The Hell of humanity-part 1

[etha2007_awesome 44]

The hell of humanity



Jason was a Marshal in the American army who took part in the Third World War. He led a Special
operations force which was made up of Captain Alice and General Tony, on the 23rd of May 2177 he was tasked to lead his team into a secret underground lab only known as "The hell of humanity". This place was called the hell of humanity because of the dangerous weapons being manufactured over there.

Jason called out to Tony and Alice, "Alright, that crazy stuff listed up! We have been tasked to sneak into the 'hell of humanity' to shut down the crazy stuff down there. We are the only ones on this operation because according to reports that crazy place is small so any more tanks wouldn't exactly make this a "stealth" mission."

Alice cried out "what tanks are we using? Hopefully in a situation like this were using Wasps?"

"We are using exactly that Alice.All three of us will use Wasps." Jason replied.Tony, who was only recently assigned to the Special Operations team asked Jason "Where is this lab?"

Jason smiled cruelly "Oh, I think you forgot about those teleportation devices fixed onto Special operations tanks." Tony was now enthusiastic, the thought of teleporting made his day. "When are we going?" Asked Tony, "Right now" replied Jason.

With that, the trio got into there very own tanks, a Hornet Railgun, Isida Hunter and a Thunder Viking. In a few seconds, they were in some sort of testing facility filled with notes, testing pods and monitors.

Before they could say anything an alarm went off and the door in front of them opened.

Three tanks came out of the door, all three of them with an unidentified turret.

A soft mechanical whirring is heard with three lasers pointing at Jason, Alice, and Tony.

A huge yellow burst of energy is seen, a huge explosion is heard, and Jason, Alice and Tony's Tanks shatter in a huge wave of energy and magma.

.................Information bots disturbed, please wait a few seconds for more infor-(STATIC)

(Screaming) Allied Signals lost, Information bot disturbance deprives the system of the ability to see more abou-(Information bot in the American base loses signal with Jason's crew) Please wait another week for us to fix and recover lost data about Special Operations team 0-4-00117.

Edited May 22, 2017 by Quarks

[Quarks 2,255]

Approved

 

 

Edits:

 

Spacing fixed

A few minor grammar changes

 

Overall: Nice beginning to the story, I look forward to reading the rest of it later. Try working on adding more sensory language (I sound like my English teacher) to make it an even more interesting story.

[Sl0m0_warri0r 129]

Nice one etha (I think you kind of stole my thing a tiny bit) (*cough cough* Story of a Legend) 

Great job, We should do a collab :)

[etha2007_awesome 44]

To avoid confusion,the reason Jason says that he and the rest of his team will use wasps and then proceeds to climb into a hornet while his squad climb into a Viking and hunter is actually part of the lore.Wait for part 2 to find out how!