The Wrong Room

[zaintahir 458]

You get back to your apartment after a long days work and want to get some rest. You are about to pull out your keys and unlock the door but...you realize it's open. Turning the door knob and stepping inside you notice something different.You stand in the doorway trying to figure it out. Then it hits you...This isn't your room. As you turn to leave something catches your eye. There's a man hunched over a dish of flesh eating it with his bare hands,Tearing into it as a wild animal would with it's prey. Red drip down the side of it's mouth and the smell that came from it was sickening. You are paralyzed by the side,You are paralyzed by the sight.

 

 

 

 Unconsciously you cover your hands and nose. You accidentally bumped your elbow against the doorway , You freeze. He stopped eating , there is something wrong. Then he looked up and started searching the room for the noise. His eyes scanned the room until they found you. Your legs start moving by themselves and you find yourself running from the room and the horrors within it. The man steps up , Locks the door and sits back down to grab another slice of pizza , and then he mutters to himself ..... "Crazy Vegans".

 

 

 

 

 

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

Nice part

It scared me though

[Bydo 20,120]

 it was interesting ..

Edited April 28, 2016 by frozen_heart

[arnav0506 2,777]

lOL nice story..

[Rayyan 3,415]

kk Pizza :P

[BNICE1 70]

Scared me for a minute . Lol

[zaintahir 458]

Hhaha , i was going for an actual scary story , but this one was shorter so i decided to write this one :P

[0MN1V01D 599]

Plot Twist: You woke up.

[r_L-E-O-P-A-R-D-2003 657]

Interesting story,Looking forward to when u will make more.

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And congrats on your rank up,How silly i am forgot to congrats you ;)

 

Edited April 28, 2016 by r_L-E-O-P-A-R-D-2003

[zaintahir 458]

Interesting story,Looking forward to when u will make more.

 

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And congrats on your rank up,How silly i am forgot to congrats you ;)

 

Congo on rankup to you too  as i have 2k xp more than u xD

[robbie56 2,403]

the wrong hole

[stawp_thundertime 275]

Now that is something you don't see everyday at tanki. Good job man :lol:

I made an attempt for pt2, sorry for the flawed use of english. ;)

 

Some nights i can't get sleep. My neighbor never had any respect for me, he doesn't care about the other people who live in this block.

It's 1 of those nights again, his music plays on an ungodly volume, i press pillows against my ears, but it's of no use. Tired i peek at the clock on my night table, it's few minutes over midnight. I should propably go watch some TV myself, no way im falling asleep with the obnoxious noise coming from upstairs. I strech my legs out, and get to a sitting posture on the side of my bed. Suddenly the noise stops, the silence i had waited for hours seems to have finally fallen. But something feels off, ususally it takes the whole night or cops to silence him.

As im sitting there on the side of my bed i start to worry. It couldn't have been a blackout, my electic clock still lights the room with a red glow.

I think about checking my neigbor, what if something had happened to him, the old man might have forgot his medication and fell weak.

I sneak out of my bedroom to the kitchen when i hear a noise coming from my door. Slow knocking i look at my door across the hallway that connects the rooms in my apartment. What kind of a sane person knocks at my door at this time? I slowly approach the door, and by the time i get to it the knocking has faded out. I feel really uncomfortable, but i force myself to look throught the peephole to see if there is still someone. To my relief i see no one there. Confused and creeped out i put on coat and my slippers to proceed with my original plan. I open the door slowly. There is something on the floor behind my door, a box with my name on it.

I bow down to pick it up, but foul reek of meat gets to my nose. Shocked i drop the box, shedding it open.

I look down to the floor eyes filled with terror, fresh slices of meat scattered all over it. I rush to my bedroom and close the door, thinking to myself: this is the last time my neigbour prank calls salami pizza on me.

Edited April 29, 2016 by stawp_thundertime

[Eragon 13,876]

How is pizza flesh?  :unsure:

[stawp_thundertime 275]

How is pizza flesh?  :unsure:

That's the real plot-twist. Science has gone too far

[SOME.ONE_ELSE 20]

pizzza

:P

[GoldRock 6,165]

Topic moved from Off-Topic Discussion by the moderators, as agreed ^_^ 

[Justsomeonelol 148]

ah I like this short story, it's funny  :P

[DragonOfStorms 2,706]

Nice plot twist :P

[VaudeVille 1,428]

Best troll story ever xaxaxaxxxaxa :lol:

[ASIFMEHM00D 38]

 I give 5 stars now go away!

[zaintahir 458]

Thanks all :P

[dfoofnik 341]

I knew what I was going to do and I was ready.

I looked around and started heading for my goal. But I felt my strength ebbing away. I ran quickly to one side, only to find that now there were TWO shadowy figures behind me, slowing me down and sapping my strength. Then I died.

Wrong battle. Wrong hull. Wrong paint.

Damn Freezes and Isidas. ;)

Edited May 1, 2016 by dfoofnik

[Yisroel.Rabin 16,224]

Love the irony here :D :lol:

[TTK_229 1,080]

Heeheehee. I was scared a bit then. But I totally agree, vegans are WIERD, y'all.

[Blackdrakon30 2,943]

lol I love the perspective of it