A tanker story (part 3) -When your worst friend is starting to become your best friend

[Sabrytoun_Superman 677]

When he started to learn his friendship with the tanker he never had before he was following and rules and was positively seeing Tanki Online and were doing progress.Before he was looking it with a positive way but could insult people still if he wanted and when the legendary tanker wasn't looking at him but one day he insulted someone and the legendary tanker was looking in the chat and got mad at him. He had his reasons to be mad against him because this means he didn't mind the lessons the legendary tanker taught him. Sadly, that as too much for the legendary tanker, who decided to leave him alone. You can think whatever you want but in fact, he just wanted to give him another chance but seeing how's his frame of mind without having support. Now he had a true friendship with others and one time he met his bad friends who asked him to join the community to bully him and take him as a victim and ban him. But his true friends just told him to stay calm and they finally fought in XP/BP and the bad friend learnt all lessons of the legend and has beaten them with his friends with being in harmony. His friends were made to meet him and to help him.
 
Friendship was good and with respect. He became much better than the beginning since he was insulting, swearing at others and didn't get any ban so didn't learn of any mistake but the fact that he met the legendary Tanker changed him and changed his mind. He knew he would become important for Tanki Online and had a very important future. He started to build his life on Tanki Online and started to found a Community who would be called "Honour for legendary Tanker" because for him he was an honoured member. He joined Tanki Online Community because his true friends told him all advantage of a community like kind people that always carry you when you feel bad. He was happy to walk into another step and for him, he was discovering another world. He wanted to become like the legendary tanker and to ask everyone that was insulting to become a good person because there's much more way to become a good person by being kind and helpful. He has decided to be like the legendary tanker who knew how to code and who was making websites.
 
He wanted to help in the dark and helping without expecting any reward. He was working on this project alone when 100 people were interested in what he was doing. Instead of pushing them back he accepted them all and knew that everyone was different and everyone has personal creativity and this creativity always pay because this brings ideas. Finally, his project was a success and a thousand of people were asking for him to help. He knew the prophecy was true and would become an important person of Tanki Online. This was a success or his mission too because he won the trust of the legendary tanker who gave him again new lessons. He was his worst friend but could prove he became the best friend of the legendary tanker and this friendship was built with gold and cannot be forgotten anymore.

[Person_Random 4,991]

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Excecllent story, can't wait for another chapter! I really liked the personal aspect of the story, which lets the reader almost get to experience what you as the writer was going through. I'm thinking you can try to improve your grammar (especially commas) because there were many comma fixes. Perhaps using an online proofreading service or asking someone you trust to proofread will help fix this. Anyways, great work and good luck on future chapters.

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• Minor spelling fixes (changed "worse" to "worst" in title)
• Added/removed commas

 

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