Contest [Issue 61] The Storyteller

[Crip 4,735]

@Time @Remaine

[Spit_Fyre 334]

My entry:

 

@Mr.Aced it.

[lol_XD_the_master 0]

http://ratings.tankionline.com/en/user/UkranianLegend/

Edited February 8, 2017 by lol_XD_the_master

[ftp 1,696]

Can we make a rap song instead ._.?

EDIT: Is a Poem acceptable?

Edited February 8, 2017 by crystalmaiden

[iwanttobegeneralsimo 7]

Good writing Tankers Try encouraging other people and have tanker theme battle in your stories

Edited February 8, 2017 by iwanttobegeneralsimo

[Flexoo 6,980]

Can we make a rap song instead ._.?

EDIT: Is a Poem acceptable?

If the poem will tell some story, then yes.

[iwanttobegeneralsimo 7]

Flexo how do you put a member in that form

[iwanttobegeneralsimo 7]

Flexoo?

[Flexoo 6,980]

[.member=flexoo] -  remove the dot when posting.

[iwanttobegeneralsimo 7]

it

[mgdance 0]

member='mgdance']

 

[TTK_229 1,080]

member='mgdance']

 

False.

@mgdance

[TriNitroToIuene 4,765]

@TriNitroToIuene @King k,

Edited February 9, 2017 by TriNitroToIuene

[Raredust 454]

@hellohelloworld, I live in @sirogojno, and my name is @danielGan. Unfortunately, people call me ... I am a @Lazy.B0Y. I know, it's @Quite ing, but at least I'm enough to tell you. I spent my watching @The of the @Sunset, eating, and...pretty much nothing. My parents, @Ben and @Shar0n, took @Care of all of my s. They're the @Best. All I did was tell them how to get the @BestPrice for the stuff I wanted, but they were @Better at doing it anyway...

 

, it was ; I could @Remaine like that forever. I was living my @Dream, and that @Dream_is_beautiful. People told me I needed to @xSTARTx doing something with my life, but I just told them "@MayBeAday, but not today".

 

But now... Now I'm on my own. It's me the world. What now? I have a . I knew this day would come, @So I know why it @Surprises me. I'll have to become a @xMoneyMaker; it's . It's @Finally @Time. All my life I've been @Therider, now I'll have to be the days a year...plus . But what should I do? My dad is a ; he does @PracticeParkourStunts. Once he jumped over @50tanks. Now that's @Devotion! And my mom, she's . She @Amazes everyone with her . How am I supposed to their @Grandeur? I'm @Justsomeonelol; I'm @just an @boy_daniel. Even my is more @Exotic than me. I'm just a @Bad @dumperson.

 

But, then again, my dad told me "". Who @Says I'm an @almightyfailure? Who s I'm an @AbsoluteZero? @Maybe I'm not. I will ! My should be enough. I'm actually pretty @Handsomethecool @tuffguy told me. And I've got good eye@Sight, and I have @Vitality. I even have @3lambs to be @Roasted. Grab a @Spoon, !....., @itstrue, it must be : I'm a @Desperate_Noob.

 

 

Word count: 312

 

[Guest Maserati]

I died.

The End.

[Crip 4,735]

I died.

The End.

@R.I.P

[TriNitroToIuene 4,765]

I died.

The End.

@So @Happy

Edited February 12, 2017 by TriNitroToIuene

[DeathByBoss 104]

@So @Happy

You're @Free to do @Whatever you want.

Edited February 13, 2017 by DeathByBoss

[tere8 132]

@But

'Testing'

[GoldRock 6,165]

The @dictatorship of the Newspaper was a highly @Important position. No @Wonder @N.o.6.o.d.y knew @W-h-o  really in @Control. , @The stated @Leader was @Shedinja… @But @How did he get into @Power? The truth behind this @Mystery is @One of @EvilPride and @Sly @Fraud. The ultimate deception.

 

***

 

January 2018.

 

It was now or never. @Shedinja walked briskly through the dimly-lit corridors, keeping head down as he stuck to the @Shadows. He could hear a loud Serbian voice coming from the floor below, ed by muffled laughter. @Fen-Harel was keeping the Reporters @Busy in the social room, as planned. Good.

 

It wasn’t long before his path was @blocked by a huge @Titanium door. @Looking around to check the coast was clear, Shedinja @Keyed in the password. With a beep and an @orange , the door slid back to reveal a huge @Safe. The place where the entire Newspaper @Funds of millions of @Crystals were @Guarded. His breath becoming more rapid with every passing , he entered the @Combination, and the safe @Clicked open.

 

***

 

“@Agent.Trojan, have you got the crystals? Do they suspect anything?” @GoldRock asked, sitting back in his lime-@GreenChair as Shedinja entered. 

“@Agent.Provokator, the problem is @Remaine…” started Shedinja, but GoldRock held up a hand to @Silence him.

“I know about Rem. He’s too @Sharp for his own good – he suspects we replaced the rest of the Newspaper team with clueless s on purpose. He’s onto us, isn’t he? No matter. I will deal with him, @just @Like I dealt with @Night-Sisters.”

Shedinja nodded, with a @DISTINCT sigh of relief.

 

“And now,” GoldRock @Continued, “@You are no longer needed. The @Time has come to replace you.”
He pulled a revolver out of his pocket with a small, @Evil.Smile.
“Wha-what…?”
“Fen is a @Loyal agent. He will take place.”

 

GoldRock paused for a moment, took aim, and fired.

 

 

Word count: 310 words.

 

 

Version without usernames:

The dictatorship of the Newspaper was a highly important position. No wonder nobody knew who was really in control. Sure, the stated leader was Shedinja… but how did he get into power? The truth behind this mystery is one of evil pride and sly fraud. The ultimate deception.

 

***

 

January 2018.

 

It was now or never. Shedinja walked briskly through the dimly-lit corridors, keeping his head down as he stuck to the shadows. He could hear a loud Serbian voice coming from the floor below, followed by muffled laughter. Fen-Harel was keeping the Reporters busy in the social room, as planned. Good.

 

It wasn’t long before his path was blocked by a huge titanium door. Looking around to check the coast was clear, Shedinja keyed in the password. With a beep and an orange light, the door slid back to reveal a huge safe. The place where the entire Newspaper funds of millions of crystals were guarded. His breath becoming more rapid with every passing second, he entered the combination, and the safe clicked open.

 

***

 

“Agent Trojan, have you got the crystals? Do they suspect anything?” GoldRock asked, sitting back in his lime-greenchair as Shedinja entered.

“Agent Provocateur, the problem is Remaine…” started Shedinja, but GoldRock held up a hand to silence him.

“I know about Rem. He’s too sharp for his own good – he suspects we replaced the rest of the Newspaper team with clueless mults on purpose. He’s onto us, isn’t he? No matter. I will deal with him, just like I dealt with Night-Sisters.”

Shedinja nodded, with a distinct sigh of relief.

 

“And now,” GoldRock continued, “you are no longer needed. The time has come to replace you.”
He pulled a revolver out of his pocket with a small, evil smile.
“Wha-what…?”
“Fen is a loyal agent. He will take your place.”

 

GoldRock paused for a moment, took aim, and fired.

[tere8 132]

My entry:

There once a young tanker called @bob. He loved @Defeat enemies @But he could not @KILL anyone at . This poor guy needed help. He went to get therapy from @One of his friends. But this was an evil wizard who from the darkest place on @Earth. This person was trying to kill him! He fought off this brutal wizard bravely and valiantly. Eventually, he his sword that appeared out of nowhere and he fell to @The ground. The evil wizard was finally dead. But unfortunately for Bob, his had @just heard the terrible fate of his @Father and was now swearing he would get his @Revenge. The young child looked everywhere from Canada to Australia until he came to the @Great Wall of China. There stood Bob, the man who had killed his father. He looked at him disapprovingly, waiting for something to happen. But no, Bob stood there as still as a statue. The son, who was getting @bored of this @Silence, pulled out a machine gun. Bob backed away, knowing that he was absolutely doomed. @So, mr. bob, we meet at @Last, he said.

'I did not mean to kill him, he was one of my @Best friends and I never meant to @HURT him and I deeply regret what I have @Done. @Why bother killing me if it will get @You into huge trouble. You don't want that, do you? Let me myself up and then we can an @End to this . Please, let me help you.

Hmm... I will let you give yourself in but I must every step you take. And if you anything at all, I will shoot you in an instant. They walked down the wall towards the nearest police station.

I didn't repeat any nicks and it's 302 words. Some of the nicks I used weren't on the forum :( so I've incorporated as many as possible.

Edited February 15, 2017 by tere8

[Mr.Ace 1,116]

Goldey is back :3 this time, with an entry.

 

and thus the savage goldrock eradicated the very chance of anyone winning  :ph34r:

Edited February 14, 2017 by Mr.Ace

[Spit_Fyre 334]

I who the @CameraGuy . g. @But he had Spectator Powers.

 

Anyway , it's a @Beautiful summer @Night on @Silence. @themoonslayer @waits by the @Glowing @Flag, a @Shadow among shadows dark. His @Friends should be @Here2Play @S00N. A Quiet wind @hugsme as I watch the @Green-3d @leaves , glittergloss'ed in a @Mo0nspell...

 

An @Anonnymus NullPointerException at the @TOP @Right of the window Shatter3d the @P.E.R.F.E.C.T.I.0.N. :excl: :blink:

 

Our 's, Awakend from his Reverie...

 

The @CameraGuy @Zooms @Outmax - and there, by the @Pipez.11  o' - a @BlackWasp777 materializes. He is ed by , (coz is @just OVERKlLL) and @Finally, a pair of @twinnns.

 

@themoonslayer lets off a T3ST3R shot and with some help from the @Ridiculous_Ricochet777 lands turret first, in a @flip777. !

 

@So, as @Director cum @Editor cum -R-A-T-O-R, I @q.u.i.c.k.ily @Recap our plan - amid the Endless Madness and @Chatter characteristic of a Flip_Squad. in position, @themoonslayer @Faces his prey - an @INNOCENT_HUNTER, seeking the @Silver_Moon.

 

To be @Continued...

 

 

 

And thus the @Legend of MoonSiIence came to be. The @S.L.A.Y.E.R still does @live2kill; today and @F.O.R.E.V.E.R.Rmore :)

 

 

 

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Wordcount: 185 approx

 

The unabridged version below:

 

 

I who the @CameraGuy . g. @But he had @Spectator_Powers.

 

Anyway , it's a @Beautiful @Night on @Silence. @themoonslayer @waits by the @Glowing @Flag, a @Shadow among . His @Friends should be @Here2Play @S00N. A @Quiet_wind @hugsme as I watch the @Green-3d @leaves , @glitterglossed in a @Mo0nspell...

 

An @Anonnymus @NullPointerException at the @TOP @Right of the @Shatter3d the @P.E.R.F.E.C.T.I.0.N. :excl: :blink:

 

Our 's, from his ...

 

The @CameraGuy @Zooms @Outmax - and there, by the @Pipez.11  o' - a @BlackWasp777 materializes. He is ed by , (coz is @just @OVERKlLL) and @Finally, a pair of @twinnns.

 

@themoonslayer lets off a shot and with some help from the @Ridiculous_Ricochet777 lands turret first, in a @flip777. !

 

@So, as @Director cum @Editor cum -R-A-T-O-R, I @q.u.i.c.k.ily @Recap our plan - amid the @EndlessMadness and @Chatter characteristic of a @Flip_Squad. in position, @themoonslayer @Faces his prey - an @INNOCENT_HUNTER, seeking the @Silver_Moon.

 

To be @Continued...

 

 

 

And so the @Legend of @MoonSiIence came to be. The @S.L.A.Y.E.R still does @live2kill; today and @F.O.R.E.V.E.R.Rmore :)

 

 

 

 

 

I suppose I should still put this up since I wasted some time on it... was fun though

Edited February 14, 2017 by Spit_Fyre

[BRO0088 1,724]

I cant insert a player's rank beside his nickname :(  :( CAN any1 acknowledge how it is done? 

[Flexoo 6,980]

^ Hello. Please check the main post for instructions.