Whiplash

[r_Breathe2 51]

Whiplash

 

They send me the message via the forum. Well, it wasn't just the forum. They sent me and e-mail, and a Blue Sphere in-game. My name is Nikk Suarez, and my in-game nickname is Whiplash. Anyway, back to what I was sent. It was a simple letter from someone named Network (Ranked Brigadier). Here, it is easier if I just showed you. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

They link sent me to a Google Document. Here, this is the Link. Finish reading that and everything will make sense.

 

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Okay, I hope you have read that. SO, after I read that doc, I had some high hopes for my family. Not really a 'Family' in that sense. Just me and my mom, living in a hotel. I haven't been to school in three years. I stay at the hotel all day playing Tanki Online while my mom struggles to get us enough food. Mom and I wouldn't need to worry anymore. $100,00 a month each month until I decided to quit, or they fired me. Plus, I wouldn't get a single burn, bruise, or even a paper-cut, even though I am in the military. All I had to do was go to a Team-House in my state, and fight rivals of the United States in 'special battles' in Tanki. I would be allowed to go home anytime. And if I didn't want to go home, I could live there. All I had to do was fill out the form. Here is the form, if you wanna see it. But you probably won't get accepted. Anyways, I filled out the form, and shut down my laptop.

 

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Three hours later, my mom came home. She was a waitress at a local store. Even though I hated lying to her, I told her that I landed a job at McDonald's. She believed me. "Your father would be so proud," she said. "Go sleep, mom. The day after tomorrow, I am going to my job." She looked at me with concern. "How are you going there?" I told her, "No need to worry mom. I got it all covered."  

 

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The next day, I checked the forum. No new PMs. I checked in the game. I noticed somethings that weren't there the day before, like my shiny 'Legend' insignia had the premium icon underneath it. I checked my garage. Yesterday, I had all the M3s, but only Hammer and Viking were M4s. Today, however, I had all the M3s micro-upgraded to M4s. I also had all the XTs. In my Protection Modules tab, I had a new modules called Team USA. It had 75% protection against all the turrets. In my paints slot, there was a paint called Team USA. In my supplies, I had an infinity sign next to all my drugs. I guessed that meant I had infinite drugs. I also had 130 friend requests. I accepted that all. After a couple of seconds, I was invited to a Dusseldorf DM by none other than Network. There were already a bunch of tanks in the battle, and they were all light green. They were all in my friends list. I joined the battle. Once I did, there were an influx of people writing, asking if I was a new recruit, if I was good, if I could help them win. But when network wrote a simple 'stop,' the chat came to a halt. Then, he wrote, 'Welcome to the US Military.' It was 3 seconds later when goldboxes started raining on the map.

 

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[tweezers 1,034]

Approved. 

 

The stories language and general writing was good, but it seemed a bit pointless to me. 

[Crip 4,735]

Are you sure the second link in the form isn't a bait link @@tweezers?

 

Too scared to click it ok

[tweezers 1,034]

Are you sure the second link in the form isn't a bait link @@tweezers?

 

Too scared to click it ok

It goes to a Google Doc. There was another link hovering around, but I deleted it because it might cause trouble for us later on. 

 

 

Wuss  :P  

 

 

[Crip 4,735]

It goes to a Google Doc. There was another link hovering around, but I deleted it because it might cause trouble for us later on. 

 

 

Wuss  :P  

 

 

I mean the link in the Google Doc nub.

 

Check it out for yourself.

 

 

 

I dare you :ph34r:

 

 

[You.Have.to.die 519]

Nice story. But, I think you could go into a little more detail in between scenes of the US military and you receiving the letter. Next time, write more and it will be even better!

Edited January 15, 2018 by You.Have.to.die

[tweezers 1,034]

I mean the link in the Google Doc nub.

 

Check it out for yourself.

 

 

 

I dare you :ph34r:

 

 

That goes to a different Google Form for which we are not responsible as it is not on the Forum kthxbai.

[Possibility 282]

Did you kinda design this after Insignia, Catalyst and that other book?

[r_Breathe2 51]

Did you kinda design this after Insignia, Catalyst and that other book?

Yes! Finally, another nerd that understands me!

[GrandExecutioner 1,403]

Who cares about a gold rain when you have a max garage? :P

 

It was a decent story but perhaps a little more detail in some places could make it awesome!