[Poem] Railgun

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

Railgun

 

 

 

This gun is a pro,

Xp battles always start with a "go"

Many people use it for show -_-,

Don't be like them though :P.

 

This gun needs skills,

But with this you can get easy kills! ;) 

After using it you would need sleeping pills,

As its more dangerous than dentist's drills! :wacko: 

 

"Wasp" and "Hornet" are best with it,

With any hull it can be fit.

It makes your opponents look like **** :P ,

Its pro you have to admit.

 

But the turret called Smoky,

Can make Railgun users cocky  -_- 

Smokies become to creepy,

Once they start to be sneeky :unsure: 

 

Now, go and play with this gun,

Believe me XP/BP is fun!  ^_^ 

But be brave enough and don't run,

Because then you will get none! :mellow: 

 

I typed a whole poem! Wow!   :blink: 

It took me so much time, how? :huh: 

It has taken half an hour, ow! 

Don't just read, give it a like now!  :D  :lol: 

Edited December 27, 2016 by HAPPSHOT

[I.Hax.I 128]

 Approved

 

very few spelling and grammar errors

 

 

On a side Welcome to AWC!. Nice poem.

Edited December 29, 2016 by I.Hax.I

[TTK_229 1,080]

Plis make it die

[Tofu 6,773]

Plis make it die

Xp/bp ftw

 

 

Nice poem tho

[Ninja 10,468]

Approved

 

edited the format

very few spelling and grammar errors

 

 

On a side Welcome to AWC!. Nice poem.

You have more grammar errors in that post than the entire AWC section combined...

 

And the article isn't formatted properly.

 

EDIT: BD30 has formatted it now.

Edited December 28, 2016 by Ninja

[NERF836 202]

No bp ftw

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

Lol why not any mod's post below it?

[r_Valk8 2,086]

Lol why not any mod's post below it?

Me 2, Wondering that....

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

Me 2, Wondering that....

You didnt like my poem :(

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

Thanks guys for liking it! 41 views but only 9 likes? :(  I pro and noobiness even on AWS :P

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

Guys or mods! Please tell me those things in which this poem lacked in!

[Tofu 6,773]

Guys or mods! Please tell me those things in which this poem lacked in!

Sexiness

[Blackdrakon30 2,943]

Fun poem.  :P
 
Edits:
- Added in a space after commas contained within sentences
- Title properly centered
- Removed some periods (Only do a period if when reading it out loud you would fully stop. If you just pause, a comma or no punctuation is more suitable.)
- Altered a period to a comma
- Changed title so people know what it is at a glance

- Capitalized the turret names
 
Re-Approved.
 

 

Edited December 27, 2016 by Blackdrakon30

[BLASTER872 1,892]

Thanks guys for liking it! 41 views but only 9 likes? :(  I pro and noobiness even on AWS :P

Just so you know, "views" does not equate to unique viewers.

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

Fun poem.  :P

 

Edits:

- Added in a space after commas contained within sentences

- Title properly centered

- Removed some periods (Only do a period if when reading it out loud you would fully stop. If you just pause, a comma or no punctuation is more suitable.)

- Altered a period to a comma

- Changed title so people know what it is at a glance

- Capitalized the turret names

 

Re-Approved.

 

 

 

Hey black can you send me all those mistakes outlined in my poem in a pm?

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

Just so you know, "views" does not equate to unique viewers.

Um explain it a bit please? xD

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

You have more grammar errors in that post than the entire AWC section combined...

 

And the article isn't formatted properly.

My article isint formatted properly? ;(

[Ninja 10,468]

My article isint formatted properly? ;(

It is now, there was some 'administrative error' in the original approval, its all good now. :) Nice poem BTW.

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

It is now, there was some 'administrative error' in the original approval, its all good now. :) Nice poem BTW.

Ohk thanks. but how did hax approve it?

[Capable 4,614]

Awesome Poem! Wow! Well Done!

[Ninja 10,468]

Ohk thanks. but how did hax approve it?

Apparently a younger brother of one of the helpers managed it, idk how. :lol:

[I3.R.0 1,700]

Nice poem dude! +1 :D <3

[arnav0506 2,777]

:O happ Sir I bow to you :O +13267786667+87588.

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

:o happ Sir I bow to you :o +13267786667+87588.

LOL thanks!

 

Nice poem dude! +1 :D <3

Thanks tanki_spy ;p

 

Apparently a younger brother of one of the helpers managed it, idk how. :lol:

He hax xD

[I.Hax.I 128]

You have more grammar errors in that post than the entire AWC section combined...

 

And the article isn't formatted properly.

 

EDIT: BD30 has formatted it now.

Haters gonna hate , I couldn't edit his post.