#NeverGiveUp

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i am not complaining, just giving feedback. re write when you are well, which i hope u will be soon :D

too compressed. add more details. make the thing more vivid in the reader's mind. you didn't convince me that aliens were attacking, but as a writer doing that is crucial.

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they call me great.

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30 mins later, he is still at it.

wow, and @Cortana have the same birthdays. is this a co-incidence? :huh: :unsure: :wacko: :blink:

Why is it called the 'The Cortana Syndrome', some ask. ^^ That's why ^^. From looking at this, it's also evident that a cure is not coming in the foreseeable future.

next match: rip those guyz....

Go here for reference. Individual pics: Was my entry for this contest.

What kind of players, you ask? *cough* *cough* tsy *cough* the *cough cough* *cough cough COUGH!* crazy *cough cough* SOMEONE CALL THE DOCTOR FOR GODMODE'S SAKE!.... TSY walks in, in a white dress, a stethoscope hanging from his years like a kid's earphones....

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here, my entry. don't worry have PMed savage too. just sharing with u guyz too :p . also sorry for posting link, but I am on the mobile yah..... https://s20.postimg.org/qxu959l8t/New_Microsoft_Office_Word_Document-0_1.jpg https://s20.postimg.org/csog3gc7h/New_Microsoft_Office_Word_Document-1.jpg .postimg.org/7avufngzv/New_Microsoft_Office_Power_Point_Presentation_2

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the 24 teams will be reduced to 12. how will the 12 be reduced to 4?

u got smoky vik. thats awesome. so buy one drug kit, play highland ctf. one drug kit should be enough to get u into the next rank. gl.

not bad xD we* not e ruined it. we ruined it.

no...

u mean 29th?