Ego, Trust, and People.

[I.Hax.I 128]

Ego, Trust, and People

 

Nowadays in this world it's all about ego, trust, and people. You sometimes trust fake people  put your ego in front of others, and so on.

If you ask me, I would say that I believe in humanity and faith more than money and power, because it doesn't matter how rich, educated, cool, smart, attractive, beautiful, and awesome you believe you are. It's about how you treat people of different level of society, and then it ultimately shows how good you are. The problem we face is our religion and nationality, it's our color, race, and class. A rich man believes he has superiority over a poor person, and same with some white people think they are better than black people. We should care about other's opinions, because you can't understand the situation by your point of view.You need to explore your mind toward others. You are stuck at one thing that you are right and every one is else is completely wrong. This is the problem you have to overcome. You should be kind and generous to your family and friends and to your community. You sometimes  try to ignore people but one day you will have to face the truth. How long will you keep doing  this? This will ultimately make you weaker in your self. All I want to say that it's about YOU! Not others. You want a better society, but don't want to change yourself and you need to.

 

You have to be confident in yourself to face the evil truths of this wold. Every one is not good. You have to judge between and fake and real friend, because the world's most deadly creature is a fake friend. Some one said true,

"A friend in need is a friend indeed"

You have to be a real friend to have real friends because what you want from others is same as they want  from you. If you treat some one good they will treat you even better.

Now lets talk a bit about your ego. Almost 99% people believe they don't believe in any thing such as ego but indeed 99% have ego problems. People show off. What do you get by doing this? You don't need to showoff every time and instead of this you should work better and impress them.You should be happy for having cool things rather  then showing off.

 

If you sum up the whole article into a simple summary and conclude it, it means that you just need to treat people better then you do and they will do the same. Don't put your ego in front of others. Don't show off if you have better than others and instead of this, impress them. That's all about it! Every thing you do is based on your behavior, your attitude, your lifestyle. It's up to you don't depend on others.

 

Thanks guys! Between this is my first article! Hoping to write more :D

Edited December 22, 2016 by Blackdrakon30

[Blackdrakon30 2,943]

Approved.

 

Edits Made:

- Removed unnecessary doubled spaces in front of and behind every comma.

- Added some commas as needed.

- Changed "some time" to "sometimes".

- Removed some double spaces.

- Changed "then" to "than" in one case.

- Split apart a long sentence.

- Changed the first word of every sentence to capitalized.

- Added in a few words for clarity. (Like "rich man" rather than just "rich")

- Changed a sentence to  "same with some white people think they are better than black people." Don't make large sweeping assumptions that could be interpreted as you saying "All white people think they are a superior race." That's very bad to do.

- Changed "others opinion" to "Other's opinions" to be better-fitting the sentence.

- Split another large sentence into two sections.

- Merged "your self" into "yourself"

- Split another large sentence into two sections.

- A few other assorted minor edits.

 

I recommend learning a little more about punctuation for the future, especially with commas and cutting down sentence length. On a side note, welcome to the Amateur Writing Section.  

Edited December 22, 2016 by Blackdrakon30

[r_I_already_won0 2,339]

:mellow: I have really never liked articles like this unless they were written very well.... :mellow:

Sometimes the assumptions and general "life tips" don't work out with real experience...

Edited December 22, 2016 by r_I_already_won0

[I.Hax.I 128]

Approved.

 

Edits Made:

- Removed unnecessary doubled spaces in front of and behind every comma.

- Added some commas as needed.

- Changed "some time" to "sometimes".

- Removed some double spaces.

- Changed "then" to "than" in one case.

- Split apart an long sentence.

- Changed the first word of every sentence to capitalized.

- Added in a few words for clarity. (Like "rich man" rather than just "rich")

- Changed a sentence to  "same with some white people think they are better than black people." Don't make large sweeping assumptions that could be interpreted as you saying "All white people think they are a superior race." That's very bad to do.

- Changed "others opinion" to "Other's opinions" to be better-fitting the sentence.

- Split another large sentence into two sections.

- Merged "your self" into "yourself"

- Split another large sentence into two sections.

- A few other assorted minor edits.

 

I recommend learning a little more about punctuation for the future, especially with commas and cutting down sentence length. On a side note, welcome to the Amateur Writing Section.  

So many mistakes , b/w thnx for doing and telling my mistakes. I will try my best to overcome. 

:mellow: I have really never liked articles like this unless they were written very well.... :mellow:

Sometimes the assumptions and general "life tips" don't work out with real experience...

Thanks :D , can't like your post due to some error. You are right real experience is different from life tips but you need to understand other.

Edited December 22, 2016 by I.Hax.I

[I.Hax.I 128]

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Mistake caught :)

[r_I_already_won0 2,339]

So many mistakes , b/w thnx for doing and telling my mistakes. I will try my best to overcome. 

Thanks :D , can't like your post due to some error. You are right real experience is different from life tips but you need to understand other.

Thank you. :) Didn't expect my criticism to be so well-received. 

[VaudeVille 1,428]

You might want to do a bit more research before writing such an article.

[D.a.r.kShadow 551]

Pls write an article introducing yourself so we can believe you aren't Asifmehood

[mydoom.exe 5,154]

 

Come on guys, show the dude some love for actually writing an article.

[I.Hax.I 128]

 

Come on guys, show the dude some love for actually writing an article.

Thanks Man , u r so cool. Love you : )

[I.Hax.I 128]

You might want to do a bit more research before writing such an article.

 

Yea right.

Pls write an article introducing yourself so we can believe you aren't Asifmehood

Sure.

[google3_tanker_TURBO 369]

Approved.

 

Edits Made:

- Split apart an long sentence.

 

Mistake caught

It ain't "an long sentence" it's 'a long sentence'. B)

[TTK_229 1,080]

Approved.

 

Edits Made:

- Removed unnecessary doubled spaces in front of and behind every comma.

- Added some commas as needed.

- Changed "some time" to "sometimes".

- Removed some double spaces.

- Changed "then" to "than" in one case.

- Split apart an long sentence.

- Changed the first word of every sentence to capitalized.

- Added in a few words for clarity. (Like "rich man" rather than just "rich")

- Changed a sentence to  "same with some white people think they are better than black people." Don't make large sweeping assumptions that could be interpreted as you saying "All white people think they are a superior race." That's very bad to do.

- Changed "others opinion" to "Other's opinions" to be better-fitting the sentence.

- Split another large sentence into two sections.

- Merged "your self" into "yourself"

- Split another large sentence into two sections.

- A few other assorted minor edits.

 

I recommend learning a little more about punctuation for the future, especially with commas and cutting down sentence length. On a side note, welcome to the Amateur Writing Section.

 

dang m8 u r a cabbage

[Blackdrakon30 2,943]

dang m8 u r a cabbage

You're a wizard cabbage, Harry.

[Viking4s 10,791]

Hi I.Hax.I nice to see you had a go at it. :)

You can edit your own post if you need too: if you spotted a mistake or you want to change something.

Looking forward reading more article from you.

Edited December 22, 2016 by Viking4s

[I.Hax.I 128]

Hi I.Hax.I nice to see you had a go at it. :)

You can edit your own post if you need too: if you spotted a mistake or you want to change something.

Looking forward reading more article from you.

Yea , we met in chat few days ago :D. Thanks 

[NewbieCake 3,067]

 

Ego, Trust, and People

 

 

 

 You should be happy for having cool things rather  then  than showing off.

 

 

Edited December 25, 2016 by NewbieCake

[yonatanthesuper 314]

it's stupid of you to say "white people think they're better than black people" because thats only 1% true,secondly black people are stronger and the friends i had were black were really cool and popular,nice and have all the perfect talents a king has so please think before saying such a thing even tho i know your trying to say it's wrong.

imagine i say, some people hate your ugly face but i am actually trying to say something nice.

Edited December 25, 2016 by yonatanthesuper

[I.Hax.I 128]

it's stupid of you to say "white people think they're better than black people" because thats only 1% true,secondly black people are stronger and the friends i had were black were really cool and popular,nice and have all the perfect talents a king has so please think before saying such a thing even tho i know your trying to say it's wrong.

imagine i say, some people hate your ugly face but i am actually trying to say something nice.

Dude? Whole Africa and America used to be controlled by white people once and now still many places. May be the way I wrote might be wrong.

[Jwimmer 2,835]

Dude? Whole Africa and America used to be controlled by white people once and now still many places. May be the way I wrote might be wrong.

Saying "white people think they are better than black people" is super, super taboo. They way you worded it makes it sound like you are saying an entire race thinks its better than another race, when in reality, as yonathan said, it is more like less than 1% that thinks that. Just because Europeans used to essentially own Africa and the Americas (hundreds of years ago in some cases, btw), does not mean that current Caucasians think they are better. You may not have meant that statement, but I would strongly advise rewording it if you have not already.

 

EDIT: It appears yonathan left out the most important word of the "taboo" statement: some. In this case, what you said is, unfortunately, true. Misquoting is quite annoying...

Edited December 26, 2016 by Jwimmer

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

 

 

Thanks guys! Between this is my first article! Hoping to write more :D

 

Nicely written though i havent read it completely yet just read title and last line. Between this is my first article? I guess you wanted to write By The Way.xD

[I.Hax.I 128]

Nicely written though i havent read it completely yet just read title and last line. Between this is my first article? I guess you wanted to write By The Way.xD

May be..

[Spit_Fyre 334]

I'd say these days, people are more worried about keeping up appearances. So telling apart fake from real is tougher.

 

All you need to do to shred someone's facade is place yourself "beneath" them (Give them some power over you). Act, so they feel superior. Place yourself in a position where you are in debt of a favor from them. Notice what they say/do then. Do they use the opportunity to deny you or play God and settle scores with you? Or are they more empathetic? Do they still give you the respect/credit that you deserve? It tells you a lot about them...

 

Although, you can't base it off just once instance. It's easier online - a couple of aliases can serve you well.