Approved. Nice! I'm really enjoying the plot development here :D

Approved. Loved it.

Approved. -Added a title. -Spelling and grammar corrections. -Reformatted. Next time, make sure that you space your paragraphs, since one massive chunk of text doesn't make anyone want to read it.

Approved. -Reformatting. -Punctuation edits. Remember to use your apostrophes when you shorten phrases. For example "do not" becomes "don't". Also, don't use Comic Sans. Just...don't.

Approved. I'm running out of words to describe these. How about, um... excellent!

Approved. -Minor grammar corrections. -Rephrasing. Perhaps next time, you could simply refer to Weapon Twelve as "Twelve". Sounds much better and makes it a lot easier to work with while you're writing.

Read it out to yourself once you've written it. If it sounds unnatural or too complicated or vague, you'll notice it when you read.

They were really minor stuff, usually just slightly wonky phrasings and the like. Nothing a quick self-proofing couldn't fix.

Approved. As ever, a lovely read.

Approved. -Minor grammar corrections. -Minor reformatting.

Approved. Always nice to approve an article that requires no edits! It's an interesting opening, I'll be looking out for the next chapter ;)

Approved. -Completely reformatted. -Grammar, spelling, capitalization and language corrections. -Rephrased.

Approved. -Minor grammar and punctuation edits. (Did not change the meaning of the comments) I liked the colours and separation used, but perhaps make it a little bit longer and more in-depth next time?

Approved. -Replaced and added punctuation marks as necessary. -Rephrased or reformatted some places. Well done! That's quite the plot twist.

Approved. -Minor grammar and spelling corrections.

Approved. -Minor language and grammar edits. Consider posting this somewhere like AO3 if you want to reach out to fans of the series. ;)

Approved. -Minor word replacements. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I especially liked the descriptions and the conversations.

Approved. -Minor respacing. Well written, with the right amount of humour and actual information. I like!

'cos so many good articles :P

Approved. -Grammar corrections. -Rephrased in a few places. -Respaced. The plot was somewhat confusing. The transition from racing to the battlefield was especially misleading.

Sorry, but I can't really remember which ones exactly :(. They were quite minor though, just a couple of words out of place.

Approved. As always, lovely!

Approved. -Changed the text size to 14. -Rephrased a few sentences.

Approved. -Minor grammar edits and spacing. IMO, the last couple of sentences degraded the writing. They were unnecessary, and ruined the effect of the story.