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Rise of the Abandoned

Part Three

 


 

Ever had the most intense day in your life? When literally nothing goes the way you wish and everything stands against you? That's how every tanker in the field fighting the 2.0s felt. With every shot, the ground trembled. With every kill, fears increased in the heart of the fighters. With every explosion, the earth shook. It was a really hard task to keep track of every event in the battle if it wasn't for @g-force's transmission.

 

@g-force, a courageous warrior, was on the battlefield transmitting a live stream of the events occurring during the war to the Head Quarters of Tanki Online. At the headquarters were some dozens of tankers watching in awe the big TV through which g-force's transmission was being viewed. A tank in golden colors of Premium paint stood in the front constantly talking with g-force. It was , the Community manager of Tanki Online. Next to him was a tanker in white paint, a lead scientist in Tanki Online.

 

"I can't handle this anymore, I definitely need some backup HERE!" @g-force groaned. "These 2.0s are really tough. We need to find their weakness."

 

"They are 2.0s, do you think they'd have a weakness?" The CM questioned.

 

"Those 2.0s were abandoned for a reason, Nives. They had a fatal flaw. I don't know what that is because I never worked for the 2.0 project. But no one else here knows much of the 2.0 project either because all of them who worked for the project just retired after that development."

 

"We can figure it out later. But g-force needs support. We need to get there as fast as possible. Someone with Isida would be helpful." said @Destrod.

 

"I can help him out." shouted out @ZanarkTheWiz, who was now fully repaired and equipped in Wasp M2 and Isida M2. "I can reach there faster because I am able to see his current location via the TLS (Tank Locator System). "

 

"I have a better idea", shouted a tanker. It was @Magenta. "I have experimented with the concept of wormholes. You can travel faster than light. All you have to do this hold out a torch in the direction your back faces, and move into the light. You will be teleported to the intersection where the past, present and the future meets. You have to go to the time where g-force is. In order to do so, just multiply his coordinates with the time 10 minutes ago and you will be right above g-force."

 

"WOW! You knew all these traveling possibilities and never told us?" exclaimed the CM. "ZanarkTheWiz, find g-force and help him now."

 

"All right." He teleported to g-force.

 

ZOOOOOOOM.... BOOM.... "OUCH!" yelled g-force

 

ZanarkTheWiz landed right above g-force. "Get off me! How did you even get here like that!" yelled g-force.

 

"Time travel" replied Zanark.

 

ZanarkTheWiz began healing g-force when they heard a heroic trumpet. Behold, the most violent clans in the English community are here! Penguin, All Kind, Tanki Online Romania, and some of the g-force's best clanmates, @kaisdf, @Mr.Optimistic, @sparkl_awesome, @LIMITFULL, and @arnav0506.

 

"I've got your back bro" sparkl_awesome winked at g-force.

 

The war began. It was a tremendous fight. On the opposite ground were six 2.0s. A blue one that yields a force field, a red one that regenerates its own health, a metallic silver one which can go invisible, a green one which doesn't really seem to have a special power, a violet one that was really violent and a black one which seems to be the boss of the six.

 

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Cracks of lightning were heard. In the of the field stood a steaming legendary tank.

 

"WOOHOOO!" exclaimed all the tankers.

 

To be continued...

Edited by g-force
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Approved.

 

-Rephrased certain areas.

 

Sometimes, it's better to say something in simple, plain language rather than using complicated words. Another thing I noticed was that when you used certain phrases they were in the wrong order, so look out for those when you write. 

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Magenta has always great idea! He going to save Tanki Online, vote for him!

I know there weakness: it's  HTML5!

Actually their weakness is low frame rate and bad rendering xD

 

That's actually why the 2.0 project was abandoned in the first place I think. The devs had found the limits of the engine and 2.0 was scraped because it had too many technical issues to count and fix.

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Actually their weakness is low frame rate and bad rendering xD

 

That's actually why the 2.0 project was abandoned in the first place I think. The devs had found the limits of the engine and 2.0 was scraped because it had too many technical issues to count and fix.

It's because Unity stopped the development of their 3D engine for browser, leaving no choice for TO to drop TO 2.0

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It's because Unity stopped the development of their 3D engine for browser, leaving no choice for TO to drop TO 2.0

Ahh that makes more sense. But mine was plausible too.

 

Also, by that technicality isn't TX just TO2.0 with beefed up graphics???

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Magenta has always great idea! He going to save Tanki Online, vote for him!

I know there weakness: it's  HTML5!

I nor endorse nor support this advertisement. This was made without any permission. Don't blame me for forcing peeps to go off-topic, instead, #BlameNS

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