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The luck of the day might change, the face you love might change, but... 

 

The love that a father has for his son - that can never change.

 

The smile of happiness can never change.

 

Love isn't all about sex, we've to feel it with a kind heart and honesty.

 

 

* * * *

 

This story is about a couple, the boy's name is Shahid and the girl's name is Sarah. They don't have their families, but their love was very loyal and kind to each other. They both mostly spend their time playing games, even Tanki Online. They both loved that game as it was fun to play.

 

They were good friends in the game, but in real life they hated each other so much that they never knew they played the game together. It was because they where classmates and sometimes, the boy stood first in the exams and sometimes the girl would. 

 

They both were always fighting to get first in their exam, but they developed competition and that competition converted into love. 

 

One day they were playing Tanki Online together and decided to meet in real life.

 

 

* * * *

 

When they met, shock and confusion followed. They were classmates!

 

Girl: "Is that you Shahid?"

 

Boy: "Yes! Why?"

 

Girl: "I'm Sarah"

 

Boy: "Never expected it will be my classmate..."

 

Girl: "I expected the same."

 

Boy: "But you're a good person."

 

Girl: "You too, I was always thinking wrong about you."

 

From that night they became much closer, but still remained shy to tell that they love each other so much.

 

One day, the girl was diagnosed with a tumor, and got hospitalized. The doctors told her that she was going to die, but there was still hope if she undertook a special surgery. However, if she'd do that, chances for permanent memory loss were big. When she told Shahid, he told her that he would talk to the doctors so they could plan the surgery.

 

She stopped him and pulled him to her side.

 

Girl: "I'm not going to do the surgery!"

 

Shocked, he looked at her.

 

Boy: "You have got to be joking, you'll die!"

 

Girl: "It's better than forgetting everything I've done with you."

 

Boy: "You don't understand, I can't lose you... I LOVE YOU!"

 

She had tears in her eyes.

 

Girl: "You... Love me?"

 

Boy: "Yes!"

 

Girl: "Why didn't you ever tell me?"

 

Boy: "I was afraid you wouldn't feel the same."

 

Girl: "But the thing is... I do feel the same."

 

Boy: "You do?"

 

Girls: "Yes! I love you..."

 

Boy: "Then please, the surgery."

 

Girl: "You need to understand me, I don't want to wake up and not know who you are... I'd rather die than forget about you."

 

Boy: "But I will always be here."

 

Girl: "Do you promise you'll stay with me no matter what."

 

Boy: "I swear."

 

He bent down and kissed her when the doctors came to take the girl into surgery, the boy put his ring on her finger.

 

Boy: "Take this, So I can be with you during the surgery."

 

He kissed her again.

 

boy: "I'll be here when you come out."

 

Girl: "I LOVE YOU."

 

Boy: " I LOVE YOU TOO."

 

As the doctors took her away, he waited while they were doing the surgery. When the doctors took the girl to her room, the boy stayed with her all night.

 

After a while, she woke up...

 

Boy: "You woke up! I'm so glad you are okay."

 

The girl looked at him with curiosity.

 

Girl: "Who are you?"

 

Boy: "It's me..."

 

Girl: "I'm sorry, I don't know who you are. Where is the doctor?"

 

He stared at her...

 

Boy: "You seriously don't remember anything about me?"

 

Girl: "No I don't, so please leave."

 

Boy: "But what happened to our love? I thought you would remember that at least."

 

Girl: "Our love?"

 

boy: "Yes! I love you and you love me"

 

Girl: "No, I don't... I don't even know who you are, I don't even know who I am, so please get out now!"

 

Boy: "But.."

 

Girl: "NURSE!"

 

The boy was kicked out of the hospital. He tried calling the girl afterward but she didn't pick up.

 

Five months later, the girl went back to school. Tears came to the boy's eyes. 

 

The boy waited and waited but she never came online in the game they played. One day, the boy walking down the stress and saw the girl with another guy.

 

He was heartbroken and just when he was about to look away, he noticed the girls necklace. 

 

Boy: "Will she remember me?"

 

He was going to go to her, and so, he called her name. The girl looked at him but she turned around and kept walking.

 

Boy: "I guess not."

 

Disappointed, he said to himself.

 

Boy: "I love you, but I don't belong in your life anymore.."

 

He took one last look at her and walked away from her...

 

Forever.

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Approved!

 

Quite a good one, there were some grammatical errors but overall, the story was pretty good.

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The luck of the day might change, the face you love might change, but... 
 
The love that a father has for his son - that can never change.
 
The smile of happiness can never change.
 
Love isn't all about sex, we've to feel it with a kind heart and honesty.
 
 

 

That is so true

and i like the story  :D

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meh. Disliked it. Not because I hate the concept of love, mind you, but more because I felt it wasn't written well. I don't know how to explain it, though...

 

You know, I'm going to love the replies to this post, though. :lol:

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I felt it wasn't written well.

True, but rarely do people dare to write such Shakespearean stories. Love is usually not expressed in the form of such stories. But still, I haven't read much in this forum either...
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