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  1. On 6/9/2020 at 7:13 AM, XP_Coffee said:

    Tremendous writing.  This story is the quintessence of the title.  I, too, have a soft spot for starlit nights.  Aw shucks, you got me all mushy. ?  

    Unfortunately the sky doesn't get very starry these days, especially in the middle of the town I live in... too much artificial light.

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    "You remember the first time we were sitting under the stars like this?"

    Of course I do. That was when I realised I need nothing more. How could I forget?

    "Of course I do. It was how we met. How could I forget? We were both 17, it was summer, and we were both heading out to college in a couple of months."

    "And miraculously, both our parents had suggested that we spend the summer at our grandmothers'."

    "And miraculously, both our grandmas lived in the same town - neighbours, in fact."

    "And miraculously, we had both independently decided, on the same night, that the bedroom was too uncomfortable, and we rather wanted to go out to the fields and stargaze."

    "Not so independently. It was a full moon night, and it was beautiful, irresistibly beautiful - it was beautiful for everyone."

    "Maybe so. But I like to think that the sky was hosting a party for the moon and the stars, but they were all bored because that's how parties go, and so they invited Romance to join them."

    "That would be Venus."

    "But Venus was too hot to go near in the middle of summer, so they had to make do with us."

    "I think we made sure that they didn't regret that decision." We both giggle.

    "Doubtless. The night sky has been beautiful far too frequently ever since."

    I am leaning against a tree beside the road, the only tree nearby. There are shrubs scattered around the road, and miles of farmland fill the rest of the landscape, but the horizon is invariably a thick border of trees. There is a full moon, a clear sky, and there are no artificial lights to swallow up the stars. I can hear the buzz of beatles, or whatever those insects are that sing the songs beckoning for beautiful dreams to descend from the skies and tell us their tales of wonder and show us their treasures of beauty. They beckoned us to each other that night.

    "I think I find the nights beautiful because I get to spend them with you."

    She smiles. She’s always smiling, but the smile broadens now. "I think the same about you, you know. What is beauty if you have nobody to share it with? How can anything be beautiful if nobody makes it beautiful for you?"

    Her head is in my lap. My legs are straight out in front of me, but my knees are slightly bent upwards, creating a snug valley for her. She lies slightly turned to her side, her body facing the tree but her face turned up straight, my face directly above hers. The image of the white dots up above reflects on her bright black iris, but I know her eyes let only me go through. I know because mine do the same.

    "You have made everything beautiful for me since we met those ten years ago," I caress her forehead and stroke her hair. Her arms are wrapped around me. "Everything."

    We were both diagnosed positive on the same day, some two weeks ago. We had decided to test after she discovered that the grocery shop owner we always bought from had been infected. The disease progressed identically for the two of us, and today the doctor apologised to both of us through his mask, and to our families through Skype. I told him that I felt alright; I felt a little weak, yes, but mostly alright. He said something about something somewhere in my lungs reaching a certain signature count of something, but the only something I heard was 12 hours.

    I asked the doctor to tell my family that I was asleep. She did the same. The hospital had hundreds of new patients pouring in everyday, and I don't think anybody noticed us sneaking out at night. The hospital was on the outskirts of town, so nobody saw us on the streets either. We each left a short note for the staff explaining where to find us the next morning, and letters for our families. We both felt sort of guilty about forcing someone, someone with more than enough work on their shoulders, to spend an hour getting our bodies back, but we finally decided to escape anyways.

    "I wish you had published your writings."

    When I finally decided to do that while waiting for the diagnosis mail, too many shutters were down.

    I wrote for us. I wrote those things because writing them made me happy, and reading them made you happy. I wrote about the things that matter in life for the things that matter in life. I wrote for us, and I'm happy, I'm satisfied. And I'm thankful. I'm thankful to you for being what mattered, being everything to me."

    I can see her eyes glimmering, beginning to moisten, and I can feel mine doing the same. Her lips quiver, and my eyes flood and everything blurs; I close my eyes and pull her against me, my right hand below her right armpit and my left hand tightly clasping her left shoulder, her right hand clasping the lower right curve of my neck and her left hand pressing against my left shoulder blade, pulling me towards her away from the tree. "I don't want to die, I don't want this to end," she whimpers.

    "I don't want to let you go," I whisper with a broken voice, holding her tight, as tight as possible; I want to pull her into me; I want to absorb her, her heart and her tears, her face and her body, her very entirety.

    I never let her go, nothing ever ends, and our hearts never die. The stars never stop shining, the insects never stop singing, and the night never ends. I can feel my wet shoulder, my tingling cheeks, and the warmth of her body for an eternity. I can feel both our hearts beating, and I notice they are in sync. Once we stop crying, I synchronise my breathing too. And the stars never stop shining, the insects never stop singing, the night never ends; I never let her go, nothing ever ends, our hearts never die. Time stretches to infinity, and everything keeps slowing down as we rock slightly, never loosening our embrace. I go back to that night under the stars when I met her and said hi, live everything again till I am back to this night under the stars when we are supposed to say goodbye, and then go back again, and we never say goodbye, because I will never let her go, nothing will ever end, our hearts will never die and the stars will never stop shining and the insects will never stop singing and this night will never end.

     

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    Hey,

     

    It's a tough time for everyone, but it's easy to forget that the numbers we see everyday are more than numbers - they represent real people, people with hopes and worries, joys and sorrows, a yesterday and a tomorrow. They have real emotions, just like you and me. It's easy to forget among all our individual everyday troubles why we are doing this. We aren't doing this to reduce a statistic that is too large to really be understood by our brains; we are doing this to save lives. Real lives.

    Even the tiniest of efforts help prevent an adventure from ending before it should. And every single one counts. It's easy to be numbed by a 7 digit number, but we need to remember that no matter how bad things get and how large the numbers grow, even one life saved is an infinitely better world.

     

    Let's stay safe for ourselves, for the people who love us and the people we love; let's stay safe for everyone.

     

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  3. These pro writers (Magenta, Im lookin at you) should write a story about tanks, some boiz should act it out and then we could have some pro editors finish it up and ta-da, a Tanki movie. 

    Yes, I know its never gonna happen. I thought of this last night and just wanted to post it.

     

     

    Hippin has already written a story about tanks. And I'm pretty sure it has both boiz and gurlz :huh:.

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    Hey, ya'll, I've decided on the map for this week, and, *heavy drum-roll* iiiiittt iiiiiissssss....

     

     


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    Find the Gold Box drop locations for Chernobyl in the spoiler below:

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    Find the map settings in the spoiler below:

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    Note that rank brackets will be -, not - as shown in the screenshot above. All other settings will be identical to what is shown in the screenshot.

     

     

     

    :excl: Time: 15.00 UTC, Sunday.  :excl:

     

     

    Notes:

     

    Map will NOT be Space-Mode! I've requested for a Special Battle (-), so assume that the aforementioned rank bracket battle will be made, unless I notify otherwise.

     

    Those who desire to be invited to the battle should join the Unofficial Player-created 'Drop The Gold' Event Discord Chat to receive further instructions.

     

    Show your hype for the event by discussing it below, and letting your friends know about this topic!

     

     

    ~~~Join Our Discord Channel To Get The Link 5 Minutes Earlier~~~

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    ~~~As Well As Voice Chat~~~

     

     

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    Ok, let's face it, this topic is dying. Concede it. CONCEDE IT! Good. Now that we've accepted it, we might work and get somewhere.

    So here's what I'm going to do for my part. I've stockpiled 30 golds up until now. I've decided that, instead of raining them all at one event, I'll drop 5 in each. I'll be holding one event each Sunday. This means at least 6 weeks of great fun. Of course, as usual, I'm sure that in each event I'll be joined by benefactors such as... well, @Benefactor, as well as @Ninja and numerous other people. What that means is that in each event, those who show up can reasonably expect around 10 golds. Now, 10 golds/a week rains are hard to come by, so I figure that if we do this, we'll attract a bunch of new faces to this beloved corner of ours. 6 weeks of this, and this topic should be oiled up and running like a horse in no time. Obviously, in these 6 weeks, I can expect to receive more golds from containers and contests and whatnot, so it should last, quiet definitely, for more than 6 weeks. Once I do run out of golds, I'm sure others will carry this forward - that's the whole point of bringing this topic alive again.

     

    Now, I bet on the strong probability that you didn't read the above, so let's jump straight into the details.

     

     

    Date: Every Sunday, for at least 6 weeks, the first Sunday being the 21th of October.

     

    Time: 15.00 UTC. If this changes, a notifying post will be posted by the respective Friday. Please follow this topic to be notified!

     

    Map: To be decided each week, a notifying post will be posted by the respective Friday. Please follow this topic to be notified!

     

    Rank Limits: I'll request special battles of  to (the maximum). If this cannot happen, battles of  to  will be made.

     

    No. Of Golds: 5 each Sunday for 6 Sundays by me, others are, of course, welcomed to drop.

     

    Equipment: Any, EXCEPT: Dictator, Mammoth, and Titan.

     

    Space or Normal: Sometimes Space, other times Normal. A notifying post will be posted by the respective Friday. Please follow this topic to be notified!

     

    Notes: Battles will be in Team Mode (CTF/TDM/CP/RGB), to minimise killing. Special battles, if any, will always be Parkour, cuz, ask Torben. KILLING IS NOT ALLOWED, PLEASE DON'T KILL AND MINE! If you do, there's nothing I can do about it, but, come on, be good.

     

    Special Note: My birthday is on the 8th of November, and I'll be having a small party with my friends on Sunday, so I'll have the rain that week on Saturday (10th November). It'll also be my birthday rain, so HBD me.

     

     

     

     


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  5. yea formatting is an issue i tend to have but ill work on it

    It's quite simple, really. Just press Ctrl+A and then click this:

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    Also, since most of your stories seem to be dialogues, just keep 1 line of spacing between lines. For instance, this...

     

    "Lets play tag outside!"
    "No, it's far too dark."
    "That's what makes it fun!"
    "Agreed!"
    "OK, fine. Everybody outside for tag."
     
    ...should be like this...
     
    "Lets play tag outside!"
     
    "No, it's far too dark."
     
    "That's what makes it fun!"
     
    "Agreed!"
     
    "OK, fine. Everybody outside for tag."

     

     

    Much easier for the reader that way.

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