A poor little soul.

[ToHoYoNTaDa 1,147]

A poor little soul

 

 

 

 

This story isn't fiction. And it is on me.


A happy, peaceful and bright day. The sun was shining to the fullest. Sun was shining, however it was not too hot. I just came back to my Home from School. Ate some food. Had some rest. The evening was about to arrive, the day had gone. The all I could see on the sky was very bright stars. The shiny moon had a peaceful yellow light. The night was over head.

I decided to eat some fast food. Asked my brothers if they want to eat something from the bakery. They said a few things. Went to bakery. Bought some food. Paid the bill. There is a very small distance between that bakery and my Home. After buying, I was just coming back to Home. On the side of road, a little kitten was crossing the road. She was walking only on her front two legs. His back legs were injured extremely. She couldn't use her back legs. I really felt very bad to see her. I think a motorcycle or a car had been passed over her legs. She couldn't even move them. I thought to take her with me in my Home but I did just pass away from him as my hands were full of bakery items. I did come back, entered home, told my elders about that incident. They also said to bring her in Home. I did go at that place, on the side of that road again. She wasn't there. I really felt very bad, why didn't I bring her with me in Home first time...But as we know,"It is useless to cry over split milk". But I didn't get pleasure. I couldn't forget her.

I went to that place again. Looked near that road, on every side but still couldn't find. Came back to Home again. Took some rest as I was totally wet of sweat. On the third try to find her, I went there again. Looked everywhere at that road. At last, due to keep on trying again and again, I did see her under a bench. Instantly, ran to her. She tried to run away for me due to fear but she couldn't run. Really sad scene. I did hold her in my hand, brought her in the Home, placed her on a soft surface, applied medicine to her body. She was too hungry also. I gave her some yogurt. She did eat it instantly due to great hunger. I think that she didn't eat anything since many days.

On the first day of her coming, I applied medicine to her body. Her back kegs were totally cold. Massaged here. On morning, she was at the place where I placed her. I checked her injured legs again. They were not cold like before. I gave her food to eat. She denied to eat it. I thought she want something other. I brought something other. She refused to eat it again. I thought she don't wanna eat anything right now. Applied some medicine to her legs again. Then I left her alone. I think after one hour or two, I did come to her again. I could really see her back legs moving slightly. I was really very happy to see that. Told my elders about it. They also became happy to know that. I asked her to take some food again by placing it near her. I don't know but she refused again and again. I left her alone again after applying medicine. The night was over head. I was busy in my works. At once, I thought to see her again. I did go there but she had expired.

Edited August 10, 2016 by ToHoYoNTaDa

[Mr.Ace 1,116]

Nice noob  , Really well written :) (You just need to improve you're vocabulary a bit and this will become a master piece )

Edited August 9, 2016 by Mr.Ace

[ToHoYoNTaDa 1,147]

Nice noob  , Really well written :) (You just need to improve you're vocabulary a bit and this will become a master piece )

Thanks man!

You are the biggest mult PRO!

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

Hey bro edit this line

 

2nd paragraph 5th line

[ToHoYoNTaDa 1,147]

Hey bro edit this line

 

2nd paragraph 5th line

What?

Where?

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

Happy but sad story

What?

Where?

Here:

 

There is a very small distance between that bakery and my Home.

it doesn't make any sense. You either say "my house" or "home", but not "my Home" Edited August 9, 2016 by BlueDragon_tamki

[ToHoYoNTaDa 1,147]

Happy but sad story Here: it doesn't make any sense. You either say "my house" or "home", but not "my Home"

This story is on me....i did find that kitten

Edited August 9, 2016 by ToHoYoNTaDa

[Reeco9 1,567]

Happy but sad story Here: it doesn't make any sense. You either say "my house" or "home", but not "my Home"

Actually 'my home' is perfectly acceptable in the sentence which you quoted, but it all depends on the circumstance.

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

Actually 'my home' is perfectly acceptable in the sentence which you quoted, but it all depends on the circumstance.

i sometimes get corrected if I accidentally say "my home"

[Phoenix.Raised 5,992]

Nice story. You are a noble boy.

[ToHoYoNTaDa 1,147]

Nice story. You are a noble boy.

Thanks bro  ^_^

[ToHoYoNTaDa 1,147]

i sometimes get corrected if I accidentally say "my home"

Then your corrector is noob  <_<

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

Then your corrector is noob <_<

:lol:

[P_U_N_I_S_H_E_R 732]

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Edited August 10, 2016 by P_U_N_I_S_H_E_R

[ToHoYoNTaDa 1,147]

That cat was one silly billy gumdrop.

?

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

That cat was one silly billy gumdrop.

:huh: what was that supposed to mean?

[ToHoYoNTaDa 1,147]

:huh: what was that supposed to mean?

 I think he also don't know.

[TTK_229 1,080]

*Sniff* nice story. I just wish that you could finish the story by tying it in with the title.

[Coat 2,280]

Am I the only one to get cats? 2 days ago, I got a cat on my house roof. I waited for many hours that momma cat might return but she didn't

[Nine 693]

Wow that’s a sad story.

 

I have a cat to and I rescued one from a tall tree lol

[Coat 2,280]

Wow that’s a sad story.

 

I have a cat to and I rescued one from a tall tree lol

lol I'm so afraid of climbing trees. I never clumb one