Nightbreeze #3

[Possibility 282]

Nightbreeze

Sandbox
9/22/17; 0900 Hours

I woke up with so much haze in my eyes. It felt like someone had shoved a dozen needles in there. When the haze cleared, I saw my tank, my Rail-Wasp on the other side of the map. Speaking of maps, where was I? Is this Sandbox? When I started to run towards my tank, I heard someone shout, "Sleepy-head is up." I turned around. There was a tank that looked identical to the ones that were called the 'Night-sisters,' except with a Hornet. The tanks name was Sister. "Hello," she said. "My name is Sister, and I am the leader of the Night-sisters. We captured you, to turn you to the police. But we have kept you, since the police headquarters have been ransacked, and there are criminals on the loose." She turned around. You can go ahead. I will get back to you." They obviously didn't like it, but they went away.

She turned back around. "I am the leader of the Night-sisters. I was once a homeless orphan, just like you, but the former queen of the Night-sisters took me under her wing. She helped me become one of the best Night-sisters. She promoted me to deputy, and when she died, I took her spot. I am one of the most respected Night-sisters of all time. But I need to tell you something." She leaned in. "There is a reason my name is Sister." Then she closed her eye, as if trying to remember something distant. Then she said the one word I never wanted to hear again. "Alex."

I jumped up and pushed her away. She knew my birth name. I was born to the world as Alex. But almost everyone called me Nightbreeze, except my parents and little sister, who called me Alex. That could only mean one thing. This girl was my sister. I tried to remember what my sisters name was. Holy crap, I thought. 8 years, and I'd forgotten her name. What was wrong with me? I had let anger take over me so much that I had forgotten everything. What was her name?! Was it Emma? Or Sophia? I got it! Olivia was her name. I turned around. She was already crying. I said, "Olivia." She stopped crying. Then she came over and hugged me. I didn't push her away. Somehow, this felt right. She said, "Lets get outta here."



Madness
9/24/17; 1200 Hours

It's been 2 days since I found my sister. She left the Night-sisters, leaving someone named Rose in charge. We became better friends. We now know everything about each other. How I became Nightbreeze. How she came to be the best Night-sister.

Sitting atop Madness's tower reminded me so much of Jamie, but I let that go off my mind for the time being.

"What do you called cheese that's not yours," I asked her. Edited November 20, 2017 by Destrod

[Destrod 2,634]

Approved.

 

- Rectification of a 1st and 3rd form mistake

- Correction of the usage of word "loose", it is written with two 'O's when being referred to escape or getting away.

 

An interesting twist! I do find it peculiar that you used the word Night-Sisters in a way which hasn't been seen before, although I will say that the expression is a bit dull.

Edited November 20, 2017 by Destrod

[marc.jp_44 20,837]

Probably worth capitalising the “S” in “Night-Sisters” tbh.

Sorry, big Grammar Nazi here. :blush:

[sumitosan 12]

Nice :)

[Magenta 5,165]

Probably worth capitalising the “S” in “Night-Sisters” tbh.

Sorry, big Grammar Nazi here. :blush:

*scans comment for mistakes* *"Dang boss, this comment is flawless!"* *next time*

[bes146 281]

YEAH !! 

[Legacy 754]

Great!