Slender Man Returns: Part 4

[TankiNoob2000 231]

After a long delay, it's finally here! :D

 

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As I was standing face to face with the faceless figure, I tried to find a way out of the room. The first thing that I did was scavenge for a weapon and eventually, I found a hammer. I grabbed the hammer, and in one swift motion started destroying my wall. I saw that Slender Man was walking closer so I had to hammer the wall more aggressively. The wall eventually broke down and I started running out of the house. I made it onto the road of my neighborhood as Slender Man teleported right in front of me. I swiftly spun around and kept on running. I eventually lost my breath as Slender Man was in front of me yet again. He quickly disappeared but the second he vanished, I saw a car's headlights coming and so had no time to figure out my next move. The car it me, and the driver stopped to ask if I was OK. I replied, "I'm fine. Get 911 over here." He called the ambulance and a van was sent on it's way.

 

The ambulance arrived within 15 minutes, and they got me on the stretcher and started driving me to the hospital, I asked the driver for the time, and he replied, "Half past 6." I was driven to the hospital, where they quickly got me into a room. Once inside, it only took them 10 seconds to find one. I was laying on the bed yelling in pain while holding my hip. One of the doctors said to me,"We gotta get you an MRI." The doctors bought me to the MRI room, and left me laying there waiting to get scanned. I was pushed inside the MRI machine and I came out to devastating news. The doctor said that I had suffered a broken foot and a broken hip. The man who ran me over apologized profusely, and I forgave him.

 

I was on the hospital bed watching football, and during a thrilling moment, the doctor told me I had a visitor. I paused the game and Jonathan walked in, saying,"What's up bro!" I gave him a high five and he asked me what happened. I told him I was run over by a driver because Slender Man had come back for more. He shook his head as if to say, "Not again." He asked me if I was injured, and I replied with a broken hip and foot. He looked shocked when he saw my foot in a cast. He asked me about the hip and I told him that the doctors were scheduling a surgery for me. I continued watching football while Jonathan was on his phone. My phone was charging, and with nothing else to do, I got excited when the football game went into overtime. 

 

A doctor interrupted me - meaning I had to pause the game again - to tell me when I was going get my surgery. They told me it was going to be 2 weeks from this Saturday and so I was excited because I couldn't wait to get back to regular life. The doctor left and I went back to the game. The game ended with a 26-23 field goal for the Patriots. I was happy because I didn't like the Bengals. It was midnight, and so I decided to go to sleep. 4 hours later, I woke up to a sound and I rubbed my eyes to get my vision to 100%. Jonathan was still asleep but when I looked to my left, there was the silhouette of a tall figure standing nearby. 

 

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Part 5 coming soon

[kaisdf 3,320]

Article approved.

 

Spooky  :blink: 

 

Nice piece, can't wait for part 5!

 

Edits:

• "going", not "gonna"
• Changed a few words to improve flow and accuracy
• The verb "to chat" means "to have a conversation". You can say, "I chatted with him", and it means you had a conversation. If you wanted to detail what you said, "I said [...] to him", then you can't use "to chat". To chat is generic, friendly talk included in the word, not specific sentences.

[Person_Random 4,991]

Not as long of a delay as mine go... I am slowwwwwww.  But still, I really like it.  Kaisdf, you missed a comma.  Not necessarily in that order.

[Lose 881]

nice

[TankiNoob2000 231]

Thanks y'all;)