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Yeah let's put a dot on this :ph34r:. Anyways, article was funny.

It totally is necessary. Desty is listing items, so the comma is necessary; a tin of coke and an overdrive are not Porsches.

Google it.

They're not familiar with the idea of the Oxford Comma.

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One would think that a story cannot have too many plot twists; this is proof that one would be wrong to think so. The sheer number of plot twists ruined it. But then, one cannot expect better than what the authors came up with given the format. Each author did a terrific job individually, except the first. I'm being brutally honest here, but that's what I am. No point beating around the bush. Each chapter - again, except the first - individually were great pieces, but they just don't come together.

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What has that got to do with anything :ph34r:?

Lawl

At first I was like "Wow I didn't know vik was so good!" And then I saw the son of a took signing off in a discreet corner of the page. Bravo.

You think I'm any different :ph34r: I don't mind embarrassing typos being pointed out!

You mean "only" not "minuscule." "Minuscule" relates to size, not quantity in numbers.

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Twee never disappoints, and not one moment dares be an exception. I've been thinking of writing something along these lines, but I've been procrastinating. This might help getting my butt to work, so thanks. BTW, is this the first of a series?

Would doing a parody count as a violation of rule 2, even if we explicitly concede that we're doing a parody?

Yes please!

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Great job but tracks look hideous.

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Damn, that's good!

As you improve, your skills improve. As your skills improve, the more errors you will notices in your work. So, honestly, there's not end to how much you can revise your work. You should publish after a couple of revisions, then come back after a few months, revise it, then edit your article, whatever it is. As people has said before, this is not much of a case regarding guides.