Inside the Crypt: Part 2

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After Hazel spotted us, we were soon after arrested by the police with charges of suspicion of espionage. We were sent to the Verkhovnyy sud, the most high-tech prison in Siberia. After that, we were made to work for Tanki as CMs. In chains, I saw Marcus, Cedric Debono (CM since 2015 - 2017 and 2018 - present-day). In the middle of the room, we saw a picture of a 35-year old German man. Engraved on the plaque just beneath it was a description: "Nives (??? - 2018)". It seems that there's an incinerator in the middle of the room that incinerates any other helper, developer, or event paint that we own. But we are going to perform a jailbreak on January 17, 2020. Although that's twelve days away, we're doing it for the good for the English community - to leak further plans.

 

After five days, we decided to start planning the jailbreak in our break time. We sent the files through flash drives that we then mix with Community Manager files, and the other person will get the files. And finally, on the day, we slipped out into a hole behind the vending machine that we discovered. If I'm right, we should be going up into the air vent. After we get up into the air vent, we designed a stealthy way to get back the 2016 files from the archives. So, here's how it'll go: We get out of the air vent and that should drop us into the 2017 section, but Small Ruler lets down and pulls up the rope that we will use to get in and out of the room. After that, we navigate to the 2016 section and find the July cabinets. After getting the July 14 files, we will get the files and get out of the air vent. But first, we need to go back to Perm, Russia (we are 908 miles from the Crypt). 

 

After escaping and hitch-hiking to Chelyabinsk, we get on a plane onto a plane to Perm. But it's not a flight - it's a small plane, but I have a pilot's license, so I can fly it. Soon, in Perm, the Crypt is kept safeguarded, so we'll have to become one of those guards. A few hours later, after the day guards leave, we go into their place and sneak in. After sneaking back to the air vents, we took off our disguises. So, after we get back to the archives, we get back to the files. But, Hazel came into the room. We can't be caught again, we have to escape now. So, Small Ruler and Zekrom the Victini pulls the rope up so I get pulled up into the vent. And after we close the vent, Hazel seems to think nothing's wrong, so he shrugs and goes back into his office. We have succeeded, we just need to escape the building and fly to Berlin. 

 

After the guards spotted us, we quickly run back to the plane and started to leave. But the police show up again and try to shoot us down. So, we put on full throttle and set our bearing to 211 degrees and head off towards Berlin. But, the air force is closing in on us, so we have to dodge explosives now. After they fire missiles, we start to dodge them. But, after 500 miles or something, they fire a heat-seeker. So, we cut engines to the back of the plane and use engines to the side of the plane instead. After the missile hits the left side, we start to plummet, down, down, down...

 

The Russian air force seems to think we're dead and leave. But I cut engines to the side and turn engines on to the middle of the plane, and we start to move. I haven't noticed, but we're in Finnish borders. The Finnish ambulance services come to the site and airlift us to the hospital in Helinski. A few days later, we leave the hospital uninjured. We get a flight to Berlin and we reach Berlin two hours later, and then begin to study the files. It seems to be the files linked to the paint separation update. There was also planned innovations of the paints e.g turning Tiger into the animated Siberian Tiger paint, but first, they had to remove the protections. That linked to the creation and innovation of modules. It all made sense! They planned this the whole time and put the paints in bundles or containers and forced people to pay for them so they could become rich. They lied to us the whole time!

 

After studying Runes, which is linked to the Firebird Demonic skin, which is linked to the number 666, and Synesthesia, which is linked to the Titan of Tanki, it seems that a new titan would've risen (the Power of Thankos). Also, studying Demon and 666, that linked to Godmode_ON's paint. But that isn't the full thing. "Mysterious Vampire" - linked to a "Halloween War" and "Cunning Imp" - which is an elf, that linked to the Elves paint in the War: Christmas. It seemed that they make pay-to-win updates and wars to try and hide the pay-to-win element. Wait until I tell the English community that...

 

If you enjoyed this second part of the 2-part story, please tell me down in the comments below!

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Very interesting story! The entire story sounds thoughtfully planned and has an adventurous, playful feel while still empahsizing the seriousness of the situation. I'm really hooked into this series and can't wait to see what the detective team finds! However, it still feels a bit faster than I would have liked, so perhaps you could try slowing down and describing the moment (e.g. how the characters felt during a critical moment, detailed descriptions of what they experience) to further enrich your story. I hope to see a concrete view of Tanki's master plan next time!

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• Several comma fixes
• Split and rephrased some run-on sentences
• Spelled out numbers (remember, smaller numbers generally are spelled out, but not something like 10 degrees Celsius)