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They realized that they had won but not what they had done. People lost families. There were fights for supplies. Entire nations were being wiped out.

 

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On a very stagnant day in Tanki Online headquarters, Hazel was thinking hard - by his standards - on a new update for the players. So he introduced GST with the consent of Shree Narendra Modi. So naturally, Mr Rahul Gandhi started rumors that it was a corrupt money making scheme. Oddly enough, it WAS a corrupt money making scheme. So he called a big-named detective to try to nab them. And he trusted that this mission would be a success as the team detectives consisted of the best ones- Sherlock Holmes, Patrick Jane and Adrian Monk. However, the Armed Detective Agency had already made it's move and were going to capture the real culprit behind it. They sent two of their best agents to finish the job. On the way, they stopped to pick-up the necessary 'gear'. Then the clock struck 12. A loud explosion out of nowhere. At first it felt like water falling, but then it started burning. The enemy had made it's move. Debris was flying everywhere, and everyone had to quickly take cover. Several firetrucks quickly rushed to the scene. But the infernal would not be contained. They had to call the Special Fire Force. When those pyromaniacs of the spec fire force reached, they set it all on fire with their flame throwers. Ashes erupted in the air, and they fell back to the ground like snow. It was hard to breathe from all the smoke that was clouding the air. This was the result of a super volcanic eruption. Sunlight was unable to reach the ground for months. They realized that they had won but not what they had done. People lost families. There were fights for supplies. Entire nations were being wiped out. There was only one way to undo the damage, but it seemed mighty hard. They had to rebuild everything they had destroyed, but there was not enough cement.

THE END

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Gotta say, this was one heck of a story. Didn't expect the end tho.

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I would like to do the honors of starting the next story.

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It was the first day of my second year in high school. After ending the first year on a high note, I had very high expectations for my second year too. I rushed out of my house with excitement, as I got out...

 

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I saw it! I saw moltres, articuno, zapdos, ho-oh and lugia all at once!

 

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SOORRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYY ABOUT THE SPOILERSSSSSSSSSSSS

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But it was all in vain, as I was walking down the road looking proudly at the pics I had taken, a truck came by, it hit me and when I woke up, I was in laying on the mystical shining ground with a weirdly dressed woman in front of me, a kind of which I had never seen.

Welp, since I could only have a sentence, there you go.

Am I allowed to type more then one sentence [@ILiveOnTheChatBox123 plzzzzzzzzzz]?

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3 hours ago, F41TH said:
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But it was all in vain, as I was walking down the road looking proudly at the pics I had taken, a truck came by, it hit me and when I woke up, I was in laying on the mystical shining ground with a weirdly dressed woman in front of me, a kind of which I had never seen.

Welp, since I could only have a sentence, there you go.

Am I allowed to type more then one sentence [@ILiveOnTheChatBox123 plzzzzzzzzzz]?

I guess if you can make it a partial run-on sentence, as long as it is one idea. The main point is that a sentence that you have in mind for one thing is used for something else, so it would be better not to bend the rules.

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But, to their dismay, admission cost $5000 per person.

Question: If we only read the post above us, how will we know if the character is a He, She, or They? I think we should all be allowed to read the post above us as well as the very 1st post in the story.

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2 hours ago, Virtue said:
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But, to their dismay, admission cost $5000 per person.

Question: If we only read the post above us, how will we know if the character is a He, She, or They? I think we should all be allowed to read the post above us as well as the very 1st post in the story.

This is exactly why we only allow the person to read only one post above. This gives a completely new shift to the story and makes it more interesting!

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