The Legendary Tankers

[sammillionaire 655]

The Legendary Tankers and the Kingdom

-Introduction to the early ones

 

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Main Characters in this Edition

 

 

 

 

 

Chapter -1

 

 

Long time ago, there ruled a 'King Tanker' in the kingdom of 'Tankmenia'. 

He had a beautiful wife, who brought a smile to everyone's face.

 

She took care of four 'noob tanks' (Growing Age). As they grew a little older, 

they had something special in them, their turrets would shine daily at least twice a day.

 

So the Queen and the King went to the kingdom's most accurate 'Fortune Teller' named "Isidus",

Isidus told them not to worry, but he saw something terrible coming towards them, He didn't want 

them to be panicked. He saw both the King and the Queen being murdered by two tankers.

Isidus had a bad feeling that he was going to lose his rulers.

 

Isidus gave it a second try and said, "You have a good future" to the 'four tanks'.

(Rico and Shafto were the eldest, Streker and Thunda were the youngest)

 

Isidus couldn't control over himself and explained the first prediction to the King.

After hearing this the King ordered all of his Army to take his children away to a town

far away from 'Tankmenia'. As the army traveled through the thick forest, they heard many

voices coming from the Kingdom.

 

 

Chapter -2

 

After hearing those screams, half of the army who were ordered to take care of the children, rushed

to the Kingdom immediately. The other half continued their journey gloomily.

While they returned to the Kingdom, they immediately rushed to protect the King and Queen. As

they stepped their foot into the hall, they saw the bodies of their Rulers lying on the floor.

With broken hearts, they carried them and buried them on behalf of the kingdom, with respect. 

 

The next day, the Army ordered everyone in the Kingdom to gather around, they questioned them

for information about yesterday's incident.  None of them had seen it, and then came forward Isidus,

he explained them about what he predicted. Hearing this the Army was furious and jailed Isidus.

 

Their Kingdom was no more a Kingdom without a King and a Queen,

so they sent a letter to Rico and Shafto - about what had happened, but they remained calm.

All the 'four' camped at a different Kingdom named 'Drugmenia'. They worked as slaves to the people

over there.

 

 

Chapter -3

 

 

The Rulers of Drugmenia were shocked to see their turrets shine, so they ordered their Men to enslave

Rico, Shafto, Streker and Thunda. 

As they were brought to the hall, the King arranged for a duel against Rico and Thunda (eldest and youngest) in

the Arena.

Thunda refused to fight in opposition to his own brother, but Rico didn't care - all He wanted was to win.

Seeing him act casual provoked Thunda, and He accepted the dual. Rico had 'Ricochet and Hornet' and 

Thunda had 'Thunder and Hornet'. They were battling as 'beasts set free'. Thunda was so damaged,

seeing this, Streker jumped to the Arena trying to stop them. As he stepped his Wasp on the floor, Shafto 'sniped'

him so hard that he got damaged.

 

 

Chapter -4

 

 

Rico, who was in battle, rushed to get his brother, and seeing this the King commanded Shafto and Rico to

come forward. He asked them to join their Army, and they accepted the offer while the King ordered

His Men to take away Streker and Thunda to their owners and get them their slave lives back.

 

Years passing by, Rico and Shafto became successful hunters of the Army and captured many bases.

Seeing this all happen the King was pleased and ordered everyone to be present in the Hall, including

his brothers. 

 

It was an evening when this event took place, the King declared Rico 'as the next king' of Drugmenia.

He also declared Shafto as the 'Head of the Army'.

 

Streker and Thunda were so sad and always hoped to go back to their Kingdom.

 

 

Chapter -5

 

 

 

After some more years passed by, they couldn't wait to go back and they made a long discussion on how

to escape from Drugmenia, they already lost their Army who took them here in a battle. So now they 

spoke to themselves and accepted any risk to take place. 

 

As they tried to open the lock of their garage, the owner of the house (master of the slaves) came ahead.

He has heard all of their conversation, He asked to them "are you really the Prince of Tankermenia?". 

Streker and Thunda never lied, so they accepted that they are the real Princes of Tankermenia.

Their master felt sorry and asked for forgiveness, Streker and Thunda accepted his apologizes. 

They asked their Master to help them travel to their Kingdom, and their Master accepted this.

 

He hid them in his horse cart filled with haystack, and took them to the forest, while on their way they 

saw some guards standing at the gate of the Kingdom border.

 

There was no way to pass by them. Master got an idea, He said to Streker and Thunda to get down

from the cart and go hide behind any obstacles. He went to the Gatekeepers and told them that something is shining behind that obstacle (where streker was hiding). As one of them went to see whats over there, their Master

Shot one of the Gatekeeper and this made every Guard to aim on Master.

 

Master said to Streker and Thunda to run at the moment the Gatekeeper moves from that place, and Master ran away

making the Army follow him, He shot many Guards provoking the Gatekeepers.

 

While they ran to catch Master, Streker and Thunda rushed to the Gate, with a heavy heart Thunda screamed

"We will return to get you Master!!!" and ran as fast as he could with his brother.

 

 

Chapter -6

 

 

They ran as fast as they could and hid near a big rock, the Army were following them after hearing the

scream. They carefully watched the movements of the grass and shadows. They heard a noise behind 

a big rock, so they went near it and got shocked, they saw a sculpture of a monster. 

 

Seeing this happen, they informed to Shafto (The General) about this. Shafto was busy conquering villages,

so He sent Rico to lead this case in search for his brothers.

 

It was too late for the Drugmenians, as Striker and Thunda already left in search for their kingdom...

 

After a couple of hours, they finally saw the top part of their castle, nothing seemed to be wrong with the castle. 

So they raced to their Kingdom Gates.

 

They reached their Gates and saw sad, dull faces staring at them, "Oh my Prince, Where were you this long?!" asked the
Gate Keeper. They replied whats wrong with the Kingdom and how are the villages.

 

Again with a dull face, He said why don't you go take a look?...

 

 

Chapter -7

 

 

Striker and Thunda kept foot in their land and check out the castle, by seeing this happen the villagers

soon ran to the Castle Gates and tried to stop them entering it.

 

Striker and Thunda were disturbed by the villagers not allowing them to get into their castle, just then the

villagers said to them "We lost our King and Queen with high portion of our Army, We also informed this to

your brother Rico".

 

STOP!, said Thunda, He is not our brother anymore!. 

 

They have turned back on us!, Rico is the future King of Drugmenia and Shafto is the General of their Army.

 

After hearing this the villagers went mad, filled with aggression mixed with sadness. Some of them yelled,

"We are ready to kill Rico and Shafto at your command 'Your Highness'".

 

Thunda and Striker stated "There will be a time when you people will be living back in peace once again, We give

you our word! There may come someone special, someone specially trained for hunting these 'Turncoats', until then

We obliterate this Kingdom from our engines.

 

 

Chapter -8

 

 

Thunda and Striker decided to leave this Kingdom and live in a nearby city.

They called the villagers into a crowd, picked the men who were ready to kill Rico and Shafto and made them 

part of the Army. Thunda showed directions for the prison to the new Army, and then He sees Isidus in prison, He

calls his brother 'Striker' and says "isn't this the man who predicted our future?", Striker says "Yes, its him".

 

He freed Isidus from prison and asks him why he was in prison, Isidus replied in a strong manner "It's just a misunderstanding".

Isidus was appointed as the Head of the Kingdom until they return. Isidus refused at first and then accepted as the villagers

insisted.

 

They were all set to leave to their next life, so they left their Kingdom rejecting all the tears falling down for them...

 

 

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End of Edition-1 

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Roles in this Edition

King of Tankmenia

Queen of Tankmenia

Rico,

Shafto

Streker

Thunda

Isidus

The Army

People of Drugmenia

Rulers of Drugmenia

Master of the Slaves

Gatekeepers 

 

Places in this Edition

 

 

                       

Tankermenia                 Drugmenia

 

                        

Forest                   The Arena

 

                      

Village of Tankermenia     Village of Drugmenia

 

Rio (Modern City)

 

 

 

 

 

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Edited August 1, 2017 by sammillionaire

[tweezers 1,034]

Approved.

 

-Grammar and formatting edits

-Rewrote some sentences to make them understandable. 

 

Overall, the best tip I can give you is to keep track of your tenses, as you seemed to change between present and past tenses way more that is necessary and often in all the wrong places. 

[Sliced 819]

Your chapters are only a few paragraphs in length.....

[sammillionaire 655]

Approved.

 

-Grammar and formatting edits

-Rewrote some sentences to make them understandable. 

 

Overall, the best tip I can give you is to keep track of your tenses, as you seemed to change between present and past tenses way more that is necessary and often in all the wrong places. 

First time, so mistakes are to be made....

 

Your chapters are only a few paragraphs in length.....

It was 4am, I had to hurry typing and will update more chapter and editions of this Story.

[sammillionaire 655]

New chapters added + Characters revealed

[Aromitic 9]

Good work

[Judge 92]

Good Story Sam keep up the good work let the story continue.

Just want to let u know that wen writing story mention the character what they look like in the top section rather then below coz i read the whole story wondering what king and queen would look like as u dint mentioned in details like u mentioned the 2 brothers rico and tunda.

Still a good story tho. for showing a castle image u can refer a MAP Fort Knox in maps section of wiki for a spectated image

 

 

Regards,

Judge/Sinister

[sammillionaire 655]

for showing a castle image u can refer a MAP Fort Knox in maps section of wiki for a spectated image

 

Wow, nice idea. 

 

Will do it

 

 

Just want to let u know that wen writing story mention the character what they look like in the top section rather then below

 

 

Ok updated

Edited June 18, 2017 by sammillionaire

[Kuhaku 87]

LOL

 

this story................

[tankerkuldeep 739]

Awesome story Sam..<3

Waiting for end... :)

[Mario3108 462]

Great story mate! :P

Edited June 13, 2017 by Mario3108

[sammillionaire 655]

Awesome story Sam..<3

Waiting for end... :)

the end is chapter 15 or 20... 

Great history mate! :P

lel history xD

Edited June 18, 2017 by sammillionaire

[sammillionaire 655]

Added more chapters

Edited June 18, 2017 by sammillionaire

[Mario3108 462]

lel history xD

You got my point xd

I got confused for a while :p.

[Lankbouv 6,347]

Where am i? haha

[sammillionaire 655]

Where am i? haha

next edition.. u'll be training the sons of Thunda and Striker  ;)

[railguniz4noobz 2,394]

isidus

[HAPPSHOT 2,029]

Stick to one form  :mellow:

Nice! :ph34r:

[sammillionaire 655]

~Title Changed

[Skills.n.Girls 767]

It could've been better, but amazing idea! I love stories of ancient wars and looking forward for a continue! The chapters could have been longer and more detailed, but the ending sentence is perfect, having an atmosphere just like in the movie (300: The Rise of an Empire).

[gabriele02 3,813]

Loo nice

[sammillionaire 655]

It could've been better, but amazing idea! I love stories of ancient wars and looking forward for a continue! The chapters could have been longer and more detailed, but the ending sentence is perfect, having an atmosphere just like in the movie (300: The Rise of an Empire).

Theres much more to come, I make chapters short just because it makes people read and understand easier!

[RicoGod 1,832]

Nice nice :D

[sammillionaire 655]

Next edition is to be released soon, sorry for the delays!