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[Person_Random 4,991]

Writer's Block, Chapter 2

For the confused editor and half of the readers who want to catch up: Chapter 1

 

Gard letted me out.  Landed in some weird skuare again.  Oter guy wallked up too me. But he loked nicer.  He went and sheaked my hand hard. His gripp was like ten gards.

 

“Hi,” he said, and so I replyed to him. He looked a little mean but I guess that he want to help me so I talked, hopingg he would heplp me.

 

“Hello,” I said, “Why are we stuck here?”

 

“Well, you’ll learn to like it here.  We only get a few minutes off of this place every round.  And those take forever.” He talkes so fast, I not keeping up with his word. He didnt even answer my question! What kind of persn was that?  “And then we take a little break then and you can wander around. Some never return.”

 

I shudered at that statement.  Anyways, it was my turn, so I piked up a dice and rolled it, then moved forrward a bit.  He gave me tip on making poam, anoying poams still stopped me short. But it wasnt poam. It was some fakt thingy caled “trivia”.  He taught me that. I understanded it more a lot more.

 

Still, I got stuck.  It was about authors, good and bad, and this one taled about the books of author.  I dont read wel so I didnt know. Luky thing that gards didn’t mak me read the Person’s books again. Those were bad and boring.

 

In stead, I readed another thing: a story i never saw.  To be exzact, I didn’t read, a speak thing boommed out loud sound works.  I liked betr but the story line (a new word i lerned) made no sence.

 

For instanse, the guy liked pink, which made less sense than the whole thing. Because aren't girls supposed to like pink?  And nothing else made any sense. After my turn, my new frend helpd explane the story so i get it I think I see what this story mean. \

 

During the waiting for my next turn, he gott bookes for me and teach me reading faster and better.  Teaching me grammar too so I can write good if I ever write short storys. I like writing about the things that happend, and he give me a journal to keep track of every thing I want to write.

 

Maybe I would win this game and be the best.

 

Sorry about making anyone's head spin. Please let me continue this series, I promise this guy's grammar will be better.

 

- P.R.

 

 

[Flexoo 6,980]

Approved.

 

Given the fact that the mistakes are somehow part of this makes me incapable of editing this. Honestly, I do not know how bad grammar and this style of writing relate to writer's block.

[Person_Random 4,991]

Approved.

 

Given the fact that the mistakes are somehow part of this makes me incapable of editing this. Honestly, I do not know how bad grammar and this style of writing relate to writer's block.

Sure, but then I guess I had a bad naming ability way back when.  (Goes and Smacks Past Me upside the head).  You'll see maybe.  Depends on which ending I choose.

 

Anyways, nice job.  Oh wait, this is my article...

[TankiNoob2000 231]

Nice

[Pythor 1,354]

CRITIQUES 

1) More thought out plot

2) Better character development

3) Some sinister fiend involved

4) Larger character base

5) A climax

6) Relation to real life

7) Longer article 

8) More dialogue

9) A moral

10) Lighter atmosphere 

:ph34r:

 

lol im just kidding... Been waiting for this for a while. Glad to see part 2  :lol:

[Pyre 3,485]

If I wrote a piece called writers block it would be a blank page...

 

Nice job.

 

EDIT: Hmmm, maybe I will.

Edited November 30, 2018 by Pyre

[Person_Random 4,991]

CRITIQUES 

1) More thought out plot

2) Better character development

3) Some sinister fiend involved

4) Larger character base

5) A climax

6) Relation to real life

7) Longer article 

8) More dialogue

9) A moral

10) Lighter atmosphere 

:ph34r:

 

lol im just kidding... Been waiting for this for a while. Glad to see part 2  :lol:

If any of those are for real, please tell me. Also, I've been quite busy with playing Tanki not really writing.  Got a 'real' piece coming up soon.

 

If I wrote a piece called writers block it would be a blank page...

 

Nice job.

 

EDIT: Hmmm, maybe I will.

Maybe maybe.... Well, the AWS people will not approve it.

 

 

The pains of still being unpopular hurt me...

 

 

[Merovingian 656]

I can't read it, the mistakes are to distracting (even for me) :ph34r:

[TankiNoob2000 231]

You can writing these whenever you want. Don't give up on writing these and one day you will become popular

[Person_Random 4,991]

Should I come up with better title names?

[TankiNoob2000 231]

Nah its good the way it is

[Lose 881]

Yep, I think I will.  Spelling errors are against myself.

fear no more! i will help you

[Lose 881]

Right now, stay tuned for this TBWLP tale: Requiem Ch. Negative 1

yayyyy :D

[Person_Random 4,991]

yayyyy :D

An old new work.

[Lose 881]

An old new work.

a nold work

[Person_Random 4,991]

a nold work

Is that an actual term though?

[Lose 881]

it is now

[Person_Random 4,991]

it is now

Alright, @Lose is the new word inventor.  Any new words?

[Lose 881]

Alright, @Lose is the new word inventor.  Any new words?

there is shallabowski and broi

[Person_Random 4,991]

I must know what this means....

[Lose 881]

I must know what this means....

shallabowski is an expression used in the same way you use "pew" and words like that

-shoots friend-

"shallabowski"

 

broi = boi + bro

[Person_Random 4,991]

shallabowski is an expression used in the same way you use "pew" and words like that

-shoots friend-

"shallabowski"

 

broi = boi + bro

Awesome!  I just add new spellings to words. 

[Person_Random 4,991]

Like poam.  I'm sure you can guess which word it is.

 

 

poem

 

 

[Lose 881]

i aem suer yuu knoe whut thes meenz

 

 

 

if u need any help with incorrect spelling just DM me ;)

 

 

[Person_Random 4,991]

i aem suer yuu knoe whut thes meenz

 

 

 

if u need any help with incorrect spelling just DM me ;)

 

 

Heheheheeheee... I only choose a few words, but poam is one that consistently spell wrong.  I could also DM you, but I could try to be an elementary school teacher looking at spelling tests too.

Edited January 3, 2019 by Person_Random