Contest [Issue 41] Describe This in 100 Words!

[eashwar 2]

Picture three

 

Sparkles and blue electricity assault the eyes

Alas it is a critical hit and it shall soon bring my demise 

 

A lone hornet attacks

My hull takes a whack

 

I'm out of ammunition

I sacrificed firing speed for great precision

 

I cannot shoot

However the point is moot

 

For I am anyway fated to death

As the server is about to reset 

 

62 words

 

 

[jimjim99 4]

Picture #2, 42 words.

 

 

Clad in the Orange Paint of Failure, the Tanker races to reach the Gold Box.

 

 

Not yet understanding what most of us already know.

 

 

The only thing to be reached on this day, or on any other day, will be the Score Cap.

"Orange Paint of Failure" Lol

[umair47 26]

Picture 1: (Supratikbora)

 

What I have done that you punished me like that?

Please come back don't punish me like that,

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You are my friend, My hope come lets go to home,

This world is full of m3 tanks don't leave me alone,

.

I am little tank alone and don't wanna play without you,

Please come back I am not gonna leave without you,

.

O my friend don't worry I am gonna save you,

I don't care about my tank I just wanna save you.

 

Word count: 82

[chinguli 1]

Picture 2:- 

 

A siren is heard; tankers jump up and down with excitement, and a peculiar symbol appears on the ground, an indication that a gold-box is soon about to land there. Lelouch, with his particularly agile wasp, is the first to get under the gold-box. Other massive Vikings and a Hornet menacingly approach him, as the gold-box is about to touch Lelouch's Wasp. It drops slowly...slowly...and passes right through him! Others felt ecstatic as they realized that had another chance to catch the evading gold-box. Poor Lelouch stomps around, seething with rage, cursing his luck and Internet connection.

 

(99 words, if I think I've counted correctly)

[DRAGON_ball_tanker 0]

PICTURE 2

 

The glitch gold box 

 

 

the GOLD BOX siren (from world war 2 air raid siren) was heard by everyone. people everywhere from the world are looking for the drop zone but only a couple find it. Dark.shado (the tanker) found the GOLD BOX a short amount of time when his eyes sees a couple of tankers behind him. he has 30 seconds for the gold to drop and survive meanwhile the other tankers are still searching for the GOLD BOX. 30 seconds has past and now the GOLD BOX is dropping. tankers begin to fire their turrets but Dark.shado takes the gold but a glitch happens. he was unlucky...

 

 

amount of words: 100 (please count the words to see if I was wrong and let me know)

NOTE: THE NAME, NUMBERS, TITLE AND PUNCHUATION DOES NOT COUNT SO PLEASE DO NOT ADD THAT

Edited October 8, 2015 by DRAGON_ball_tanker

[Flexoo 6,980]

Picture 1

 

Don ´t grow fainthearted when everyone lose it by in rage.

Trust in yourself, when they doubt seeing you free-fall from the Hill.

If you manage to wait serenly and confidently, if you won´t answer to failure with anger, bet on other card, because you can begin anew when you lose.

Arise warrior Darren.                

Nature invented fight, but human brought war. Your´s not in vain.  

Respawn, box up one minute with 60 seconds of aspiration and yours will be the realm of victory with all the crystal treasures.

 

This motivational speech entry contains 88 words

[gbknan 94]

Picture 1 (word count not including this first line = 100)

 

The white tank approached.

'I've heard a secret platform's down there.'

'Like I'd fall for that,' said Darren.

'For what?' the white tank said innocently.

'I've played Tanki ages. I'm too clever for stupid tricks,' Darren laughed.

The white tank suddenly turned his turret.

'Over there. Gold box!' Darren automatically turned too. And before he realised it was a trick, that sneaky tank pushed him over the edge.

Darren raged, watching his tank fall.

And fall.

And fall.

Weird, he thought. No self-destruct. Hey, maybe the secret platform's real! I'd find it first. Imagine... the glory, the fame, the-

BOOM!

[monstermaniac 2]

Picture Two

 

This time...this time for sure !!.. sirens sound in the distance, drop spot appears the whole battle field goes deadly silent...with no supplies i hope no one will pick me off while i hunt this glorious gold down.The moment comes...i rush in with my mini orange wasp and..... what? why? ...N-no ! im touching it im inside it im so close ...Internet bar has dropped to one.I hopelessly try to catch it, driving  in and out but no....just no......

 

 

 

83 works if i count correctly.....

 

Thanks :)

Monstermaniac

[hamzu5 10]

Picture 3:

 

I shot;

I missed.

 

Here he comes, my enemy,

Looking so great, Smoky's the key!

 

Hull's nice!

Hornet pride! Or was it fright?

 

Whatever, shoots so great,

Criticalness in my face!

 

I shot;

I missed.

 

Blasts so good, like KFC.

Now wonder, Yisroel's seas...

 

Seas of destruction, Polygon, M3's!

Would you like some? 'Yes please!'

 

Vikings are fearless,

So careless, so senseless,

 

I shot;

I missed.

 

They shoot Hornets, 'FEAR MACHINE!'

With Smoky's looks so keen.

 

Railgun's so majestic, so great!

Still no wonder, is Rabin getting paid?

 

What can I do? Tell!

Instead of,

 

I shot; and,

I missed.

 

-100 words

 

|| PDoX ||

dude i think its the best :)  :)  :)  :)

[mountainwarrior 3]

#2 the laggy gold box

 

The tanker watched with excitement as his new package from amazon was being delivered through the sky adrenaline rushed the gold box landed on with the simplest thud and the package remains unclaimed his brand new package sitting on the ground surrounded by hostile thieves who will take his brand new 1000 crystal gold box at first notice! some say that dark_shado's ghost still haunts gold boxes to this day so beware if you catch a gold box it is a only a short victory for dark_shadows ghost will forever haunt your tank...

 

word count:93

[MCtodaMaX03 1]

Picture Number 1: 

      Alone. I'm alone. Left alone to fight the onslaught of m2s and m3s coming over the Hill. "Generallisimo ROB I'm surrounded Darren is .... gone. I can't do this". "You must Supratikbora it's the only chance we have left. A tear runs down the side of my lightly armored metal wasp hull. Slightly rusting a thin path as it goes. Please Darren come back. You were our only hope. Why must the abyss swallow you. I'm ... I'm sorry. This is my fault. It always is. My own doing. Goodbye, Old friend. RIP. Alone. Gone.

                                                                               A tribute to Darren

 

Word count: 96 Words not including the ....'s  I double-checked just to make sure word count is right good luck everyone  :) 

[darrenisawesome 4]

Picture 3:

The civil war commences...Commander Greyat enters his tank, he knows he can defeat anyone in between him an victory. He drives Viking and mounted on, his favorite gun, Railgun . His first opponent, a Smoky.Easy he thinks, he has gotten lucky as his paint Hohloma protect well against this smoky...3... he is charging his gun, ready to kill the opponent standing in his way...2... a bullet is suddenly propelled from the enemies barrel, impacting him in his tanks Achilles Heel...1...0...He has killed the enemy! Though he's weakened for the upcoming battles, he is grateful that he didn't miss the shot.

 

word count 99 checked on word if itsnt correct then sorry:/

picture 3 and this are not part of the stories:p

Edited October 12, 2015 by darrenisawesome

[Forestad19 164]

 Picture # 1

 

I feel myself falling....falling, In a abyss that felt like it was endless.

I feel myself dying.....dying, Pushed off by a selfish teammate, Just because I was careless!!!  

I feel myself fading....fading, Fading away while other tanker was happy with his success!!!

I feel myself re-spawning...re-spawning, this time after the tanker, the one with the evil grin on his face,pushing his teammates off of cliffs

 

and then...I see him...and I know it is time time to stand up for myself and become fearless!! 

 

90 words

Edited October 9, 2015 by Forestad19

[benlovespi 0]

Picture 1:

 

From my vantage point high above, I watch, dismayed, as my friend, my twin in all aspects of appearance, falls toward what should have been certain demise. He ought to have erupted in a fiery inferno long ago, but he continues to fall!

 

I linger in my position, watching as he plummets, but still he survives for a couple of moments longer. My confusion runs deeply and endlessly as I observe this abnormality.

 

Then, against better judgement, I contemplate following him down so as to try my luck at this anomaly.

 

95 Words

Edited October 9, 2015 by benlovespi

[thelordofthetanks 5]

Picture #3

 

The opposing tank locked into my sights. Death was inevitable. I pulled the trigger, the turret charged up, preparing to deal certain death with one swift stroke. But before I could fire, they fired first!

 

The shell slammed against my hull, and electricity crackled and danced across the control board. The drive was fried; he had won.

 

Then, when all seemed lost, when I began to slip into the abyss, my barrel choked out its last charge, and smote down the enemy.

 

I may have lost that day, but I dragged him down with me.

 

 

99 words

[audi20-6 1]

picture 3

 

the smoky is a irritating gun that is always used by professionals. once it started hitting a railgun but the railgun wouldn't care.

then he took a supply box and got the double armor. the smoky got angry and he took the double damage. the railgun became angry and

aimed a MR smoky finally the railgun took some time but defeated the smoky. the smoky respawned to the revenge on that railgun and successful in his attempt.

[karthikastro 67]

Every one gets impatient and  their heartbeats get higher and higher , when u see a  announcement " GOLD BOX WILL BE DROPPED SOON".  Every one begans to search of it typing" Where is it and Where is it and No Kill No Kill . But when u reach the place of gold is going to fell every one tries to get on the top of each other , but every one cant , but lucky tankers such as the wasp and hammer . After getting  gold box  some one congratulate but some one will be soo sad that they even crush their computer and type badwords..........

 

( I THINK ITS 100 WORDS )

[MinuteMan.TO 14]

Supratikbora, parkouring with his friend Darren4Turbo, waited for his chance. Identical they looked, making epic flips on the grassy slopes. Railgun and wasp, in brilliant white. "Go fast" Supra said. An amazing triple flip, landed by Darren at the edge of the cliff. Supratikbora's chance had come. Moving silently while Darren was typing, nudged him gently, into the pit. While falling through the haze, Darren looked up at his traitorous friend, the surprised expression accusing his cowardly heart.

 

Word count: 78 Picture 1

Edited October 13, 2015 by MinuteMan.TO

[Natey16 2]

Picture Number 1:   I wake up in the morning to find the sun shining, the birds singing and my computer calling me. My what a fine day to troll, and who better as a victim than my good friend Darren4Turbo, who was currently online. After greeting him, I invited him to a Combe DM 1v1. He accepted and we made a battle. After he killed  me 10 times, I decided to play dirty. I asked him "How are you?" His tank stopped moving as he replied and I took that opportunity to push him over the edge.   Oops, sorry, I didn't mean to...

 

(Word count:100 words :D )

[Ash_Kenton 7]

is it allowed to delete my post and make a new one with a different picture

[MinuteMan.TO 14]

just edit yous

[Ash_Kenton 7]

No i mean can i delete my post and make a new one with different pic cos they said no more than 1 entire but does that count if ive deleted it.(P.S.:Is there a way to know if someone has replyed to me on the forum

[jharri19 2]

To greyat, the moderator of this contest:

 

1. When does the contest end.

2. How are the winners announced.

3. Are we sending you amazing entries.

 

Answer ASAP please. Thank you

 

-jharri19

[T.O.R.N.A.D.O.XXX 184]

To greyat, the moderator of this contest:

 

1. When does the contest end.

2. How are the winners announced.

3. Are we sending you amazing entries.

 

Answer ASAP please. Thank you

 

-jharri19

Im not greygat  but the contest ends on 14 October 2015 (I think)

[jharri19 2]

K thanks.

What a quick reply!