Wolverine vs Batman: Surprising ramifications (violent)

[LOLKILLERTOTHEDEATH 1,921]

It all started as a normal day. Or about as normal a day you can have when your body is infused with an indestructible metal, accompanied with claws which can extend from your hand and a healing factor which heals you back to normal from fatal injuries. The night before, Deathstroke had revealed to Wolverine that Catwoman wanted to kill the mutant for taking the life of her beloved husband, Batman. Since then, an uneasy restlessness had settled on Logan, due to which sleep was elusive and food was repulsive.

 

Now, the taxi was approaching a building. A large building, tiled with glass glimmering under the sunlight. Without a doubt, it was the main building for Wayne Enterprises. If a person approached the side of the massive building, a big black door, with a pass-code requiring access system would be visible.  On the sides, the word “CWMBOO” was scratched out, evidently not by a normal person. Wolverine extended his claws and pushed them into the hinges of the door, then broke them off and pulled the door off, before going into a long, dark corridor.

 

The first sign that this place was secret was the guards, equipped with M16 assault rifles. There was no way the guards would let him into the facility willy-nilly. Wolverine darted into the building and started to viciously attack the guards, inventing new ways to kill them, from stabbing them in the chest to decapitating them. A few minutes and many bullets later, there were guards and blood everywhere, with broken lights dangling from the ceiling.  

 

Out of the shadows came a person. Rather thin and tall with black eyes and brown hair. As she came closer to the light, it was undeniably clear who she was.

 

“Joe? Can you hear me?”

 

“Yes, mam, what is it?”

 

“He is here. It’s time for my revenge; prepare our fighter immediately.”

 

Wolverine continued on his path until he reached a computer terminal, with every possible piece of information on the death of… Batman. He was about to discover more when he heard a distinctive sound behind him. A sound of metal rubbing ever so slightly against polymer. A shuriken in the form of a bat came cutting through the air, aimed for the face. Wolverine instinctively turned around, extended his claws and deflected the shuriken.

 

“Are you here to give me your condolences Logan?”

 

“What do you mean Selina?” Catwoman now sported a look of bewilderment on her face “Yeah, I figured out your secret Catwoman.”

 

“ Cut to the chase. You know well what I mean. You killed my husband a day after we were married. He was the love of my life. We had made so many plans. We were…. We…” she broke, her voice bitter with anger

 

“ Ya mean me and Jean didn’t have plans? That We didn’t have a list of things we were going to do, places we were going to do?”

 

“That’s beside th-”

 

“NO, IT ISN’T! Batman didn’t think twice before he killed Jean. Before he took everything away from me! Do you have any idea how hellish my life has been since then?! Since the day I realized that my life would never ever be complete again?!”

 

“So you killed Batman, your friend, because of some red-haired chick?”

 

Now he couldn’t hold the anger. Wolverine punched Catwoman’s face and blood covered teeth flying. Catwoman was going to use a gun on Wolverine’s face, but he was too quick. He cut the gun apart with this sharp claws and proceeded to hack and slash at Catwoman. She tried to run, but Wolverine had scratched her far too many times. She collapsed on the floor, in a puddle of blood.

 

“Don’t...blame my husband.... He didn’t… kill Jean..”

 

“WELL WHO DID?!”

 

“It was Da-”

 

Before she could finish her sentence, A man in red and black broke through the roof. He sported two katanas as well as a few guns.

 

“ What kind of miserable freak are ya’ supposed to be?”

 

“I’m Pooldead….. Or Deadpool. Dunno bro, can’t remember what they call me.”

 

“So you’re the one who with the face like a rotten tapeworm?”

 

“Yep, that’s me! Speaking of which, you better hurry. I put a nice Brisket to cook at home and I’d don’t want it to be burned.”

 

“Alright PD or DP, whatever you call yourself, Why exactly are you here?”

 

“Because that nice lady needed my help with killing some …. Guy. Some Bagan? Could you please direct me to the fellow, I’m running a tight schedule like I said”

“You mean Logan?”

 

“Yeah! That’s his name! Now, where is he?”

 

“That’s actually me pal.”

 

“Great! Let’s do this quickly then, I wanna grab a chimichanga as I go home and the restaurant is very prompt at closing.”

 

Wolverine took Deadpool by shock when he started wildly swinging his claws. After a few strikes, there wasn’t much, except for pieces of what had once been a human. Seconds after Wolverine turned around, he heard a voice.

 

“Ok then, you should have told me we were going to start with violent dismembering. I would have eaten a little more Chimichangas.”

 

Deadpool quickly rose to his feet and swung his sword as hard as he could at the chest of his enemy. The sword simply bounced off.

 

“M’kay, let me try that again!” Deadpool tried once again.

 

“Okay, if you’re going to play har-” The comment was replaced with a firm punch to his face, followed by rapid claw-strikes.

 

“SHUT UP!” Logan roared

 

“Gee, someone has anger issues. I mean, all I’m doing here is trying to violently kill you. Calm down!”

 

Calm was not something that could be used to describe the situation at hand. Logan grabbed Deadpool and ripped him in half and approached Catwoman.

 

“Selina. Who did it?”

 

“It was your son,…” her voice trailed off. She lay motionlessly on the floor.

 

Wolverine turned around just in time to see a small crane was flung in his direction before everything went dark.

 

 

 

           

Edited November 18, 2017 by LOLKILLERTOTHEDEATH

[Destrod 2,634]

Approved.

 

- Multiple addition of pronouns

- Removal of 'unnecessary' adjectives and linking verbs

- Changed excessively bright text color

 

Personally, I feel like this plot is reaching a dead end. The characters are just showing up, getting killed and leaving minor clues, which is something a reader doesn't really admire. Although your grammar is gradually improving since your first sequel, the background of all the characters is weak, and virtually hanging by a thread.

Edited November 18, 2017 by Destrod

[Stratosphere 2,234]

I would suggest using a softer colour for the text; my eyes hurt after reading this.

Edited November 18, 2017 by Destrod
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[LOLKILLERTOTHEDEATH 1,921]

Approved.

 

- Multiple addition of pronouns

- Removal of 'unnecessary' adjectives and linking verbs

- Changed excessively bright text color

 

Personally, I feel like this plot is reaching a dead end. The characters are just showing up, getting killed and leaving minor clues, which is something a reader doesn't really admire. Although your grammar is gradually improving since your first sequel, the background of all the characters is weak, and virtually hanging by a thread.

How might I improve the background of the characters problem?

[G.U.A.R.D.I.A.N 7]

this is not the right forum to leace these fictional fan articles, go try reddits, tons of nerd there (meaning bo offence)

[Best_of_thunder_2015 1,354]

I don't get it. 

You are killing the plot of DC comics and Marvel studios. It are like to been seen divided not in fusion-ed manner. 

Make sure, its your imagination but, after reading this i just confused in watching X-men days of future past a bit. 

[LOLKILLERTOTHEDEATH 1,921]

I don't get it. 

You are killing the plot of DC comics and Marvel studios. It are like to been seen divided not in fusion-ed manner. 

Make sure, its your imagination but, after reading this i just confused in watching X-men days of future past a bit. 

X men DOFP? How? I thought of all this all by myself.

 

Unless you mean the whole Jean died thing (which I don't really see how it was in that movie) I don't exactly understand, what do you mean?