Slender Man Returns: The Finale

[TankiNoob2000 231]

First off I would like to apologize for the long wait. I was dealing with personal stuff. After a long wait, the end is here.

 

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I woke up tied to a tree after I got knocked out. I took a quick glance at my surroundings and tried to come up with an escape plan. I spotted a piece of paper but I couldn't reach it because I was bound. I found a knife that was just in my reach and cut myself free.

 

I kept the knife and walked over to the paper, which said that I was missing. I was shocked to find out that I had been gone for so long. I looked for my phone but couldn't find it anywhere so the best thing I could do would be to try to use my instincts to find my way back. At first, I had no idea where to go but after a lot of walking, I figured out where I was, and got to my house. I was still in the woods, but I saw a streetlight in sight.

 

I looked around and saw yet more missing person posters of me, so I tore them down and ripped them up. My priority was to find my phone and let everyone know that I was still alive. Unbeknownst to me, Slender Man was right behind me, ready to capture me once more. Just in time, I looked back and started running like a madman. It was dark, nearly midnight, so I had no idea if I was going the right way or not. I eventually reached a sidewalk where I waved my arms for a taxi.

 

A taxi driver noticed me and pulled over. Feeling as if this was a death run, I ordered him to drive me to my home which I typed out on the GPS. He started driving and asked me why I was running like a lunatic. I told him that Slender Man tried to capture me, and he clearly knew Slender Man more than I did, as he understood. He later gave me a poster of my disappearance. I told the driver that I was the person on the poster and he was a bit shocked. We made the rest of the journey in silence, and he eventually dropped me off at home.

 

As soon as I got home, my first priority was to let John know I was alive so I grabbed an old poster and in big letters, I wrote "IT'S ME! HELP!" on it. I knocked on his front door and he saw me from his bedroom window. He quickly ran down and we both hugged each other tears running down our faces. I told him that Slender Man was relentless now and he would do everything he could to kill me. While I had been away, John had developed some secrets. He made me follow him to his basement, where I saw a huge stun gun, and a very dangerous and sharp knife. He told me that while I was out, he decided to build a stun gun since he saw what Slender Man could do. He told me that it could disable Slender Man's teleportation for a short time, and he handed me the knife that he said would be enough to finish off Slender Man.

 

As John was explaining this to me, I heard the sound of Slender Man breaking John's door down. He immediately teleported to us in the basement. He only said one thing to the both of us: "This was not meant to be your grave but you are welcome to it!" Then, in one swift motion, he teleported next to John, and stabbed him in the chest - John's last words were, "Send me out with a bang." He shot Slender Man, disabling the teleportation ability, and I grabbed the knife and stabbed him. Slender Man was screaming and bleeding at the same time, and he eventually blew up, much to my surprise. I quickly ran over to John who was bleeding heavily, and told him to stay with me as I called 911 for the ambulance.

 

John was driven to the hospital and the doctors declared him dead. I broke down near his lifeless body and held his hand as a reminder of our friendship. I had a private funeral and I was allowed to say goodbye to John one last time. I was heartbroken and crying and when I said my goodbye, his tomb was buried in my backyard. I ended Slender Man with a huge cost. I would never have another friend like John again.

 

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Years passed. I was very old and was reaching the end of my life, so I went to the same hospital I had always been to, and spent my last days there. I requested to be buried right beside John when I died. My request was granted and so I was able to rest in piece with my long-time friend, knowing that we would see each other in heaven.

 

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I'd like to thank all of you for enjoying this series and giving me support. It really meant a lot to me. What do you think I should next? Leave your suggestions below. Until then, see you soon

[kaisdf 3,320]

Article approved.

 

A good end to the series. It nicely ties up the loose ends, and pulls of a classic finale. I'm interested to see what you come up with next :)

 

Edits:

• Spelling and grammar both good
• Lots of words changed/sentences rearranged to avoid repetitive sentence structure

[Pyre 3,485]

while tears rain downed on the both of us.

 

Just gotta do my grammar Nazi thing :P Nice story, god finale.

[Lose 881]

Nice job :D

[TankiNoob2000 231]

Thanks y'all:). It means a lot. What do you think I should write about next? Leave your suggestions and I'll consider it;)

Edited May 8, 2019 by TankiNoob2000

[Person_Random 4,991]

Surprised by the ending!  Wow... I liked it.  I'll comment more later.

 

*2 hours Later*

Grammar Hitler Wakes Up.  Excellent read, good plot.  However, there are a lot of "i did this, I did that..." sentences.  Try to vary your sentence starts so that it seems more impressive and also contributes to the flow.  I'd suggest keeping the "I" starts to about 1 per paragraph.  I've demonstrated a few methods in my example paragraph, including changing the sentence style (simple/compound to complex) and adding an adjective.

 

 

I woke up tied to a tree after I got knocked out. I took a quick glance at my surroundings and tried to come up with an escape plan. I spotted a piece of paper but I couldn't reach it because I was bound. I found a knife that was just in my reach and cut myself free.

Edited: I woke up tied to a tree after I got knocked out. Trying to find an escape plan, I took a quick glance at my surroundings. Though I found a piece of paper, I couldn't reach it because I was bound. Fortunately, I found a knife that was just in my reach and cut myself free.

 

 

 

I hope you'll understand what that meant.  In the future, I'd like to see another story series, or maybe a single story.  I don't know for sure what topic or theme, though.  You'll have to come up with those.

Edited May 8, 2019 by Person_Random

[Viking4s 10,791]

Nice story with good characters.

I learnt about a couple of new words +