Contest [Issue 41] Describe This in 100 Words!

[richardlord 32]

Picture 2.

 

One moment, stretched unto eternity.  A single second, lengthened beyond comprehension.  Time stood still, and etched into his memory was that single, horrible moment.  "Lagger" engraved upon his brow, the stigma burned with an intensity scarce matched in this mortal world.  Others stared in horror, too shocked to move.   With bowed head and crimson cheeks, he stared at the golden cube that had wrought his downfall, striving vainly to touch its ethereal form.  But, alas!  It was not to be.

 

80 Words.

 

Do you get extra points for using exactly 100 words?

[IVIr.Blue 865]

When I leap


It was a bright morning the universe of Tanki with clear sky and blowing air. I see the fun battles in the city of polygon under me. I decide to fall from the sky, I held my para shoot and held my breath. I took a leap
and I searched for my dropping zone and as I'm deplaning I saw a syndicate of tanks who
were searching for me meticulously and few jelous supply boxes who always dreamt of being the golden pride.

The wasp with the war paint reached me . Im sure what had happened...
They kept me waiting but I was not picked

These guys aren't lucky enough I thought and faded away .

 

 

Word count:100

Edited October 5, 2015 by IVIr.Blue

[Born_From_Radiation 0]

Picture number 2. Enjoy!

 

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The siren went off! 

The whole battle then went off to a frenzy! Awaiting the chance for the legendary box. The cry of fear as the seconds pulled off and the sign is no where to be found! But alas you see the gold falling from the blue sky. You thought, "Its too late the midget has got it" You await his name atop the screen, nothing. "This is my chance!!!" The rico said. Speeding towards the box like your life depended on it!. But your sworn enemy the 'Thunder' emerges behind a building and your chances of boasting is gone...

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^^^^  100 words exactly  :D

Edited October 4, 2015 by Born_From_Radiation

[tuntematon1234567890 23]

Picture 3

 

I was looking for a battle and I found a good Polygon DM.

I joined the battle,made a few kills,and died.

After that I re-spawned and got some pick up boxes.

I was shot and I started going backwards looking for a repair kit.

There was NONE. I realised i was going to die.

I thought it was the Shaft that shot me in the first time was dead.

I felt safe but then an OP Hornet Smoky killed me.

 

 

81 words if I counted right 

[Aslan 671]

Picture 1- (Supratikbora)

Everyone was playing normally with xp/bp equipment's...Suddenly a player joined the battle with wrong equipment's and started ruining the battle with his noobniness...This made the GOD OF HELL angry..he was dragged by HADES and put into the whole of fire!!He apologized but..he had no more hopes left..This was an example of what would happen to every game ruin-er!!

 

~linki_777

 

Word Count-68

[Mr_Unknowns 1]

When dark.shadow joined the battle he Had a feeling that gold willdrop in polygon so he waited he got destroyed by plenty of tanks but he waited then he heard a noise he knew that it was a goldbox so he was roaming around the finally he found the logo he waited back ready to jump for the gold as soon as it dropped he was trying to take it but this time lag was his opponent and as always lag won and vadimkoj got tthe gold poor tank.

 

[Prath_the_dark 1]

Here comes,The most awaited moment of a match  :rolleyes: when a gold box is finally droped :lol:and it's literally made each and everybody mad those are luckily present in that battle   :blink: , some heavy hull are trying to win the gold :angry:but a small tank from a small town come to challenge everybody with his extraordinary skill :ph34r:and by takeover other tank and by his cuts :blush:he made himself in the front of gold ^_^with 2 heavy hull side of him trying to destroy him but {wasp + Hammer} prove himself that size doesn't matter in front of skill and talent   ;)

[cars123_GTO 4]

Picture 2: The Glitch of Doom

The gold box, yes the one that is quite rare

Is going to drop, the mark is right there

I wait in horror, my future depends on this

This is the moment where ignorance is bliss

 

The box comes down like a feather

I hope it wont be affected by the weather

I glide over the tanks, I get excited as i hop

I go straight through it, my heart then stops

 

 

Word count:78

[jeevan_da_best 1]

my entry below :) pls note i am only 11yrs old                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               picture 3:                 As the tankers waited patiently they hid like ninjas waiting for that 1 gold box to slowly hover down ,the tankers could feel the intesity rising as if a lion just ran in a pack of tigers home and roared so loud even the tigers trembled in fear.But then BAM the gold box appeared above them it slowly started to hover down whilst twisting and turning in the swirling wind.When the box hit the floor like a feather landing on your shoulder all the tankers ran in but 1 came out succsesful.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          

That was my entry and thank you for letting me compete sincierly Jeevan_da_bost :)                                     

Edited October 4, 2015 by jeevan_da_best

[destroyer780 22]

Picture 1:

 

Slowly I fall, into the abyss, darkness surrounds me, everything's amiss. I fall down, not knowing what lies on the bottom of this fall, slowly I fall. Nothing is visible, nothing is right, no one is visible, everywhere, is night. That box of donuts, I bought for myself and my friends, now falls with me, nobody to share them with, nobody to enjoy them with. A sudden thud, bones crack but above all, my heart cracks, for there is no one to eat those donuts...no one.

 

 

The End.

 

 

 

 

 

Or is it?

 

Words: 80-90

Edited October 7, 2015 by destroyer780

[jowiboy1 0]

.....Some say Rabin never respawned to tell the story.

Of the tanker who read the newspaper. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Picture 3

wordcount 16 

[rithvik11 80]

picture 2

 

words: 100 words

 

There was a greedy guy who never spent his crystals.

And he gets a disease called "LAG"

 

When he saw the Orange letters written on Sky....

He Felt something like better.....

 

Soon....He got a Disease called "LAG!".

When he got this disease, his tank cant touch anything

Soon...He saw The gold  dropped  from an plane

 

Therefore.....The disease got more worse....

Betraying his own players by flipping them....

When the gold box was falling.

 

It dropped...he cant touch IT!

His mates killed him and shared the gold

[koolkumar 0]

Picture 3:

Undoubtedly the rivalry between these two deadly turrets is intense.You can see that even though railgun is equipped with double powers, smoky  as fast as dog will lick a dish, has managed to half the HP bar of railgun with its critical shots.But the game ain't over yet because railgun just need a first and last bow to knock off smoky.What will happen?Will Smoky die or it will be save from a couple of inches?Extremely crucial time.

 

Words count:81

[MegaBlasterI 0]

Picture 1: lag is bad
 
Bang!
A beautiful blue stream sizzled into Darren taking him off into the air. It was as if a train had hit him because at that very moment he went flying off the map. The source of the blue beam came and stood on the very edge. But Darren kept spinning crazily. The stranger wondered if he'll ever stop. Suddenly a feeling overwhelmed him, a special feeling. It was sadness. Puzzled, the unknown person noticed Darren getting smaller and smaller with each passing minute that goes by. Without warning, an object hit the person at an alarming rate.
He fell.

 

word count:100

(the title and "picture 1" don't count)

Edited October 5, 2015 by MegaBlasterI

[mandar11 3]

Picture 2

Its a gold that the one who touched it does not take,because he is lagging ,it is a serious problem we should resolve it soon. i think ricochet and viking will take advantage and take the gold because of the lag. but tanki should give crystals to him and he would be happy . All would earn crys .

all would have a great game and gold should drop for each player.

[Lewis.Hamilton 1,110]

Picture number 2 - Video of The week 62

As I see, the tanker is in orange paint. And, From server laggs, he cannot take the gold. If you remember, in Tanki Online V-Log 61, Semyon Kirov said, the new video of the week must be gold fail with orange paint. I think that this is the photo from video of the week contest. And also he was just fighting for that gold and he though he will make epic fail, now it is funny fail!

 

Word count: 77

Good Luck to all!

Edited October 4, 2015 by n_Automate3

[Cakemanisthebest 1]

Picture 3 The smoky fires in desperation to save his tank but he is no match for the railgun. Sparks fly as he fires his last shot. The railgun laughs and fires at the smoky. But will the smoky exploded...

 

38 words excluding this and the picture number at the top

[Exoticism 0]

This is for the third picture. Here is goes- 
 
Yes, I am brave.
 
One igneous shot from by beloved railgun....and it creates chaos in the opponent
 
It has taught me how to deal with power...and using this power with those little "enhancing drugs" has made me invincible.
 
As a matter of fact...It is funny...how some tankers try to suppress you without fear. I may be strong....but this has been channelised through fear.

 

Fear teaches us things. If a vampire does not fear the sunlight he will not live. This tanker felt it too....He picked up a hopeless brawl....and he did not live. 

 

 

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{Exoticism}

[suhaas027 0]

hornet m3 and viking m3 standing face to face in the battle field with a name mean 5 sided.

 

smoky m3 : you are very slow

 

railgun m3 :your just a old version of thunder

 

smoky m3 gets angry and proves that old is gold, by shooting him vigorously 

 

railgun m3 was ready to give a hefty punch but he got attacked but still viking m3 was able to bear it.

 

like atlas bearing the world in his neck

 

the railgun’s bullet was on the way to attack him with all its power-ups except its opposite one which is speed

 

  

Edited October 4, 2015 by suhaas027

[celroti 133]

Picture 3: The Dilemma

 

I’ve always been faced with the question of

What is better: Smoky or Railgun?

I’ve always said Railgun, but everyone else said Smoky.

I got really mad so I wanted to show that Railgun is way better.

Then I saw this guy with a Hornet and Smoky.

His name was Yisroel.Rabin, what a weird name.

He shot at me and he luckily got a critical shot.

But I shrugged it off with my Hohloma paint and one-shotted him.

I guess Railgun is alot better eh? Well his Smoky was an m2. That isn’t fair eh? LIKE I CARE

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It is actually 98 words...if the title doesn't count  ^_^  Of course I probably won't win so it doesn't matter  :unsure: 

 

 

 

 

 

A joy of writing is in the eye of the writer and if win matters you're writing for others not for you

[sha77777_super 877]

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Your right lol.

LOL and it was kind of obvious that greyat won't miss it because of stability of his hull.

Edited October 4, 2015 by sha77777_super

[userdragon202 0]

picture 3

 

 

hungry to kill,the powerful dark tank ready and poised in position for the kill but...

His enemy,who is just has hungry, has taken charge and sent shocking projectile at him causing electrical waves to slither through his crumbling circuits.

[LeGrimReaper 18]

PICTURE 3

Well the only thing I can say is TROLL! A nasty drugger is trying to kill the poor little hornet but it wont work, he WILL miss the shot and he WILL start writing stars. 

You can see that this dude has a terrible PC with poor quality TO... Or TO is terrible on his PC? Who cares guys i want he cash! 

[LeGrimReaper.Jr 2]

Pic no.2 -- This shows how deep tanki sunk. Peole say that curse is lag, but oh no, its anything but lag. I think it is time for devs to step up thier game and start to fix these 'curses'

Oh, and its like this picture was set up because it seems none of the players are intterested in that dam gold.. Hmmm maybe because ... Hmmm... I will let YOU respond that question !

[celroti 133]

Waited and waited

 

"Standing on the opposite patch of the sun-drenched pavement,a thousand miles apart."

 

"You left me without saying a word."

 

"Vanishing from my eyes makes me feel sightless."

 

"With the intense heat of the cauldron,even cold coal flares into fire."

But my tears won't.

 

"With the clamorous intonation of the thunder,even a rock breaks into pieces."

But my silence won't.

 

Is triumphant a compensation for perished die-hard pal?

"NO! The blossom with a fragrance is of no application in the absence of companionship of fluttering butterflies."

 

"Waited and waited..........waited longer than I've lived."

 

Feeling bewildered,bothered and barricaded.

 

1 :( :(  words

 

Picture no 1

Edited October 4, 2015 by celroti