Nursery Rhymes for the young tanker

[The-Operator219 1,929]

 Derpy Mammy (Humpty Dumpty)

 

Derpy Mammy camped on a ramp

Derpy Mammy fell like a champ

All the king's Hammers and all the king's rails, couldn't correct Derpy Mammy's epic fail

 

 

Vrrm vrrm Isida (Baa baa black sheep)

 

Vrrm vrrm Isida, have you any charge?

Yes, sir Yes, sir

A full bar

One for the Mammy, one for the Shaft

One for the little Wasp who runs down the lane

 

Mammy and Isida (Jack and Jill)

Mammy and Isida went up the ramp

To slaughter, camp, and kill

Mammy went back and stopped his attack, and Isida came tumbling after

 

[Who_Boss 154]

this is funny  :lol:  :lol:

[MrCommando 1,412]

hehe!  :D

[dilsharox 2,395]

Nice but last rhyme isn't that good

[The-Operator219 1,929]

Eh, you try making a rhyme with Tanki terms.

This was a bit rushed, I was just going to use just Derpy Mammy but then I thought it would feel shallow, so I made the other two in about an hour.

[Zenyth 6,494]

LOL AWESOME!

[DragonOfStorms 2,706]

This is hysterical! Keep it up, can't wait to see more. I'd like, but I am out of upvotes. :(

[NatchGa 665]

lmao allow me to contribute XD

 

run around the poly cp, XP player wannabe,

useless, light, and killed easily,

 

destroyed,

 

destroyed, 

 

bottom of the teammmm you will be!

 

 - based off of "ring around the rosie" 

 

(i just played a poly cp and this kid using XP equipment literally ran around and did not help at all, so thats what inspired me lol)

[The-Operator219 1,929]

Which one was the best in your opinion?

Let me know so I can learn from this. :3

[xMoneyMaker 2,000]

:lol:  :lol:

[Helindu_2014 830]

Simply saying, Hilarious! :lol:

[yk88 577]

Which one was the best in your opinion?

Let me know so I can learn from this. :3

Derpy Mammy!

[GoldRock 6,165]

For the last two, you kept the same endings as the originals which doesn't really work since they're part of the original rhyming scheme - try changing those to rhyme with your altered line endings as appropriate. Apart from that, pretty amusing ^_^

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

XD

[golden5648 1,686]

xD

[DragonOfStorms 2,706]

Which one was the best in your opinion?

Let me know so I can learn from this. :3

Definitely 'Derpy Mammy'.

[Legacy 754]

:lol: :lol: :lol:

Edited February 18, 2016 by Legacy

[The-Operator219 1,929]

Keep it between us but... My next parody is one of MC Frontalot's songs, and I've already made a rough basis for the lyrics. ;3

[DragonOfStorms 2,706]

Are you gonna make more?

[hhgb 2,655]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vPpqPQoDeRM

[The-Operator219 1,929]

Are you gonna make more?

Mhm, I've got a hard copy but I've got to type it out with the added challenge of trying to read my own handwriting.

Then there's the last-minute changes, panicking because I left out the title, corrections, etc.

[The-Operator219 1,929]

Well...

I just updated Word on my phone where I was writing everything, and it made me have to log back in to Microsoft Office.

And I can't remember my password, it was from back in 2011. .-. So It's going to be delayed until I can figure something out, until then, please enjoy this song: