Requiem, Chapter Zero, Part One

[Person_Random 4,991]

Requiem, Chapter Zero

Pyco's Backstory

Pyco Potare is a young boy who has just celebrated his twelfth birthday. He reminiscences about the previous school year.

I still don’t understand how this year flew by so quickly. But most of all, how it went so well.

I guess it all started when Mom wanted me to run for our band’s Music Council. Knowing that a lot of people would run, I seemed nervous. But on speech day, I was set. A single pep talk from my mom had done wonders. I told everyone about all my experiences in photography, elaborating on every little detail. By the time I finished, everyone was clapping their hands, cheering me on. I knew I was going to win.

Everything else happened and the floodgates opened, enabling me to surpass all others. My once-mediocre studies rapidly transformed into pristine assignments, earning me all A’s in my classes. And as for PE, I started out behind with torpid thirteen minute miles, then shaved seconds off every time so that I emerged out as a new man, with a speedy six-minute sprint. Before I only had a couple of friends; now everyone wanted to hang out with me. And all that started with a simple election for music council, which I now ruled as the top of the class, a talented second chair flute as well.

Just because my mom pushed me to accomplish something small, now I have it all. She told me to fake it till I made it, but that’s wrong. You make it only if you fake it.



And that's Pyco! Enjoy and leave your feedback below!

[Flexoo 6,980]

Approved.

 

Edits:

Fixed double spacing in few sentences.

 

Nice. I would just advise to either make chapters longer or if they cannot be made longer, merging them in one topic.

[Person_Random 4,991]

Approved.

 

Edits:

Fixed double spacing in few sentences.

 

Nice. I would just advise to either make chapters longer or if they cannot be made longer, merging them in one topic.

Hehe... this is one person's short work.  I should have but he's kind of unrelated to the other people (at least as of now).

[Viking4s 10,791]

Hehe... this is one person's short work.  I should have but he's kind of unrelated to the other people (at least as of now).

Don't make it too long thought, it then takes an eternity to be approved  :ph34r:

[TankiNoob2000 231]

Short but well wirtten ;) I'll try to get Slender Man Returns Part 4 ASAP

[Person_Random 4,991]

Don't make it too long thought, it then takes an eternity to be approved  :ph34r:

Truth to be told, I took your advice and wrote a guide.  It was 5 pages...  OoF.  Now the Ch.10 + of TBWLP 3 will be carefully researched and super super super long.

Short but well wirtten ;) I'll try to get Slender Man Returns Part 4 ASAP

I can't wait!

Edited January 9, 2019 by Person_Random

[Viking4s 10,791]

Truth to be told, I took your advice and wrote a guide.  It was 5 pages...  OoF. 

You have re-defined the meaning of "guide"  :o

Seems like you finally had your breakthrough, they will say:< that noob nug was meant for writing guide!

[Lose 881]

yeet dank job m89

[Person_Random 4,991]

You have re-defined the meaning of "guide"  :o

Seems like you finally had your breakthrough, they will say:< that noob nug was meant for writing guide!

Lol, they will probably be like wow this kid finally wrote something other than a mushy story.  Hmm... let me use it as a digital paperweight.  2 years later, I ask for it to be approved.

yeet dank job m89

Wot is an m89 lol?  Hehe...

[Lose 881]

Lol, they will probably be like wow this kid finally wrote something other than a mushy story.  Hmm... let me use it as a digital paperweight.  2 years later, I ask for it to be approved.

Wot is an m89 lol?  Hehe...

em-eighty-nine

 

i just made it up

 

its basically m8 but more d a n k 

[Person_Random 4,991]

em-eighty-nine

 

i just made it up

 

its basically m8 but more d a n k 

lol ok