[Issue 2][Story]The Hangings[UN]

[classyplebs 1,786]

 

The Hangings

 

 

Jenna, a frail old lady, had just decided to pay a visit to her son, who lived in Baltimore, Maryland. She didn't think much of it. She thought it would be a routine visit, but she didn't know what lay in her future. Both her son's and his wife's cars were parked in the driveway. That assured the old lady that her son would be there. After a few minutes of knocking on the door, she decided that they couldn't hear her, and she let herself in. She would never forget the atrocity she witnessed when she walked inside. Both of her relatives were left hanging from the banister at the top of the stairs, visible from the front door. She immediately bursts into tears, crying uncontrollably, and she called  the police. There are a few reasons she was crying, but the reason far more prominent than the rest was that her husband had died in a similar way. As she recalled the harrowing events, she remembered the detective that she had hired, that just could not solve the case if his life depended on it. 

 

The operator picked up. Jenna told the operated what she had seen.

 

"They're dead! They're dead!" Jenna cried into the receiver.

 

"Calm down. I know what happened is terrible, but you're going to have to give me some information." said the operator. The operator was a middle aged man.

 

Jenna replied, "Okay, fine."

 

"Where did these murders take place?"

 

"At my son's house."

 

"The address?"

 

"XXX Baltimore Street, Baltimore, Maryland. XXXXX."

 

"One last thing, Ma'am."

 

"What is it?" asked Jenna.

 

"You're next."

 

That last remark rang true because just 24 hours later the old lady was found in her house, hanging in much the same fashion as her relatives. Now the detectives really had a case to solve!

 

The detectives, a few young men and an older woman, searched for days on end for the slightest clue of what happened. No matter where they looked, or how hard they thought, they had nothing. They decided this case was unsolvable, that they must have been suicides. The trail went dry.

[classyplebs 1,786]

By the way, this is only part 1! Please, ask any questions you may have, I would be glad to answer them!

[sahl_super 157]

who is jenna ? frail ?

[golden5648 1,686]

Good luck! And good starting!

 

Sad to hear the dead news. :(

[classyplebs 1,786]

Good luck! And good starting!

 

Sad to hear the dead news. :(

Yeah. When I write there tends to be a dark twist.. I'm weird.

[tony990_Superstar 68]

who is jenna ? frail ?

Frail is an adjective. Jenna is the main character of the story.

[tony990_Superstar 68]

Glad to hear there will be a part two! I will keep my eye open in the PM!

[classyplebs 1,786]

Frail is an adjective. Jenna is the main character of the story.

Well, not anymore. She's dead.. 

[tony990_Superstar 68]

Well, not anymore. She's dead.. 

Yeah I know that. She was the main character of Part I is what I'm saying and that "frail" is an adjective. He thought it was a person.

[classyplebs 1,786]

Yeah I know that. She was the main character of Part I is what I'm saying and that "frail" is an adjective. He thought it was a person.

Foolish, isn't he? He would frail be a person? Hmm, maybe he's just learning the language. 

[Kevred 1,586]

Oooh, good start to a detective story...investigation story...murder plot...argh, whatever you call it.

 

Although maybe employ the classic strategy of trying to limit the number of repetitions...for example, instead of saying "old lady" everytime, you could use some synonyms and stuff.

 

Foolish, isn't he? 

Foolish? No. You're not foolish because you just started learning something and you're not good at it yet....

Edited June 26, 2015 by Kevred

[tony990_Superstar 68]

Foolish, isn't he? He would frail be a person? Hmm, maybe he's just learning the language. 

:lol: could you imagine...

 

"There's Geddy Lee!" yelled Frail

 

:lol: :lol: :lol:

[classyplebs 1,786]

Oooh, good start to a detective story...investigation story...murder plot...argh, whatever you call it.

 

Although maybe employ the classic strategy of trying to limit the number of repetitions...for example, instead of saying "old lady" everytime, you could use some synonyms and stuff.

 

Foolish? No. You're not foolish because you just started learning something and you're not good at it yet....

Thanks for the tips! And I didn't mean to be mean about it, sorry if I offended anybody.

[The.Skilled.Legend 1,459]

"You're next!" D: *screams* 

[TriNitroToIuene 4,765]

"One more thing, ma'am"

"What?"

"You're next."

 

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH!

Ima piss in my pants every February the 30th now! :o

*Hides under a bedsheet, quaking, waits for someone to tell him that the police can't be homicidial maniacs* :lol:

 

PS

 

 

Get my 30th Feb drift?

 

 

[classyplebs 1,786]

"You're next!" D: *screams* 

I was crying just typing it, please :D

 

"One more thing, ma'am"

"What?"

"You're next."

 

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH!

Ima piss in my pants every February the 30th now! :o

*Hides under a bedsheet, quaking, waits for someone to tell him that the police can't be homicidial maniacs* :lol:

 

PS

 

 

Get my 30th Feb drift?

 

 

Not really :D 

[TriNitroToIuene 4,765]

I was crying just typing it, please :D

 

Not really :D

Feb 30th doesn't exist :mellow:

[classyplebs 1,786]

Feb 30th doesn't exist :mellow:

Sometimes I lack common sense, no reason to scoff at me. :)

Edited June 27, 2015 by classyplebs

[TriNitroToIuene 4,765]

Sometimes I lack common sense, no reason to scoff at me. :)

Naw, nobody get's it the first time! :D

[classyplebs 1,786]

So does this mean you were sarcastic, and you won't piss your pants at all? :P

[TriNitroToIuene 4,765]

So does this mean you were sarcastic, and you won't piss your pants at all? :P

See! You finally got it!

I meant that I'll be daaamn scared but unfortunately for my previous post, I'm toilet trained :P

In short, what you said

[dilsharox 2,395]

nice

[TriNitroToIuene 4,765]

nice

You say that in every single article you read!

[classyplebs 1,786]

Should I make a sequel to this story? I haven't yet because the UN closed down.. Hmm.

[GHOST68INVINCIBLE 152]

You say that in every single article you read!

Bro he is sri lankan(p.s i am also sri lankan)and we are little scared for posting long sentences because we are posting in a forum where all the people aroumd the world can see and if are bad in grammar or misspelled a word people will make fun of the people who does this mistakes.Also dilsharox u don't want to be scared or shy to talk with othet people just get out there and meet new friends in the forum and ignore the noobs who say rude things or other cruel things blah.....blah.....All i am saying is just one time hit a long post with 5lines or more.(if this is not the reason that u are typing only one word or a short post please ignore this post) :)