Part 2: Double Crossed Bloodshed, I began to wake up; blinking the grayness away from my eyes, I began to see shapes moving. I see two people, one of them is moving her mouth, but I hear nothing. After a few minutes, I can begin to hear the voices, they are muffled at first. I stir. The women jumped a little in surprise and abruptly stopped talking. I attempt to ask where I am, but all that comes out of my mouth is a spluttering cough, and my chest flares up in pain. “I wouldn’t try talking for a few days, a piece of your rib cage broke, and punctured a part of your lungs. You are lucky it hit your lungs, otherwise it was going straight for your spinal cord. At that point, we wouldn’t have bothered to help you heal up.” I began to wonder what happened before I blacked out. Pictures slowly began to form, frame by frame, second by second. It all happened so fast. Memories flooding back to me. Pent up inside me like a dam waiting to burst. Again, I cough, and a small piece of bone leaves my throat. I cough once again, and twice, and three times, each time, with lessening pain, until I can reach inside and pull out the bone. I splutter, as blood spews out of my mouth, but then it was over. “You, you set him up!” I said to the women, alarmed at what I had remembered. He was innocent, this whole time. “Well, it was the only logical thing to do. His memories were much harder to suppress than yours. We did manage to get enough into him to have a horrible story. Juniper never did enter the access to the office, nor did she even know about an office. In all honesty, she never existed.” said the women, a slight smirk on her face. “You, you lied to me, you lied to us all." I yelled enraged. "But what of Maximus?” “Oh, you mean me?” Said the other man. He had a hood on, he took it off. Stefan! “Congratulations on your promotion James, we hope you enjoy the new rank of Colonel.” He smiled and handed me the badge. I took it, my hands shaking as he handed it to me. “Welcome to the vengeance, we are glad to have you.” “V.E.N.G.E.A.N.C.E, what does that stand for?” I asked. “Well, it is just the name of the operation. Nothing special. We mean to get revenge on Maximus, he set us up.” “Oh, ok, how can I help?” “We need to you to find and terminate Maximus. He is our last threat.” I sat up, with surprisingly little pain. My legs were a little numb, but I got over it soon. I walked out the door of the room, to find myself in a hospital. The door clicked as it locked behind, only to hear the sound of a gun being cocked behind me, and the feeling of cold steel against the back of my head. “Don’t move if you value your life” A voice behind me said. To be continued. Word count: 526

1.) Please do not use read, it is very hard to read. GODMODE_ON is someone who helped Tanki out in its early years, similar to the paint, Lord. However, the developers have yet to release his name. I have no idea what you said. But Wasp-Fire is a pure experience and gold grind, requiring little skill, so it has been rejected. Obviously, because you can not have someone REPRESENTING THE GAME who is basically a troll. Karma is a way to see what all a person has done negatively. This enables an easy background check. Well, the Newspaper is popular, though maybe not for all the right reasons, which I will investigate in a few writing pieces.

That is too few.

Yeah, I play the cello. Just had a concert last night. Played Pirates of the Caribbean. I also want to learn to write music at some point. That would be fun.

Well done my friend. Interesting article idea. I rather like it.

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Sorry to add extra stuff, but here we go... Signature BTRB A XP tank Something cool in the background (not picky) NOTHING should have any resemblance from the "band". Besides that, I am not picky at all. Thanks bro.

Obviously, I have 3 accounts. You have zero proof that tanki is losing players. While it is true that people leave, and sometimes it is because of updates, that is not the only reason. Many people have to leave for personal reasons, and some just get bored. It is not tankis fault. This feels like a place to vent your unhappiness about recent updates and your unhappiness compared to actual facts.

Yes please. I don't feel like discussing politics.

Reporters I can't blame because I have seen your grammar, it needs some work. You also have a tendency to start unhappiness and most don't you are very mature enough to be a mod. That MIGHT be why.

Very, very well written.

I guess you have never read the paper before...

Well written, However, you are preaching to the choir, as this combo is notorious for not turning a turret.

I just realized that 60% of the people who placed were old TWG members. Huh

What about me? I take dull topics too. :(

You is weird, and no. Right handed

Well done. However, there are more important things that you did not go over. Such as capping flags, defense, ect. Perhaps renaming it to a camper's guide. But that is just me nitpicking. Well done my friend.

What about putting this in ideas/ suggestions, so that I can more easily ignore this idea. I am not in game as much. We would all be stuck with m1s and m2s.

Well done TNT, you got me.

Same thing with me. The two things I posted were for that. Now I actually need to write stuff :D

You could ask the same of me, I have applied 2 times (the first does not count). It is not easy to join.

And THAT, is why you work on a less playe map, such as Highways.

You need to have a direct link to post it.

The main problem with contests and their results is usually, as I have noticed, that people usually think theirs to be the best, and that they should win. However, one does need to take their heads out of what they believe is right or wrong and look at it from a different angle. Contests results are not so much biased vs. unbiased, but quality. Anyone can win the contests so long as their entries are good and worthwhile. Anyone can post a good entry, anyone can post a crappy entry. It is just a matter of how others view it. Opinions don't mean fact.

Well written, I would suggest using less vibrant colors for division, and try and make things stand out by increasing font size and maybe a white, as it sticks out well. Besides that, very good job.