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Goodbye Semyon [POEM]


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You left us when we needed you the most
Wish you'd come back, and give me turrets free of cost
With out you, tanki online is lost
By the way, has anybody seen the new paint frost?

 

Hello tankers, welocme to today's episode
Since when did we need to log in with a code
The era of TO with you in it glowed
Wish we could go back to the same old road

 

Oufa making videos, aboodi catching gold
Those days seem a century ago, and now we are old
TO will die, that is what we are told
These words are harsh and cold. 

 

I wish reaching the legend rank was easy
Can somebody please stop developers from being cheesy? 
By the way, has anybody heard of my friend nicked freezy? 
Pythor thinks the Sandbox today is going to be breezy 

 

Anyways, the poem, just like a tank's life, has to end
Posting goodbye topics and coming back seems to be the new trend
In the era of unity, I lost my good old friend

There, I click the button, submit post and send! 

 

NOTE:

Something tells me that maybe I am a bit late in posting this poem. Anyways, this was my first ever attempt. I know I might be flooding the AWS but I had ideas I needed to work on and my notepad was running out of space. So I had to gather courage to post some stuff here. First written poem ever. It is quite random, I know. 

 

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Approved.

 

I am not a big fan of poems (due to a traumatic experience that I've been through at the ripe old age of thirteen), but this one had a very chill feel that also brought back a stream of memories about this game. A note though, it is a bit under word count, please either make the poems longer or post multiple poems to meet word count.

 

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Well, it started off about Semyon but didn't really go anywhere with him after! Maybe you need a new title.

 

It's a good effort though. Poems were something I was always awful at, so kudos to you.

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5 hours ago, Person_Random said:

Approved.

 

I am not a big fan of poems (due to a traumatic experience that I've been through at the ripe old age of thirteen), but this one had a very chill feel that also brought back a stream of memories about this game. A note though, it is a bit under word count, please either make the poems longer or post multiple poems to meet word count.

 

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I will take care of the word count and I am sorry for being careless about it! And thanks! ?

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4 hours ago, Savage said:

Well, it started off about Semyon but didn't really go anywhere with him after! Maybe you need a new title.

 

It's a good effort though. Poems were something I was always awful at, so kudos to you.

Yeah it kind of escalated that way, avtually I took semyon as the title also because that was the key point of my TO career. Anyhow, thanks for the kind words! ?

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