Halloween Party Showdown (Part V)

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

See Part IV here!

Summary for Part IV:
The investigator and Dr. Watsons (there's more than one you know) found out that @Darren4Turbo is the one who controlled @Godmode_ON but someone else is using it against @BlueDragon_tamki, @Ambitious, and the rest of the "gang" who were with them. While challenging “god”, he became insane: he was XT m4 (in the future, the devs might even make two new "rarerer" missions which are “Kill Godmode_ON for 11k crys” & “Collect one of the 3 goldboxes after Godmode_ON’s death for 9k” - depending on your rank of course)! Later, he, Blue, Ford, and Supra grew wings and they fought; Godmode_ON disappeared and made BDT evil… now he has to destroy investigator @Penguin40 and anyone else who stands in his way because he's under Godmode’s control.

I started to walk towards the investigator with my prepared Railgun. My wings and eyes were red instead of blue. Penguin, Ford, Supra and some of the others stepped back. I grinned and said, "You want to fight? Or are you too afraid?" said that they don't fear him. @fordmustang12345 started to get angry and yelled, "That's it!"
"No wait!!" exclaimed .
He didn't listen. He started running to me and I smiled because I knew what he would do next. He was about to punch me when I teleported beside him and shouted, "Pathetic tanker!"
Then I blasted him. The others who saw that were at me and Penguin cried, "Get him!"
@Ambitious nearly hit me with a chair but I managed to repel it from my hand. I made it fly towards him but he dodged. @personia literally took the same chair I tried to damage Ford with (take another chair for the love of God) and threw it at me (again...) but I defended using a table then @TriNitroToIuene tried to surprise-attack me with fire but I vanished as soon as he nearly hit my head and he broke the table in half & the chair to many pieces. TNT, Personia and Ford started to wonder where I went. I teleported behind him but before I could kill him, (if I turn evil, he can't unless someone make him evil, too) stopped me from destroying TNT and attacked quickly that I fell to the ground. I stood back up a few seconds later and yelled, "Not bad.. but not good enough!"
When Shadow was about to punch me, he got hit by another arm, got blasted (since the table he used as defense broke by the laser) and fell. "What the f-!?" exclaimed .
"No profanity allowed! @Issho_Fujitora, please ban this player from chatting. Don't think I can't duplicate myself!"
"Impossible! Only Shadow can do that..." TNT said.
I replied,"Hmph! I can only duplicate 's powers. And plus, my laser blast can't be stopped! So kneel before my power or-"
I immediately got kicked in the face by @Tareq.Jami before I could finish my sentence. "Or what?" he asked. Then he looked at the second me and kicked him as well. Damn son calm down Everyone wondered how he got in. "I can't miss this party!"
"Well I'm surprised by that dramatic entrance." @Penguin40 replied.
"Hey how did you get in?" @KillerGnat asked.
"None of your beeswax!" Tami said sticking his tongue out at him. Then the second me surprisingly attacked @personia, @falcosenna1, @GeneralPie (get ready to feel the pie) and a few others while I attacked @dilsharox, , @fordmustang12345 and the rest; @dilsharox hit me by surprise then someone caught my ankles. I didn't realize that until I tried to move: I couldn't. Then I saw it was one of them in particular... But who? I looked at everyone who was on the scene and saw who was holding my ankle. @fordmustang12345 is doing this; he isn't anywhere on this floor. I looked behind me and there stood @TriNitroToIuene & @xMoneyMaker, watching and waiting on my next move. I quickly tried to hit Ford while he was in the underground so I can get loose but he dodged it and TNT hit me with a flamethrower nearly at the same time so I fell to the floor. On his second attack, however, I managed to defend. @dilsharox tried to sneak attack me and @player_2015_tanker was about to unleash his secret force field but I caught @dilsharox by the leg and threw him on @player_2015_tanker, punched them so fast that afterwards it created a hole in which they fell in. The others fighting the second me thought they could never defeat me. A few of them fell in the same hole and he was in there too. I pursued after @fordmustang12345 but was stopped by @Penguin40 Later (um it'll be too long for me to type all the action here), @Tareq.Jami made a massive punch in the stomach and made the second EvilDragon_tamki fly up then using #@SniperCatsstyle and @TriNitroToIuene made the killing blow. He came out of the ground into the air in many pieces. I was shocked: the second me was defeated!
"Finally!" @SniperCats said.
"Um, you're still in that form?" @Tareq.Jami asked.
"Oops I forgot." he said, then he transformed back to again.
They thought I was exactly the only one left because they completely forgot about @Godmode_ON. I lost focus of my real target (which was penguin) and thought it was supra and dilsharox. They're finally getting serious! @player_2015_tanker (managing to get out of the hole) tripped me, while & @Darren4Turbo punched me and held me down. Then out of the blue @BuriedSky bust out of the ceiling and he missed me as he hit the ground while I escaped, D4T & Shadow backed up. I attacked those two and tripped @BuriedSky and he flew into those two. I said to them, "Tsk! What now?"
"Hey! What happened to @GeneralPie?" Everyone looked and noticed that he wasn't moving... He was inactive. Everyone else facepalmed again. @Darren4Turbo looked injured. and @BuriedSky looked at each other and shook their heads. Then the unexpected came: they hit the ground with both of their fists and time has been suddenly stopped. Both of their attacks were stronger and faster than before (but only for that moment): I've hit two times by Shadow then kicked to the ground by BuriedSky. He threw me into the air then they struck me 4 times, then time became normal again. Those two, @BRO0088 and @Adriel.RB made the final blow, I crashed into the wall. They thought they won but I got up (well on my knees: I was struggling), having a line of blood running down from my mouth. Nobody noticed me up. What?! They were actually this strong?? Were they playing around with me? I got on my feet and held out hand towards Ford's direction. I might as well take him out... So I pointed and aimed my hand at him, and shot the laser toward his direction. But @Penguin40 noticed what was I doing so he did something extraordinary, something that no one thought Penguin would do because none of us knew he had this ability: he slowed down time and stood in front of @fordmustang12345. When he was prepared to use his railgun, he let time be itself and ricocheted the laser to another direction. Impossible!
"Are you alright?" Penguin asked Ford.
"Y-Yeah I'm alright. What did you do?"
"Oh it was nothing: just a rare opportunity to take..."
The lazer wouldn't be scattered even with all the turrets combined. Who are these people? Everyone was prepared for me as I glared at them. All of them are fully prepared. Good; I know who's my real target.
Penguin shouted, "We're going to attack so get ready!"
I yelled back, "I am not the one who should be ready, you're the one."
As he was trying to figure out on what I meant, I mentioned this quote to him: "A moment of hesitation spells defeat."
"Well of course it does but what does it have to do with me?"
I smiled at him and said, "A lot."
In a split second I spawned right in front of him, getting ready to severely slice/burn him with one kick. Penguin was so in shock and in terror that he fell on the floor: there's nothing he could do.
"I hope you say your last goodbye," I said, laughing. "No hard feeling but @You.Have.to.die!"
Everyone was horrified. "NOOOO! @Penguin40!"
​Then with a rapid kick, I killed him without delay.
"Now," I murmured, smiling, "you're finally dead......."

​TO BE CONTINUED...


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Just to let you know, these signatures you see above show my current power status
So what you see now is EvilDragon_tamki

NOTE: I just returned doing this after 2 years now so this part could be bad at the same time

Edited May 21, 2018 by BlueDragon_tamki

[KillerGnat 3,135]

Edits:

• lots and lots of grammar edits. Remember that names are proper nouns and should be capitalised.
• There weren't many glaring punctuation edits, but there are loads of places where you could make the readability better by including a few more commas. I didn't do it myself cause I'm too lazy :x
• I kept the unconventional formatting as you requested. 
• I probably missed loads of edits... I'm in a bit of a time crunch right now, so if I made some mistakes feel free to PM me or mention them here.

Approved!

 

yayy I was mentioned C:. amusing stuff.

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

Edits:

• lots and lots of grammar edits. Remember that names are proper nouns and should be capitalised.
• There weren't many glaring punctuation edits, but there are loads of places where you could make the readability better by including a few more commas. I didn't do it myself cause I'm too lazy :x
• I kept the unconventional formatting as you requested.

Approved!

 

yayy I was mentioned C:. amusing stuff.

as i said I haven't edited this in 2 years so I was kinda expecting this despite the self-proofreading

But thanks

[thethiefofvictory 339]

You killed me! Traitor! 

 

Eh. I laughed. :P But why can I slow down time?!

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

You killed me! Traitor! 

 

Eh. I laughed. :P But why can I slow down time?!

what do you mean I killed you?!?!

[thethiefofvictory 339]

what do you mean I killed you?!?!

The last few sentences, where the "I" (I figure its you) kills me and everyone's horrified

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

The last few sentences, where the "I" (I figure its you) kills me and everyone's horrified

ok.........

wait you're Penguin?!?!!?? :o impossible!

Edited May 21, 2018 by BlueDragon_tamki

[thethiefofvictory 339]

ok.........

wait you're Penguin?!?!!?? :o impossible!

Penguin who? I'm honored to be called TNT though :P

 

Also, you may want to give some spacing - I'm confused as to what's really happening. And maybe replace the older names with newer people? :P

Edited July 1, 2018 by thethiefofvictory

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

The investigator, actually. I'm honored to be called TNT though :p

 

Also, you may want to give some spacing - I'm confused as to what's really happening. And maybe replace the older names with newer people? :p

I'm doing that on the next part

And um oops you didn't quote the edited post lol :p

Edited May 21, 2018 by BlueDragon_tamki

[thethiefofvictory 339]

Also, cut down on the cuts (oh, the irony) and strikes and forum jokes, please. It might go in your favor to make the story a tiny bit slower, but then maybe the fast-paced action is your style. It's painful to the eyes, looking at all those green names - maybe next time you could remove the names altogether and match each person to their Tanki nickname in a spoiler. Hmm?

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

Also, cut down on the cuts (oh, the irony) and strikes and forum jokes, please. It might go in your favor to make the story a tiny bit slower, but then maybe the fast-paced action is your style. It's painful to the eyes, looking at all those green names - maybe next time you could remove the names altogether and match each person to their Tanki nickname in a spoiler. Hmm?

ok.... What are you talking about?

[fury987 604]

Nice and I did not see my name :(

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

Nice and I did not see my name :(

it's because you're in part VI

[X_PRO_KILLER_JJ 1,515]

Awesome man :P

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

Awesome man :P

thanks

[Best_of_thunder_2015 1,354]

This isn't halloween. :-\ It would be nice if you wait for 3-4 months ?

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

This isn't halloween. :-\ It would be nice if you wait for 3-4 months ?

lol oh well then

maybe i'll do that for part VII

[Best_of_thunder_2015 1,354]

lol oh well then

maybe i'll do that for part VII

No, End the story on halloween. 

[GrandExecutioner 1,403]

I don't know what I just read...but well done.

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

No, End the story on halloween.

then I must post a lot of parts in between from now and Halloween

I don't know what I just read...but well done.

you just read a random infamous story on the AWC section

And thank you

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

Eh. I laughed. :P But why can I slow down time?!

here's your answer: penguins live in Antarctica right? Since they live in cold places and normally cold stuff slow things down, it'll be normal for you to slow down something like time

 

(Again not attached.... Y?)

Edited May 21, 2018 by BlueDragon_tamki

[Heles 9,220]

Rofl 

very interesting way to tell a story 

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

Rofl 

very interesting way to tell a story 

indeed and thx