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Yup. "The Main Page" and "Indents and Paragraph Alignments" were your wrong answers.
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Guilty as charged. :blush:
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That's the spirit. ^_^ Wish everyone had the attitude. <_<
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Simply remove the spoilers and it's completely fine? Unless you're viewing from a tablet/phone and see the entire BBCode. I can open the spoilers just fine on my phone and iPad.
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If it's so annoying, you can simply just quote the message and in preview fix up whatever isn't allowing it to open.
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I haven't thoroughly played all my maps but the only one I really actually enjoy is Tribute. I dislike the Polygon and Silence ones, both maps have become horrible to play - every match is one sided.
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The spoiler works perfectly fine for me, not my fault that there's a problem on your end. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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Main page, not pages. It's a sub-page of the Main Page, not the Main Page itself.
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Nothing.
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Works for me. :wacko: Try Incognito.
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Review [Halloween Special] Halloween in Tanki Online
marc.jp_44 replied to Yisroel.Rabin in Newspaper Archive
If you'd like a little bit more detail, check out this page: http://en.tankiwiki.com/Other_Maps -
So, how'd it go? :unsure:
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WINNERS, STATISTICS AND RESULTS ARE OUT! You can find them all here — CLICK HERE! Congratulations to all participants, prizes will be sent out within a couple of days. :) Amended Prize Values: Due to the easiness and short-length of the Quiz, prizes have been modified by approximately 2/3. Top 10: 4,700 crystals Random 40: 2,000 crystals Lucky Gold Box Supplies Winner: 1 Gold Box
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They’re not.
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Approved. Very in-depth piece. It was an interesting read, however, there were many spelling issues, grammatical errors and the biggest thing was your struggle with articles. Some of the errors: You were using "have" to describe singular things and "has" for plural things - make sure you use the right one; There were some commas needed and double-spaces removed. Several typos. The piece itself was fantastic, extremely in-depth but naturally, that also means mistakes are bound to be prominent but you must still make sure that you correct them. Proofread twice to three times yourself, then ask others to. There also seems to be one image missing towards the beginning of the Article, make sure that's corrected ASAP, please. Last but not least, please try to make relevant banners. xD What is that opening banner? Try to keep it Tanki-related please. :D
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Oh right, probably didn’t sense the sarcasm in your tone. I think we are still yet to receive the files. What makes you say that? Yup, should be done within the day.
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Nah, I don’t use this for TTC Questions. There are other places.
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Possibly before 2018. :wacko:
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It pretty much applies for the entire piece. It was kinda awkward reading medium-long sentences, then one very brief one. Either stick with long sentences or short sentences, try to stick with the structure, otherwise it becomes messy to read. Some sentences weren't too bad to read whilst others were messy. I'll give you an example: This was a pretty good excerpt from your piece, the sentences were at medium length and the flow was good. An example of bad flow (imo) is this one: The very next sentence had poor flow. Short sentence followed by short sentence, followed by medium sentence, followed by short+repetitive sentence. You also used "as usual" in one sentence, then "as always" in the next, which ruined your rhythm. TL;DR - There are some small technical issues that can make your piece slightly deterring to read and I'd recommend fixixng up things such as your flow and expression. You don't need to use fancy words or long sentences, just make sure you stay consistent (but not repetitive).
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Can we try to stay on-topic, please?
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Approved. Few corrections: Whether you use "maths" or "math," it doesn't matter but be consistent. In two sentences, you used "math" and "maths." You don't need to start words inside quotation marks mid-way through a sentence with a capitalised article. The piece itself; it was alright but I'd have liked if it was more concise, there are some sentences which could be shortened. I'd recommend changing the title to "The enemy within," thoughts?
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I’m from Victoria/Melbourne, so it’s VCE here.
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