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:ph34r: I know what you mean. The thing to do is re-evaluate what your audience wants; that's what I did through a survey. That's what made me revert to some slightly more Tanki-related topics for a bit. Also, Happy Birthday @PPS! :P :D
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Approved. Edits Made: - Removed unnecessary doubled spaces in front of and behind every comma. - Added some commas as needed. - Changed "some time" to "sometimes". - Removed some double spaces. - Changed "then" to "than" in one case. - Split apart a long sentence. - Changed the first word of every sentence to capitalized. - Added in a few words for clarity. (Like "rich man" rather than just "rich") - Changed a sentence to "same with some white people think they are better than black people." Don't make large sweeping assumptions that could be interpreted as you saying "All white people think they are a superior race." That's very bad to do. - Changed "others opinion" to "Other's opinions" to be better-fitting the sentence. - Split another large sentence into two sections. - Merged "your self" into "yourself" - Split another large sentence into two sections. - A few other assorted minor edits. I recommend learning a little more about punctuation for the future, especially with commas and cutting down sentence length. On a side note, welcome to the Amateur Writing Section.
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Abs too savage. :ph34r: I haven't left Tanki though, just on low accounts or not playing due to lag. I only have access to my better computer sometimes. :ph34r:
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:ph34r: Maybe. :ph34r: Almost at page 980!
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Dead serious. We have to get to 1000 pages by Christmas. :ph34r:
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Yes. :ph34r: Yeah, one could also me a normal dragon and a Crested. It doesn't really matter, but it makes a convenient list of all the names. #1kpagesB4_Dec_25
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Well, goodnight everyone! See you all tomorrow!
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OBEY THE TRAIN Lit music, I rate it dank out of 10, nice one.
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Yes, I assumed your species. :ph34r:
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We got this people!
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Wait, is there any news about the Holiday Sales yet? I really need to know ASAP.
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Oh awesome. Also..... Happy Potato Dragons for ALL!
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Whoa, how do you know that?
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I just want to note that in a matter of about an hour, we've managed to make this topic gain many many pages. I stopped counting. Good job everyone, mission success for now. :D #1000b4_25_Dec (Fixed :ph34r: )
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I second this. The truth.
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I just wanted to say that I'm really proud of you. :P ;) Good job m8.
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Let the best user win! ;)
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OMG This is amazing!!!! :lol: :D :D :D :lol: :wub: :wub:
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Rip the romance. It was romantic while it lasted. :P
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I ship it.
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Rip, goodbye, have a nice time! ;)
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Abstract is the new cool. Abstract art, abstract concepts, ab's tracts
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That song is fire. :P
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Wow romantic. If real, pepperoni in pizza. Pepperoni Pizza > Plain Pepperoni > Ripperoni.
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