Jeff The Killer (pt. 2)

[zaintahir 458]

Pt.1 : http://en.tankiforum.com/index.php?showtopic=321692&do=findComment&comment=5532172

 

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"It has been 2 days since the death of Ethan Jacob." said the reporter. "Murderer possibly fled town, police around the area have been notified - however, there is nothing known about the killer, not even gender. We will keep you updated on this topic. In other news, twin brothers meet again! After 2 years they le-" *TV turns off"

 

"heaheahea." - "They think they can get me, little kids in a sandbox think that some fat mall cop will be able to arrest me! Hahaha, it's amusing at the most."

 

He got up from the couch and put on his white hoodie. His deformed face covered by the hoodie, he dug his hands in his pockets and started off for his next victim.

 

Felix Ulf Kjellberg was a popular Swedish gamer who was well known in the YouTube community. Every night after fully recording, editing and uploading his videos he went for a little nighttime jog. Jeff had been watching him for less than a week - he was one to take caution for his kills, and this one was special seeing his popularity, The gamer didn't make it too far before Jeff managed to slash his abdomen, The YouTuber's scream was muffled by his assassin's hand as he was slashed multiple times across the throat. Eventually, Felix became another victim of this half-demon, half-man. But this time, Jeff was going to have a little fun.

 

Jeff grabbed his chin, slashed Felix's cheeks until they resembled a smile and cut off his eyelids, leaving his face similar to his killer's. Jeff got rid of his footprints and cleaned Felix's skin so no fingerprints would be found. He then fled back to his den.

 

His body took 6 hours to be found and it caused an uproar on the Internet. Many people mourned this loss, tributes were made across the world. Jeff was happy about this news; he wanted attention. He knew that killing this popular Internet idol was taking it to the next level. He was happy about this, he wanted more deaths, and soon he would have to find a new home.

 

"Boy, that was a blast!" he thought. "This is so fun... not only do I get a spot in the news, but the whole Internet is talking about it. I should do this more often." YouTuber's were well known, though they weren't nearly as protected as politicians, leaders and actors. He was ready to take it to the next level, and it was time to be just a bit more deadly.

 

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Note : now obviously it has been a long time since pt.1 and I am not as interested in writing this but at the same time I am, I am really tired though which has caused me to make this a bit cheesy but hopefully you, dear readers enjoyed this peice :D

[GoldRock 6,165]

- Completely edited grammar and phrasing - in particular, you should probably work on dividing up your sentences using full stops! 

The story itself is quite good once everything is sorted out and corrected to make it more readable, well done ^_^

[mydoom.exe 5,154]

The first time I've ever seen someone dare kill of Pewds in a story. That part I found very amusing.  :lol:

 

Great job with the story, too bad it's somewhat short - I rather liked it.

[ToHoYoNTaDa 1,147]

Good job!

[zaintahir 458]

The first time I've ever seen someone dare kill of Pewds in a story. That part I found very amusing.  :lol:

 

Great job with the story, too bad it's somewhat short - I rather liked it.

I couldn't think of any names so I just said "Hey lets kill the most popular youtuber in the world" lol

Thanks!

Edited August 12, 2016 by zaintahir

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

I really like reading this :d