The Mystery of the Missing Spaceship

[r_trooll15 827]

The Mystery of the Missing Ship

 

Note: still can't find the story. This is me trying to write it generally... To... Uhh... Idk how to say it

"Ben, I'll take over..." I said.

"Sure," Ben said.

The Dbonoes were closing in. Fast. On Zack's ship.

"Zack, you might want to get out of there. The Dbonoes are coming for your spaceship and you know that that spaceship is not shielded enough against them," I spoke into the radio.

"Coming," replied Zack.

 

“Ok.”

 

We saw the Dbonoes swallow up Zack's ship. Then, we saw the escape pod pulse into visibility for a moment. Zack was alive.

 

“Are the Kaprichiticaioues here yet?” asked Ben.

 

“Not yet. They would have surrounded Zack's ship to protect it if they were.”

 

“Look ahead!”

 

“They wanted the ship.”

 

The Dbonoes were creating a wormhole to another universe. They then proceeded to drag the ship through the wormhole and close it after themselves.

 

Kritititi! They are gone! Just as we came!

 

“Hello, Ben!”

 

“Hello, K’trlbisqwzkktp”

 

K’trlbisqwzkktp, or K’mario in our language, had always preferred Ben. Ben was the one who had risked his life for K’mario when the Dbonoes ambushed them. The Dbonoes were prey to the Kaprichiticaioues, and the Kaprichiticaioues hunted them all through out space. They survived on Dbonoes. The Dbonoes did not like to be eaten. They were chased through interstellar space by the Kaprichiticaioues, fearing their lives. The Dbonoes would frequently organize into big groups to try to ambush a Kaprichiticaiou. The Dbonoes would sting a Kaprichiticaiou to death and eat it. It was a big space hunt, Kaprichiticaioues vs Dbonoes. There were others, of course, but the Kaprichiticaioues were the friendliest. We were the odd ones out. We traveled through space in a spaceship, unlike all of the others. They darted through space, it was their home and they did not use a spaceship to travel, they did not need to be protected from space. Our home was our spaceships, and the spaceships’ home was in space.

 

“They took one of our spaceships.”

 

Don't worry

 

“Ok.”

 

Where did they go?

 

“They went through a wormhole they made.”

 

That is bad… we have no way of getting to their universe.

 

“Dang.”

 

Click

 

Swoosh

 

“Hey,” Zack said.

 

“Hi,” Ben said.

 

Zack came over to us and looked out of the dashboard.

 

“Well, I guess we are gonna find that thing!”

 

“Yep.”

 

“First thing that comes to mind is to look in Universe 46.”

 

“Universe 46 doesn’t exist.”

 

“Why not?”

 

“It does exist, Ben,” I said.

 

“What is it?” asked Ben.

 

“The Dbonoe universe. That’s where it is, probably, but we need to find it first.”

 

“How?”

 

“You know, black holes and time travel and stuff…”

 

“Ok”

 

We geared up the spaceship to go to 1673 BSU, or Before the Start of the Universe. Technically, it was the previous universe, but who cares. We fired up the tachyon generator, and shot off back in time, just before a Makitali got us.

Edited January 5, 2018 by r_trooll15

[tweezers 1,034]

Approved.

 

-Spaced everything.

-Adjusted the font size and colour.

 

My advice; be a little bit more specific when you're describing fictional stuff like this, since otherwise it just seems fake. Also, maybe come up with a more engaging title? 

 

Interesting plot, I'd like to see where it goes from here. 

[r_trooll15 827]

Approved.

 

-Spaced everything.

-Adjusted the font size and colour.

 

My advice; be a little bit more specific when you're describing fictional stuff like this, since otherwise it just seems fake. Also, maybe come up with a more engaging title?

 

Interesting plot, I'd like to see where it goes from here.

I might do a few more, it's the beginning of my sci-fi book that I have been writing for 7 years now. :)

[shafter9 156]

Dbonoe? Good thing Cedric Debono is no longer the English CM... 

[Legacy 754]

Nice!

[C.O.N.Q.U.E.R.O.R 3,845]

Dbonoe? Good thing Cedric Debono is no longer the English CM... 

I'd love to see someone write something with a pun on Sergei's name... I can't seem to find one, though I've been sergeing... :ph34r:

[r_trooll15 827]

I'd love to see someone write something with a pun on Sergei's name... I can't seem to find one, though I've been sergeing... :ph34r:

Juanderful, just juanderful

[Hippin_in_Hawaii 639]

Not Universe 46!  Anywhere but Universe 46!

[r_trooll15 827]

Not Universe 46! Anywhere but Universe 46!

Is it there? Find out in the next part

[r_trooll15 827]

If I write it. I don't see a potential for plot development here. I am going to write a space related tankific and it will be awesome. It will have spacesh8ps and tanks and covfefe

[r_trooll15 827]

I have sent the second edition. Time for the mult reporter mults get on it! I did not mean for there to be any puns, but you people found them, so there are some puns in the second one.

[Rocket_Raccoon_XXX 1,507]

Nice bro like it

[r_trooll15 827]

Third edition will come soon. I am going to go on a different plot than my book :ph34r: