A tanker story (part 4) To the brother that i never had

[Sabrytoun_Superman 677]

There were two legends now. Two legends who were ready to save Tanki online and make a community. Some of you can think that the legendary tanker never had any doubts and were the perfect. But this is where you are wrong. He was a legend in Tanki Online but in his school there was a friend of him that he was considering as his brother. This is the brother that he never had.This brother was playing Tanki Online too and was a lost legend. He was considering the legendary tanker as a pro but never as his brother. He thought as well he could become his brother but he never guessed the legendary tanker would accept this. This is where he made a mistake.

The legendary tanker was considering him as a brother. They weren't friends but they never asked to be friends either. One day, the lost legend was talking to him and this is where the legendary tanker told him to become his friend because he was considering him as a brother. As the brother that he never had.This is where the lost legend accepted and was happy. They were weak when they were fighting lonely but together they were strong. Destiny decided for them both to become brothers. The legendary tanker and the lost legend's combination was  making he perfect duo.

Friendship made this into brothers teams. They were brother of blood and brother of Tanki. They made a clan called B.O.T and luckily they both worked for a bot in Tanki Online and in order to become the best brothers that the world never had. At school they were friend and they were helping each others. But in Tanki Online that was different. Considering Tanki Online were their second life, they were born at the same time, the same day. They both had a childhood based on help and best friend even if they were already brothers. When they were teenagers they knew what was the help and what was legends.They were both a legend but they refused to participate in any tournament because they knew they will be in the finals and they cannot fight each other. They were brothers.

 

Two brothers that were different but became the best friends over the world,one were the son of the sun and the prince of the light while the other one was the son of the moon,one as defending Tanki online on the day while the other one was defending on the night.They were both kind and attentioned while they  were playing together when they could.But you might ask us, how did these brothers discovered each other?Here is the answer,In real life they were both in the same Classroom but none of them knew each other and none knew anyone in their Classroom were playing Tanki Online.When the legend was talking about the game to one of his favourite friend, the other person heard it and started talking with the legend about the game and saying in his side he was defending the game and helping players,the legend was exactly doing that too,they became friend and they created a prophety and became the two Brothers that defended the game until they die.These two Brothers were appreciated by everyone and made a Community based on friendship and even brothership.When you don't know someone but you consider them as a brother, just tell him and this will make you as a legend.

 

[Sacrifice 2,278]

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It is a well written story and I really like the plot. The story is developing nicely and I like where this is going. Especially, the last paragraph where it said that two brothers never enter competitions out of the fear of having to combat each other in the finals, was personally my favorite part.

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[Sabrytoun_Superman 677]

On 3/25/2020 at 7:55 PM, Sacrifice said:

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It is a well written story and I really like the plot. The story is developing nicely and I like where this is going. Especially, the last paragraph where it said that two brothers never enter competitions out of the fear of having to combat each other in the finals, was personally my favorite part.

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• Minor grammar fixes like capitalizing/non-capitalizing of certain words.
• Spelling mistakes.

However, I would highly recommend to always proof read (Read again to mark any errors) your work before sending it in. Also please not that the article is under the word count. (It is less than 400 words). It would be better if you could add more to it.

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