NATN-Issue 1-Story-The beginning of the end-Part 1

[canadian_tank 226]

Hello tankers,

Last time I been requested for a longer story so today I will do one, also the following story is fiction. Enjoy!

 

Bang! And I was very sleepy, I tried to stay awake but I fell into sleep....deep sleep.

 

* * *

3 days ago

 

​I was in Berlin, I was with Ben, my technical boyfriend as we walked down to base, we had been finally backed by the British and were looking for a good sleep. We didn't get any since 2 months ago when we were sent here to holed off ETG(explosive terrorist group). They were trying to take over the world and were succeeding, Russia, Poland, Norway, turkey and lots of other countries were in there hands and north america  west Europe, Asia and Africa were left so we had to win or else...I just can't! Oh god, ok.... we will die. After a long walk back to base, we learned that we finally got Poland back but lost North Africa which was a strategical position as they can at anytime surround us. I went to bed and I must have slept for a long time because when i got up, nobody was here so I took my automatic and got out when I saw Ben carried in a stretcher and then I realized that they did the impossible! We are surrounded! I quickly ran to my isida M2 and hunter M2 but then....."stop or i'll fire!" said someone and then "put you rifle down!" I resisted and *rat tat tat* and I was unconscious.

 

* * *

Some time later

 

​When I woke up, I was in a lot of pain when I realized i was kidnapped by ETG which always left 1 in my mind....death, I was never really scared of death but now I was, I prayed i won't die but then I was suffocated and then I was once again unconscious but I think i woke up sooner when i realized i was about to be executed! I prayed i won't die and....Bang! And I was very sleepy, I tried to stay awake but I fell into sleep....deep sleep.

Edited December 12, 2015 by canadian_tank

[GHOST68INVINCIBLE 152]

Wth

[canadian_tank 226]

Wth

Well you guys asked for this

[dilsharox 2,395]

Technical boyfriend? Sounds a bit gay

[canadian_tank 226]

Technical boyfriend? Sounds a bit gay

it means I never asked him on a date

Edited December 12, 2015 by canadian_tank

[Remaine 4,687]

Well you guys asked for this

Where exactly did we ask for this?

[canadian_tank 226]

Where exactly did we ask for this?

in my older article, the definition of noobs, you all said it was soooo short, in fact I think it's tanki most unlike article

[Flexoo 6,980]

You desperately need to spend more time on your articles.

[Quarks 2,255]

Please change the font, it is hard to read.

[canadian_tank 226]

You desperately need to spend more time on your articles.

OK? I m the only one writing them!

I would love to but i have like a millions things to do in 30 mins per day!

[SmexierGiraffe 194]

you guys are so mean to him at least he is trying and thats all that matters, i thought it was a good article canadian_tank :)

 

remember that rule your mothers should have taught you? dont say anything if you dont have anything good to say. 

Edited December 16, 2015 by SmexierGiraffe

[SmexierGiraffe 194]

Technical boyfriend? Sounds a bit gay

whats wrong with that?

[canadian_tank 226]

whats wrong with that?

OK... please don't get me started please!

[canadian_tank 226]

you guys are so mean to him at least he is trying and thats all that matters, i thought it was a good article canadian_tank :)

 

remember that rule your mothers should have taught you? dont say anything if you dont have anything good to say. 

Actually...my teacher told my that

Also thanks for being first good commenter!

[personia 4,036]

remember that rule your mothers should have taught you? dont say anything if you dont have anything good to say. 

My mother never taught me that.

[marc.jp_44 20,837]

Actually...my teacher told my that

Also thanks for being first good commenter!

You need to seriously learn to take some negative comments, Bro. Tbh; for me, the best thing in the story was the grammar, which still wasn't even that great, I'm sure that you have an Editor who has checked some of your grammar because I can tell that your grammar isn't the greatest (no offence but it's true, I'm not saying mine is perfect but there's still a lot of grammatical mistakes in that Article). I think that you need to start actually spending some quality time on your Articles and getting a better Editor. :)

 

After the first sentence I was confused lol.

"I was in Berlin, I was with Ben, my technical boyfriend as we walked down to base."

Wait? You walked down to base? Is it like a slang that I haven't heard of? Is it supposed to be ' the basement?'

Edited December 17, 2015 by Marc

[SmexierGiraffe 194]

OK... please don't get me started please!

im not asking for you to rant but you shouldn't discriminate people based on sexual orientation 

[SmexierGiraffe 194]

My mother never taught me that.

well im your mother now :P

[dilsharox 2,395]

whats wrong with that?

don't u get it?

[SmexierGiraffe 194]

don't u get it?

no i dont get whats wrong with others expressing themselves. are you homophobic or something?

[canadian_tank 226]

You need to seriously learn to take some negative comments, Bro. Tbh; for me, the best thing in the story was the grammar, which still wasn't even that great, I'm sure that you have an Editor who has checked some of your grammar because I can tell that your grammar isn't the greatest (no offence but it's true, I'm not saying mine is perfect but there's still a lot of grammatical mistakes in that Article). I think that you need to start actually spending some quality time on your Articles and getting a better Editor. :)

 

After the first sentence I was confused lol.

"I was in Berlin, I was with Ben, my technical boyfriend as we walked down to base."

Wait? You walked down to base? Is it like a slang that I haven't heard of? Is it supposed to be ' the basement?'

Basecamp, heard of it?

[dilsharox 2,395]

no i dont get whats wrong with others expressing themselves. are you homophobic or something?

nvm I guess you're not old enough to understand it

[SmexierGiraffe 194]

nvm I guess you're not old enough to understand it

look pal, you dont know my age, if anything, your the one whos not old enough if you still believe that if everyone is not like you than they arnt good people...

[canadian_tank 226]

look pal, you dont know my age, if anything, your the one whos not old enough if you still believe that if everyone is not like you than they arnt good people...

try, in fact, there are more adults in tanki than kids!

[SmexierGiraffe 194]

try, in fact, there are more adults in tanki than kids!

the problem is you have absolutely no source to back that up. so your argument is technically invalid.