A tanker story (part 2)- Your worst friend can become your best friend

[Sabrytoun_Superman 677]

When he became a legend, he always had many moments of glory and he had real and trusted friends. He used to have an enemy, but as he always said, "the only way to win against an enemy is never violence but only to be his friend". This wasn't called domination but friendship and this was one of the most important things. He always dreamt to make some videos about him but sadly he couldn't make it good and had problems uploading videos. Sadly, the first defeat was this, he gave up videos but he promised that he will come back. We can only say this is a temporary defeat but we all make mistakes and after all the fact that he couldn't make any videos was just a way to be a glory but in the dark without being under the light. He discovered that and decided to become a hidden superhero who always act behind every player like developing to always help them and protect them. Many were thinking he wasn't doing anything ,but they just didn't know about his skills and once he decided to act and help players in the light, players knew how skilled he was. This cannot be calculated, he was a legend. He did mistakes like everyone so he is not really a god but the most important thing for him was to learn of his mistakes. Mistakes happen to everyone but he was always learning of it and was ready.
 
His favourite friend now had a long life and a touching story as well. He could never become the best friend of our legendary tanker if he didn't become better and had the best version of himself. At the whole beginning, he didn't know Tanki Online and were doing many violations such as flooding, insulting or even worse but he has never been banned anytime and was happy for that but he never knew what was a good person or what was a bad person. Once he started Tanki Online, he was a bad person for sure that had communications problems with others and didn't have friends because he was pushing back everyone and was insulting. He was not a member of the community even if the community always asked him to join. But I never informed you that the players who asked him to join the community were his worse enemies who just asked him to join the community only because they wanted to harass him. This wasn't really his fault if he was a bad tanker.

 

Once he met a legendary tanker he was aggressive at the beginning but actually, he was waiting for him to insult him or such things but at the time he just asked "Why are you like this? What happened?" and the "bad tanker" was really touched like if the legendary tanker knew everything about him and knew justice because else he would be blamed once again. The legendary tanker showed him how to fight in Tanki Online because he never fought in Tanki since he was taking his days to insult everyone and to violate the Rules. He could just do that. But with the time he learnt too and that was the beginning of a true story. Every true story has a true friendship.

[Person_Random 4,991]

Approved.

 

Great work, I enjoyed the experiences that it brought back. Making a Tanki friend is quite an awesome experience. I really liked the emotion in the story, but I'm thinking you can work on fixing grammar and spelling mistakes, especially commas (using Grammarly can help with basic checks, while a proofreader can work with more detailed errors the computer algorithms cannot catch). Other than that, I can't wait for the next few stories!

 

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• Minor spelling fixes
• Added/removed commas
• Some verb tenses fixed
• A few rephrases