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Poetic Chat Episode 4.9

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“ChatBox Apologizes for his rant, @Lose steps in to redirect the chat, and we decide on a Topic for Episode 5”

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ChatBox-How can my mind have been so slow?

I finally realized why this poem did not go!

I just made the poem based on what I wanted;

I should rather see in what you guys are interested.

Would you folk rather talk about Tanki's updates galore?

Maybe everyone would rather discuss some parkour?

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Sacrifice- I just want life to be good.

How does one earn their livelihood?

Lose- Wait, when typing here to we have to rhyme?

Because i never had and still don’t got the time.

ChatBox- Hey, Lose, I have yet to introduce you;

Maybe you will give a boost to the crew.

This poem started way before you arrived.

But look at you and how your writing has thrived.

From bringing new members in middle of a poem, I generally refrain;

But with such a great writer like Lose, there is so much what to gain.

So, Lose, is there something you would like to discuss?

Is there some topic that would be a great plus?

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Lose- I'm split between two decisions.

Either parkour or Tanki's revisions.

Both have their ups and their downs.

But I think one of them takes the crown .

You see, with updates, there are mixed opinions.

Some people like them, for some their hatred is comprehended in millions.

But with parkour, it's pretty black and white

Jump off the building, go and take flight!

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There's much less controversy when it comes to parkour.

So in my opinion, I like the latter far more.

ChatBox- It seems that Lose's argument wins;

Unless someone else has any objections.

Personally, I do think that parkour has potential;

I can see us writing several pages full.

Since when you have a good jump, in all its glory;

There is plenty to write about its backstory.

PersonRandom-Parkour for fun started a long time ago,

When tanks of old performed tricks as a show,

Now we have many players devoted to the hobby,

From pro players to novices just like me.

Players attempted to scale buildings of old,

Soaring through the air, performing moves oh so bold,

Many a time repeating trick after trick,

Mastering a move until it does click.

ChatBox-I think that since my parkour-ism is not so grand;

It makes a good story how I finally managed to land.

However, since we will post this in the Amateur Writing Section;

We need something universal that makes all players grin.

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So first the idea of episode 5 from Lose ;

Must be the next topic that we do choose.

Stay tuned for this topic at a later date;

"Recent Updates in Tanki" will be worth the wait!

Looking to apply? Check out episode two for details, and/or PM me. Though it won't be easy to get on with this talent-packed team. 

-ChatBox

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Approved.

Awesome! Personally, this is one of my favorites as the team dicusses what to write in verse, which can be pretty challenging. But it seems natural and flows perfectly, even making me doubt that this is a conversation (despite the fact that I saw it firsthand). I really can't wait to see what happens in Episode 5!

Edits: Added a few commas, removed the extra @'s

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Hi folks, it seems that the group will be releasing another segment in the not-to-distant future, being that the next one is finishing the writing process and it will soon be just a bit of post-production left. In the meantime, I suggest you make sure you have read and reread all the episode, and maybe comment your opinion on a particular detail of the poem.

The latest list includes:

This topic itself

Episode 4.3 & 4.6

Episode 4.0

Episode 3 (WO Chat)

Episode 2

Episode 1

Stay tuned!

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