[Poem] The Story of my Life

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

                                            The Story of my life

 

This is gonna be long,

Sing it like a song!

 

 

​In the beginning,

I had no score.

But the world which is challenging,

Was constantly banging at the door!

 

Then I started to fight,

But I got killed at first sight.

Nothing was right,

Still, I worked hard day and night.

 

Slowly, I ranked.

With my full mu Rico I tanked.

But still sometimes, I got spanked.

I really was out-blanked. 

 

At the rank of Warrant Officer,

I started using Railgun.

To use it, my clan put me under pressure,

But with that I was a fail-one.

 

I tried, I tried.

People called me " the kid who cried",

As based on my result.

But I just didn't want to be called a mult!

 

By using Railgun, I did realise.

It gave you more respect,

No matter what's your other equip size!

Perhaps, that's the important aspect.

 

Though for Railgun I did grind,

But my first M2 was Freeze.

To my red hot mind,

It did bring a cool breeze!

 

Then I made good friends.

Each other's problems we did mend.

So much time, together we did spend!

It seemed like our happiness didn't have an end!

 

But in between came out life...

Our attention to another direction it did drive.

Oh, It cut our enjoyment like a knife!

But our connections by our hearts, still do thrive.

 

Finally,I bought my dream equipment.

Which was Hornet-Railgun.

But as I didn't buy xp/bp's special paint,

I couldn't have fun in Ru1.

 

The Module System helped me a lot,

Cause now I did fit in Xp/Bp slot!

The special paints, didn't even need to be bought!

It was the best update by Tanki,I thought.

 

Then I started doing many 1v1,

As I got inspired by duelists.

But then, I came across the term "run",

And of verbal fights,I found myself amidst...

 

Suddenly,my old friend came back!

In my mind, the abusing was pushed aback.

I never knew, when the sky from Blue turned Black.

A smile on my face, he always did crack.

 

At sales, I bought Viking and Vulcan,

When used with DD, opponents ran.

As I didn't have a future plan,

I joined a super-spammy clan.

 

The clan name was Happy Dragons,

At first, it was a haunt of Spammers.

To fit its members, one would need a wagon.

And there are many people there with perfect grammar.

 

In this clan, we care for each other.

Though not pro,

We live like Brothers and Sisters!

And we don't have an issue of EGO.

 

The clan training are so fun.

We always see towards the bright sun!

Even if we lose badly, we never run,

Cause we aim to be the No.1!

 

Till now, I have experienced a lot of things.

Except learning verbal-fighting,

I don't regret anything.

Lets wait and see what the future brings!

 

The Story of my life - Helen keller Happ

Edited May 15, 2017 by HAPPSHOT

[Crip 4,735]

Approved!

 

 

Edits:

- Removed spoiler.

- Changed a word.

- Corrected 2 typos.

- Made sure that some of the rhyming made sense.

- Removed random capitalised letters.

 

I like it! I think it's even better than your previous poems. Though I must say, there is a fine line between reality and poetical fiction, so to speak. Even if you require two rhyming words, make sure that you don't stray into sentences that don't make any sense.

 

But the length is good. No need for a spoiler in the future though!

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

Oh thanks! ^^ though to fanfiction they all made sense :c.

 

5 views but 0 likes... :c

[Buddy61 11]

That is so good dude.

[N221 597]

Nice poem

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

That is so good dude.

 

Nice poem

Thanks :3

[Mario3108 462]

Great job! :p

[Kian 242]

Nice poem :)

[TTK_229 1,080]

#HD4lyfe

#flywheelmasterrace

#cthulhu

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

Great job! :P

THanks!

 

Nice poem :)

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#HD4lyfe

#flywheelmasterrace

#cthulhu

#HD4LYFE

I didn't get the last 2 though xD

Thanks :3

[arnav0506 2,777]

Cool poem mate :D Well written :3

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

Cool poem mate :D Well written :3

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[r_Valk8 2,086]

:ph34r:

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

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Suddenly,my old friend came back!

In my mind, the abusing was pushed aback.

I never knew, when the sky from Blue turned Black.

A smile on my face, he always did crack.

 

:wub:  :ph34r:

[marc.jp_44 20,837]

The words are so big.  :blink:

Also, there are a bunch of grammatical fixes needed (XP/BP needs to be all caps for example, etc.). Also it isn't nearly as coherent as it needs to be in a poem. A little tip for you - don't try as hard as you are to make every stanza rhyme. Sometimes a non-rhyming verse is better than one that rhymes but sounds like it rhymes for the hell of rhyming and doesn't really make 100% sense in proper English. Good attempt though, I'd like to see you improve!

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

The words are so big.  :blink:

Also, there are a bunch of grammatical fixes needed (XP/BP needs to be all caps for example, etc.). Also it isn't nearly as coherent as it needs to be in a poem. A little tip for you - don't try as hard as you are to make every stanza rhyme. Sometimes a non-rhyming verse is better than one that rhymes but sounds like it rhymes for the hell of rhyming and doesn't really make 100% sense in proper English. Good attempt though, I'd like to see you improve!

thanks marc! What does coherent mean? xD

[LIMITFULL 1,793]

Nice HAPP!!!

#GoHappyDragons

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

Nice HAPP!!!

#GoHappyDragons

ruu happy dragons!

[marc.jp_44 20,837]

thanks marc! What does coherent mean? xD

Coherent means that everything flows and gels together. It's not something I can really explain but basically it means to be rational and consistent. Edited May 16, 2017 by Marc

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

Coherent means that everything flows and gels together. It's not something I can't really explain but basically it means to be rational and consistent.

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Yup I have it :3

[skills_from_Shallum 170]

Nice poem bro:3

[rui99 9]

Nice poem. I would like to see more!

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

Nice poem bro:3

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