I Just Started TO!

[Krillax 17]

I Just Started TO!

 

I just started TO!

How are you my bro

I like to be a pro!

Have you seen me ever,

or not,

who cares.

 

Just break the lead,

with some EXP,

anything just like me I see TO,

again as my CEO,

I see you TO,

as an CEO,

never mind who cares.

 

I hear in my ears,

playing for years,

seeing Tanki for years,

I never miss you because you are my hero

not a zero but a hero,

will I be a master,

for a disaster,

actually no!

Several days,

several players met everyday,

some are a....

 

BLAST!!!

 

No I say a tanki as a bro,

because I am a pro,

again as a hero,

but not a zero!

I actually,

 

JUST STARTED TO!!!

 

 

✒ @Krill_300

 

I hope you like my poem I just started TO from 2016 this poet had rhymes please

tell how you feel and when you started playing Tanki Online and TO actually means Tanki Online and see you next time with more poets.

Edited December 1, 2019 by Krill_300
Added the ✒ symbol near the author!

[Krill_300 113]

A Tank Does this!

✒ @Krill_300

 

A tank does this, a tank does that

you know?

I have been playing so far but PLAYERS?

I see player like

A noob, a hacker, a cheater and....

 

YOU!

 

You know?

All are players.

Just tell me yourself.

are you a noob or a best parkour hero,

or you are a zero?

As I see you drive so slow,

but not like flowing on water?

 

You snip,

from Shaft,

and you watch as a camera!

Do you remember me?

Oh ya

oh ya

oh ya

yo

oh ya!!!

 

 

✒ @Krill_300

 

What the writer says --- Guys,I am back this is my second poetry I hope you like it.These are not on YouTube but you can send videos that have the same lyrics and have some acting,see my previous poets please reply below how do you feel and you do in battles.

 

Stay Tuned for more!

 

Edited December 1, 2019 by Krill_300
Added the ✒ symbol near the author!

[Krill_300 113]

Trick or Treat!

A Halloween Special...

 

 

Trick or Treat this Halloween or,

I miss Halloween.

Is it Halloween for a good Halloween Treat?

Do you think I am joking, ah 31st October.

Everyday tender,

to use Thunder.

 

I am in a traffic jam time to

design my tank with some jam,

I scare players or I say scarecrows.

 

OK!!!

 

I never quit Halloween

for a good team. Do you think I am joking?

Ok then,

let's rock and.....

 

ROLL!!!

 

 

✒ @Krill_300

 

By the Author - Hey Guys,I hope you liked my new RAP PARODY good for this Halloween 2019 as you can sing this song and send videos showing your act.Reply below how did you felt and do not forget to see my other poets as now I am working on a new Novel.
See you later and Stay Tuned.

 

Edited December 1, 2019 by Krill_300
Added the ✒ symbol near the author!

[Flexoo 6,980]

Approved.

 

The three topics have been merged. next time, please post multiple small pieces like poems in a set of three so that they meet the section's 400 word limit.

 

Edits:

- lot of grammatical errors fixed.

 

I would advise you to next time be more consistent with using commas at the end of your verses. Either use them consistently, or do not use them. It's not correct to use them in first strophe, then not in next. You should also give it more thought next time. The poems do not really make much sense and the rhymes use the same words way too often just for the sake of the rhyme.

[Viking4s 10,791]

Funny and fresh, a tanker with awesome talent.

[Lose 881]

Nice job!

[r_Given6 859]

Words leave more of an impression than mere rhymes.

[Krill_300 113]

Thanks wait for more of my poets because I am making a Story type (Movie) .About a worse nuclear accident!

[ILiveOnTheChatBox123 936]

On 10/28/2019 at 1:05 PM, Krill_300 said:

tell how you feel and when you started playing Tanki Online and TO actually means Tanki Online and see you next time with more poets.

I already did-check it out:

The Long Road to Tanki (a Poem)

But your poem was also great, and I look forward to seeing more of your poetry. 

[Krill_300 113]

On 11/16/2019 at 8:32 PM, Flexoo said:

Approved.

 

The three topics have been merged. next time, please post multiple small pieces like poems in a set of three so that they meet the section's 400 word limit.

 

Edits:

- lot of grammatical errors fixed.

 

I would advise you to next time be more consistent with using commas at the end of your verses. Either use them consistently, or do not use them. It's not correct to use them in first strophe, then not in next. You should also give it more thought next time. The poems do not really make much sense and the rhymes use the same words way too often just for the sake of the rhyme.

How? I cannot because after I publish it will not be viewed until approved! so I cannot post multiple topics! 

[Flexoo 6,980]

Post multiple poems in one topic.

[Krill_300 113]

4 hours ago, Flexoo said:

Post multiple poems in one topic.

How?

It will be approved for a few days then when you say Approved then how can I make a poem because then it will spoil the order or will you make it in order?

Can I put a separate poem/comic/story having 400 word limit?

[Flexoo 6,980]

When you will think of multiple poems, post them all together in one topic. If right now, you only have one, then wait till you get multiple of them.

[Krill_300 113]

For Flexoo - Ok thanks and can I create a separate story/poem/comic having 400 world limit?

For Viewers - Guys, I have added this symbol!

 

✒ ✒ ✒ ✒ 

Any Size,

Any Color!

Edited December 1, 2019 by Krill_300
To add a D.E. product!

[Flexoo 6,980]

Yes, you can write a story if it is over 400 words, it should be fine. For stories, you definitely want to go over that limit.

[Krill_300 113]

Guys, I am making a new story called 'A Impossible Nuclear Catastrophe'.So guys be online on 25 December (Christmas) at 16:45 UTC+0 for the release.

What to do?

1. First open the forum but open at the current time
2. Open the Amateur Writing Section
3. Open the story labelled as 'A Impossible Nuclear Catastrophe'.
4. AND....Have fun!

For Flexoo :

Spoiler

Please be online at 16:20 UTC+0 on 25th of December to publish this! and thanks!

 

Edited December 2, 2019 by Krill_300
Added Time and Date for Flexoo to note!

[r_Given6 859]

2 hours ago, Krill_300 said:

Guys, I am making a new story called 'A Impossible Nuclear Catastrophe'.So guys be online on 25 December (Christmas) at 16:45 UTC+0 for the release.

What to do?

1. First open the forum but open at the current time
2. Open the Amateur Writing Section
3. Open the story labelled as 'A Impossible Nuclear Catastrophe'.
4. AND....Have fun!

For Flexoo :

  Hide contents

Please be online at 16:20 UTC+0 on 25th of December to publish this! and thanks!

 

Please note that Helpers are just volunteers, who take time out of their precious lives to edit, beautify and publish our articles. It's not possible for them to make time for this purpose out of their busy schedules, or be able to complete it in a limited time. The least we can do to support these heroes is to let them take their time and wait patiently.

[Person_Random 4,991]

Firstly, welcome to the AWS!  Nice work, I enjoyed the poems.  They had a very unique voice and felt very lighthearted, certainly something to cheer anyone up after a long day at school or work.  Some parts need a little work (a few rhymes sounded a little random and a few lines here and there felt inserted), but I believe with practice, you will be able to be an eloquent poet and writer.  Good luck in the AWS!

[Krill_300 113]

On 11/30/2019 at 3:15 AM, Viking4s said:

Funny and fresh, a tanker with awesome talent.

 

On 11/30/2019 at 8:06 AM, Lose said:

Nice job!

 

16 hours ago, Person_Random said:

Firstly, welcome to the AWS!  Nice work, I enjoyed the poems.  They had a very unique voice and felt very lighthearted, certainly something to cheer anyone up after a long day at school or work.  Some parts need a little work (a few rhymes sounded a little random and a few lines here and there felt inserted), but I believe with practice, you will be able to be an eloquent poet and writer.  Good luck in the AWS!

Thanks all!,I like your complements and also don't forget to see my new story 'An Impossible Nuclear Catastrophe'.

You all have been promoted to the Best of The Story!

[Krill_300 113]

Best of the story list :

 - @Viking4s

 - @Person_Random

 - @Lose

 

Thanks all for the good complements!

[Viking4s 10,791]

4 hours ago, Krill_300 said:

Best of the story list :

 - @Viking4s

 - @Person_Random

 - @Lose

Thanks all for the good complements!

me P R O 

I, aslo, am a Tanker with awesome talent.

Edited December 3, 2019 by Viking4s

[Lose 881]

12 hours ago, Krill_300 said:

Best of the story list :

 - @Viking4s

 - @Person_Random

 - @Lose

 

Thanks all for the good complements!

Wait I'm there

[Krill_300 113]

7 hours ago, Lose said:

Wait I'm there

Yes you are thanks for posting the best complement!

If you write more good complements go leave 3rd and 2nd and go to 1st!

 

Good Luck!

[Krill_300 113]

NOTE : The ''An Impossible Nuclear Catastrophe'' has been canceled and now a new series are starting that is called ''Tanki Twister Diaries'' .
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For Flexoo : Flexoo, please be here at 16:00 UTC+0 on 25th of December on the Forum as I will publish the new series.Reload the page at that time!

Any queries so PM via Forum to @Krill_300 and invite @Flexoo too

[r_Given6 859]

21 hours ago, Krill_300 said:

NOTE : The ''An Impossible Nuclear Catastrophe'' has been canceled and now a new series are starting that is called ''Tanki Twister Diaries'' .
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For Flexoo : Flexoo, please be here at 16:00 UTC+0 on 25th of December on the Forum as I will publish the new series.Reload the page at that time!

Any queries so PM via Forum to @Krill_300 and invite @Flexoo too

 

On 12/2/2019 at 6:07 PM, Given said:

Please note that Helpers are just volunteers, who take time out of their precious lives to edit, beautify and publish our articles. It's not possible for them to make time for this purpose out of their busy schedules, or be able to complete it in a limited time. The least we can do to support these heroes is to let them take their time and wait patiently.

Let me put it in more simple terms: You can't order anyone about what and when they're to do.