get attacked by a boy, hit by a grenade and now this? At this point i started to believe that i would never make it out here alive, I should have never have stumbled upon here.

 

As i continue to grow nervous, he suddenly grabs me by my throat; never before have I been so desperate, he shows me a picture, “You see this! They take my daughter away from me!” What could I have possibly done to have his daughter kidnapped? My face began to flow a river of tears, tensions were raising, never before have the stakes been so high.

 

“You give money to them, so they release my daughter, you hear!”

 

Agitated, I nodded yes, he then threw me against the wall, letting go. My head tried to come to terms with all this; that boy that attacked me; could he have been associated with some sort of group? How will I pay off these notorious anonymous criminals? How do I know who they are? I knew what was to come next would be terrifying; something I have never ventured into before that would require me to become something no one has seen before, never the less, I knew a life was on the line, a race against time itself.

 

The man anxiously pointed towards a path i could take through the dark, empty void of space surrounding the corridor. I started to make my way.

 

As i did, his last words were

 

“May God be with you”

 

I knew this man meant well, I replied yes, indeed

 

I began what could be the last day of my life; here I go, to in and beyond...

[ericjung144 2]

Inner Truths

 

Chapter 3 - Demand

 

 

 

“So why are you here?” gazing at me.

 

“I was just following a boy and I came here…well I didn’t came here with a special purpose.”

 

“Well… before talking more I will ensure that if you lie, I will stab you.” he said with a menacing voice.

 

He came closer with his knife up. I tremble with fear and in a horrified tone I said everything that I suppose not to do. 

 

“I… I am a spy, gathering information about your group. But I will never say anything something I know about you.”

 

He listened to my announcement and became silent. He put his knife down and cough so loudly that made me so terrify. For a moment, the wind blew across made me chill. Soon, he calmly suggested in a rough voice.

 

“I didn’t intend to kill you or stab you…but I want you to follow me and confess everything about your group planing now. We’ve already prepared a money for you.”

 

He show me the pack of money. The money worth billions of dollars.

 

I thought for a long time.

Edited July 17, 2015 by ericjung144

[VxV 40]

INNER TRUTH

PART THREE   :   APPREHENSION

 

 

 

The man urge me to converse.Though I was in the state of panic and hesitation,but I try to hide the signs of my consternation.My trembling body and diminishing sense made me languish in front of man.My hands were locked up!

 

"Wait! My gun! Where is it?" I wonder in anxiety.

"Well! Well! Well! See who we got here! A delicate rat!" The man proceeds in an oppressive way.Moreover,the environment switches his dampen words to a crescendo which adds up more agitation to my emotions.It's like a horror film turning to be true.

 

The man wore a bandanna on his head,which personifies him to a brutal terrorist or an abandon soldier.It seems that I have been kept somewhere in an isolated location ,possesses no signs of life."May be a desert or a jungle...."All these anticipations made me anxious.My mind became vacuous,no idea hitting my intellect.Ah.....

 

"You don't know what you've done for me" He interrupts with sympathy in his words.I could see the glimpse of his face through the dimming light,his eyes constantly staring at me.His change in attitude puts me in surprise as this was beyond my expectations.What is he intending to manifest,hostility or hospitality.

 

"You killed the boy! bravo! you did a great job...." There was no sorrow in his expressions as if he really intends to kill the boy.Then why he locked me up in this prison....I was still obscure to determine the situation.

 

"No! No sir! you are misunderstanding ,this is not what you thinking....." I replied,forcing my lips,keeping my tone soft and gentle to retain him calm as I was expecting him to burst of into flames by perceiving the answer in "yes".Though in reality,I hardly remember anything after taking out my gun."Did I really killed the boy ?"I question myself.

 

"Calm down! Don't worry boy! You really did a great job...,now tell what would you like to eat?" He ask with affection and I was like ,astonished! What is this man.First he interrogate on boy's killing and now food!...

I refused;though I was starving from hunger."No! No thanks! But why you kept me here?" I manage to ask;hoping this is the right time.I sigh,feeling exultation in my heart.

"You'll get to know it soon! He answered in composure and so as my hope diminishes.I have no words to say.

 

I try to accumulate my memory.Suddenly,something clicks my mind.The grenade!...,and I quickly assert my thoughts.

"You make good jokes...." The man chuckles.I don't know why he pretends to be unaware? Wait! Is he hiding something?

 

Suddenly,a sound like siren disintegrates in the middle of our ongoing conversation.A young boy quickly enters in haste;seems to be his attendant or a sycophant.The whole scenario changed.He whisper something into the man's ear.The man starts to mutter under his breath and they both left the place in rush.The man seems to be in  pressure.What this could be?A call,a warn....or may be a rescue! I delightedly hope.But if not?.....

 

The place now became silent....What should I do now? I start to plumb.

  

 

  

Edited July 18, 2015 by VxV

[History-boy 0]

nice story c-o-o-l-e-r-1

[1stsuperwhitedragon 408]

About 2 days left

[TriNitroToIuene 4,765]

I got 5 upvotes and 5 downvotes :O

[1stsuperwhitedragon 408]

I got 5 upvotes and 5 downvotes :O

?!

[manish17 1,085]

INNER TRUTHS 
PART THREE - ASTONISHMENT
 
 
The man seemed shady to me, for the dark complexion of his face, the well-visible scar on his forehead and mostly for the knife which he had grasped tightly between his fingers.  Settling down on the edge of the cot once again, I became curious about what would follow. The man slowly came walking towards me. For a moment I became asleep but was again awakened by the deep sound of his footsteps.
 
He stopped and said, “If you want to stay alive, then just give me the information which I ask for. “  
 
I was astonished. What information did he wish to know? Did he know me? Could he answer the questions about my past? The man continued.
“Tell me about 47-36-25!  Did Clarke send you here? How do you know Gratiano? Tell me and I might set you free! “
 
Honestly, I could not answer any of his questions. They made no sense at all to me. My brain did not work. Again he said something but I started feeling drowsy and I could not hear half of his words. I could see him shouting angrily at me and threatening me with his knife. I managed to recover myself within a few seconds. Suddenly the man made a peculiar face and he coughed like an old man. I thought that he would vomit. He lost his balance and fell down. Everything was silent again.
 
I stood up, walked towards him and checked his pulse only to assure myself that he was dead. I was shocked. Again, I recalled something.
 
An old man was sitting on a wheel-chair with his open eyes stuck towards me. Everything was silent except for my sobs and I could see the old man being taken away by a woman. I could not recall whether the old man was dead or alive, but by the extent of my emotions, he seemed to be someone very close to me. I tried to recall more about that old man but was interrupted by a sound.
 
It was coming from the steel door. My head quickly turned there and then the door was opened. A beam of sunlight entered into the room making it brighten once again. At the door, stood a young man with beads of perspiration which appeared on his forehead.
 
“Hurry Up! Come with me, we must get out of here. “The young man said.
 
“But who are you? And tell me who I am and what am I doing here! “I asked him.
 
 “I will answer all your questions but first we must go to a safe place. Come on! “He replied.
 
He seemed to know everything about my past and I assured myself that I could trust him. I quickly stood up and followed him. I snatched the knife from the hands of the dead man thinking that they might serve help to me at a later stage.

 

The young man took me to an inn known as Hadley’s Inn. When I went inside, I came to know that the inn actually belonged to me. The young man asked me to take a bath in the shower inside. I abided by his instructions. Then I was served good food to eat and then had a sound sleep. The next day I came to know the answers to all my questions…

Edited July 19, 2015 by manish17xxx

[PunchLine_the_crazy 1]

Chapter 3 - Hearing

 

I don´t know what i´ve make,try to kill stranger or first peacfully talking with him.But i decide that at first talk with him."Who you are sir?"I asked him.It´s secret,I can´t tell you.So tell me why you are here?I´m here therefore, in order find out what happened before a week sooner than your tank exploded?Of course!In this tank was pretty much crystals.It was rewards for our soldiers returning from battle field.What happened that you managed destroyed?They was in superriority and stronger than you are waiting,maybe they longer prepared to us.Well but you have me to describe precisely.It was on territory called Farm,between territory Factory and Forest,there were four enemy tanks which received information about our way by traitor from our team.And who was the traitor.One of our tank mechanik probably,but i missed accuse him because we are already go to fight.Something else what you want to say?No,it´s all what i remember.Well,when you remember for something tell it the guard.

 

Word count:187 word

 

Sorry for my bad english  :D,i´m from Slovakia. 

[Flexoo 6,980]

I got 5 upvotes and 5 downvotes :o

you can say thanks to history boy and his friends/alts for it, probably he thinks number of upvotes are being judged :)

Edited July 19, 2015 by Flexoo

[TriNitroToIuene 4,765]

you can say thanks to history boy and his friends/alts for it, probably he thinks number of upvotes are being judged :)

If Rem is judging it, he probably just did me a favour :P I remember Rem once saying upvotes could count against you..... or maybe it's my optimistic imagination :lol:

[greyat 2,972]

If Rem is judging it, he probably just did me a favour :P I remember Rem once saying upvotes could count against you..... or maybe it's my optimistic imagination :lol:

The reputation of a post should play no role at all in judging... and will not.

Edited July 19, 2015 by greyat

[blackflag444 256]

Part 3-

Interrogations

 

 

It was a good thing I was on my cot. I was suddenly feeling drowsy... I wasn't sure if it was because of the smell of those retched socks, or one of these people- no. One of these monsters.

 

I cradled my head in my hands which were trembling with fear. “W-What do you want with me?”, I said in such a weak voice, it seemed like a whisper compared to an ant's footstep. He turned, and smirked such a devilish grin that made me want to have another migraine instead of looking at it.

 

“Answers”, he replied.

 

“Who the hell are you?”, I asked, my whole body trembling anger.

 

“Now, now, you're in no position to ask questions”, he replied. He stepped into the light, and I realised he was the stranger I saw when I answered the door.

 

I noticed he had greasy black hair, big, muscular arms, and a crazy look on his face. I was suddenly consumed in rage, and I stampeded him with new found strength. It was as if he knew I'd do that, and it was all part of some sort of plan. He instantly reacted and slapped me, showing just how strong he was. It was only a slap to the face, but it hurt more than a million bee stings. I doubled over and felt like vomiting, and then more visions popped up. This time, they were all much more vivid.... and more disturbing.

 

The ground was littered with at least 10, limp bodies. All dead. And I couldn't help but wonder if I did this. A shiver went down my spine. Not because of the dead bodies, but... there was someone standing right behind me. The same man who locked me in here and is trying to get information from me. Behind him a noticed a room. The same room I was trapped in right now. In all my anguish, and he through me on to the cot.

 

“Now that I've put some sense into you, let's start”, he said coldly.

 

“What do you remember?”, he forcefully asked.

 

I knew he wasn't playing around any more. And at best, I'd leave crawling on the dirt. Which motivated me even more.

 

I was too disgusted to look at him. I spit on his clean, leather shoes, which he didn't deserve. That raised my spirits a tad bit. And just as fast, they dropped like a dead man. Which is what I suspected I'd be soon. Then an enormous flash of blinding light vaporized a hole in the wall.

 

 

Hoped you all liked it! :D :)

p.s. That 50k would be awesome........

Edited July 19, 2015 by blackflag444

[Remaine 4,687]

I remember Rem once saying upvotes could count against you..

Yeah, I didn't.

Don't ever put words into my mouth...

[1stsuperwhitedragon 408]

Yeah, I didn't.

Don't ever put words into my mouth...

...

[Remaine 4,687]

Good luck to all participants.