[Poem] Human

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

                                                      Human

 

What is a human? 

Many people ask.

This question is common,

But explaining this is a difficult task 

 

I will try to define,

But you may ask, how?

Remember, this is only the point of view of mine,

But it will be explained, someway or somehow   

 

According to me, the types of human are four,

Gentle, cruel, lazy and those who always want more   

But on the life-sea, whose boat will soar?

And who will get a good result knocking at the door?  

 

A handful of people are gentle and kind,

"How to help?" that's what's all in their mind   

To help others, how hard they grind!

People like this are really hard to find.

 

Some people are very cruel,  

They use others as a tool.   

So many they befool,

Just to fill up their own fuel   

 

Many are very lazy,

All things in front to them are hazy   

They don't even get up if they want something like CRAZY,

But that's why people can dupe them easy   

 

A group of people in our world just want more things,

According to them, happiness is what money brings   

But later, money hurts them like bee stings,

And when they die, their relatives dance and sing   

 

So, this is my approach to human kind,

Which one do you want to be? 

But remember, we must become ourselves,

Whatever you want to see.

 

 

 

 

 

 

   

Edited April 15, 2017 by HAPPSHOT

[Crip 4,735]

Approved.

 

 

Edits:

- 1 or two grammar corrections ("whose" not "who's").

- Corrected spacing.

- Removed overbright colouring and replaced it with something less flashy.

- One sentence rephrased.

 

Interesting. Nice rhyming, though I'm far from an expert when judging poems is concerned. Keep it up!

[MSI 1,926]

Are those emojis that important?

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

Are those emojis that important?

Yes  :ph34r:

 

Approved.

 

 

Edits:

- 1 or two grammar corrections ("whose" not "who's").

- Corrected spacing.

- Removed overbright colouring and replaced it with something less flashy.

- One sentence rephrased.

 

Interesting. Nice rhyming, though I'm far from an expert when judging poems is concerned. Keep it up!

Thanks, can you please tell me the rephrased sentence?

[Penguin40 1,714]

First and foremost, never use emoticons, NEVER! They horribly degrade your poem, and it really looks silly with 'em. Also, don't beg for likes at the end, that also lowers the quality. And for poems, try not to adopt such a casual attitude, k? Otherwise, the poem itself was k, but don't use emoticons and don't beg for likes. K?

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

First and foremost, never use emoticons, NEVER! They horribly degrade your poem, and it really looks silly with 'em. Also, don't beg for likes at the end, that also lowers the quality. And for poems, try not to adopt such a casual attitude, k? Otherwise, the poem itself was k, but don't use emoticons and don't beg for likes. K?

Meh that was to make it humorous :c. + everyone in HD clan does it when he/she writes something, and i am in that clan as well :P

 

 

CHANGED, like if you like this new last stanza

Edited April 14, 2017 by HAPPSHOT

[Penguin40 1,714]

Meh that was to make it humorous :c. + everyone in HD clan does it when he/she writes something, and i am in that clan as well :P

 

 

CHANGED

Lemme give you a list of who doesn't do that and still belongs to HD clan:

 

• @Blackdrakon30
• @KillerGnat
• @DragonOfStorms
• @mydoom.exe
• @kaisdf
• @sre123
• @Penguin40

Is that list satisfactory enough for you? That means - don't beg for likes, and don't use emoticons in articles. Otherwise, the poem was good, k?

 

oh damn you were too quick, didnt let me write this 

still a tip for future, don't beg for likes, don't use emoticons. k? Slangs aren't much appreciated either, except in story dialogues. 

Edited April 14, 2017 by Penguin40

[fe4f3 1,002]

There's one more kind of humans, it's called "RIDDLER_8".

[arnav0506 2,777]

Resplendent poem, boy :) Keep it up )

[skills_from_Shallum 170]

Nice poem bro<3

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

 

 

oh damn you were too quick, didnt let me write this 

still a tip for future, don't beg for likes, don't use emoticons. k? Slangs aren't much appreciated either, except in story dialogues. 

Eh, ok nub lol i just made that last lines within some seconds  :ph34r:

 

There's one more kind of humans, it's called "RIDDLER_8".

Ya i forgot, next poem on him xDD

 

Resplendent poem, boy :) Keep it up )

Thanks father  :P

 

Nice poem bro<3

Thanx sis <3  :ph34r:

[Tofu 6,773]

Lemme give you a list of who doesn't do that and still belongs to HD clan:

 

• @Blackdrakon30
• @KillerGnat
• @DragonOfStorms
• @mydoom.exe
• @kaisdf
• @sre123
• @Penguin40

Is that list satisfactory enough for you? That means - don't beg for likes, and don't use emoticons in articles. Otherwise, the poem was good, k?

 

oh damn you were too quick, didnt let me write this 

still a tip for future, don't beg for likes, don't use emoticons. k? Slangs aren't much appreciated either, except in story dialogues. 

I am not in HD :P

[skills_from_Shallum 170]

Eh, ok nub lol i just made that last lines within some seconds  :ph34r:

 

Ya i forgot, next poem on him xDD

 

Thanks father  :P

 

Thanx sis <3  :ph34r:

Kyy bhai Gender Badal diya 

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

Kyy bhai Gender Badal diya 

:ph34r:  :ph34r:

[kaisdf 3,320]

Lemme give you a list of who doesn't do that and still belongs to HD clan:

 

 

• @Blackdrakon30
• @KillerGnat
• @DragonOfStorms
• @mydoom.exe
• @kaisdf
• @sre123
• @Penguin40

Is that list satisfactory enough for you? That means - don't beg for likes, and don't use emoticons in articles. Otherwise, the poem was good, k?

 

oh damn you were too quick, didnt let me write this 

still a tip for future, don't beg for likes, don't use emoticons. k? Slangs aren't much appreciated either, except in story dialogues.

DoS, MyBae and you are still in HD? Fact check plz? Also, literally my most recent post contains emojis :P

Great :P poem :D happ :ph34r:...

Also ;) penny, :wub: #DontTellMeWhatToDo b) #LikeIfYouLubMe :woozy: #HastagsAre#Bae #CantRememberAnyOtherEmojis

And now for an old, animated emoji that got removed and so no longer works :tank:

 

 

Ok jokes aside, yes we may use emojis in clan, but that is in very short, informal messages. In a long, formal piece (like a poem or story), I would strongly recommend not using them.

 

As I'm seeing this after they got removed, I do think it is an excellent poem, and an inspirational work :D

 

Likes pl0x

[arnav0506 2,777]

Eh, ok nub lol i just made that last lines within some seconds  :ph34r:

 

Ya i forgot, next poem on him xDD

 

Thanks father  :P

 

Thanx sis <3  :ph34r:

Arrr - Baap bana diya.. Kya pata agli baar "Baap" pey kavita likhega hamara Happy-Shot :lol:

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

Arrr - Baap bana diya.. Kya pata agli baar "Baap" pey kavita likhega hamara Happy-Shot :lol:

Kya pta  :ph34r: .

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

 

As I'm seeing this after they got removed, I do think it is an excellent poem, and an inspirational work :D

 

Likes pl0x

Thanks bro! Though i spent hardly more than 15 min in this xD

[ASTON-THE-BEST 97]

Very well written poem! loved it!  ^_^

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

Very well written poem! loved it!  ^_^

thanks. I hope to write better 

Edited April 17, 2017 by HAPPSHOT

[Mr.Meowth 72]

Well written poem. Please adjust the spacing in the bottom. Some spaces are blank

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

Well written poem. Please adjust the spacing in the bottom. Some spaces are blank

That was done by nub savage and i am 2 lazy to edit :p