Humour me

[tweezers 1,034]

Humour Me

 

“Don’t do this.”

 

“I have to. You know I have to. There’s nothing else I can do.”

 

“You know that’s not true.”

 

“Then tell me, tell me damn it! Tell me what the hell’s left for me!”

 

“That depends on what you think. You know that.”

 

“You can’t tell me can you? You never could, and you never will. Why shouldn’t I just pull this trigger and shut you up now?”

 

“Calm down. We’ll work it out.”

 

“Stop saying that. Stop saying that you prick.”

 

“What do you want me to say then? What do you want me to tell you?”

 

“I don’t know. Just say something. Say that you want to stop me. Say that you don’t want to stop me. Just tell me something that I can make out.”

 

“Fine, then. You know you have no right to be doing what you’re doing. You know that you’re just overreacting. You know you’ve got a penchant for dramatizing everything that happens to you. How the hell can you? You’ve got it all, and then some. What more could you want?”

 

“I’ve already told you.”

 

“Refresh my memory. Humour me.”

 

“Do you know what it’s like to be crushed? Do you know what it’s like to feel like your head is being shoved underwater by the people who you think you knew? The people you were taught knew everything? Do you know how it feels to have your heart torn out, over and over again, and to still be naive enough to hope? Do you know what it’s like to go through that at a time that no one should ever go through that? Do you have any idea what it’s like to have all those thoughts alongside everyone telling you that you’re just overreacting?”

 

“But you dealt with it, didn’t you?”

 

“I dealt with it. Really. Does this look like someone who’s dealing with it? I’ve got a gun pointing at you, and you’re telling me that?”

 

“Fine then. If you’re so sorry for your pathetic self, pull it. Kill me. See what salvation you get out of it.”

 

“Maybe I will. Maybe.”

 

“You won’t.”

 

“I will.”

 

“No, you won’t.”

 

“Watch me.”

 

Click - click - boom.

 

One person hits the ground.

 

The same person with the gun in their hand.

[Stratosphere 2,234]

How about some additional humor? Otherwise, quite nice!  :lol:

[Magenta 5,165]

 

Grammar Nazi.

 

 

Oh, and btw, you forgot to humour me.

 

 

I think the ending lines in italic were kinda clichéd, hmm?

Edited November 29, 2017 by Magenta

[mydoom.exe 5,154]

Definitely humoured me.

[Legacy 754]

I liked this for some reason...

[Unbeatable.Mr 335]

Tbh i missed out half way through , xDD

 

Didn't get the humour.. xD

[mydoom.exe 5,154]

I liked this for some reason...

Maybe because it was extremely well written.

[tweezers 1,034]

Tbh i missed out half way through , xDD

 

Didn't get the humour.. xD

 

How about some additional humor? Otherwise, quite nice!  :lol:

The "humour" here isn't humour in the traditional sense, like jokes and stuff. The meaning of humour here was , "comply with the wishes of (someone) in order to keep them content, however unreasonable such wishes might be." 

 

Maybe because it was extremely well written.

*blush*

Edited December 2, 2017 by tweezers

[Magenta 5,165]

I liked this for some reason...

Unless you can't sleep in night thinking about it, you know why.

[Metaphor 538]

Tbh i missed out half way through , xDD

 

Didn't get the humour.. xD

'Humor me' is an expression. It is not literally meant to make you laugh. 

[r_trooll15 827]

'Humor me' is an expression. It is not literally meant to make you laugh. 

?

[lukey0 27,543]

Very nice

[tweezers 1,034]

?

 

The "humour" here isn't humour in the traditional sense, like jokes and stuff. The meaning of humour here was , "to comply with the wishes of (someone) in order to keep them content, however unreasonable such wishes might be." 

[r_trooll15 827]

Ok

[Magenta 5,165]

The two people in the dialogue were really only one person, no?

[iloveatilla 3]

This reminded me kinda of Hamilton. Only slightly, though.

[Venerable 2,971]

Sent a chill down my spine...

Very well written!!!