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    AWC Project | June Results

    Monday the latest. Great job with your story :D
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    AWC Project | June Results

    AWC Project June Results Another month has passed, and with it comes the results of our latest project. We thank those who took the time and trouble to participate, but we would like to see more entries next time 'round. Now, without further ado, the results! First place: @I3.R.0 Reward: 18,000 crystals and 10 points Entry: Option 3 (Guide) Second place: @zaintahir Reward: 16,000 crystals and 8 points Entry: Option 2 (Story) Don't forget to check out the AWC League standings! The next Project will be released soon, and will be posted in the Amateur Writing Section as a pinned topic.
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    How to get a Boyfriend in Tanki

    Approved. -Minor grammar corrections.
  4. I thought I did...must've been lost in editing or something, forum was playing hell with my articles. Thanks for pointing it out!
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    The Tiny Tank [TTT]

    Approved. -Minor grammar corrections. -Took the story out of the spoiler, and put the introduction there instead. Sounds like an interesting story idea! I'm looking forward to reading the next part :)
  6. Thanks! And hey, if you want a shot at getting featured in the Best of AWC, why not try your hand at writing and submit something to the Amateur Writing Section?
  7. Unfortunately we don't give out rewards for the Top 5 articles yet. But if you do want rewards, consider applying to the AWC and participating in the project :P
  8. A fine, outstanding article, full of the latest, most relevant and up to date news.
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    ''Young Players''

    Approved. -Many, many grammar corrections. -Some light rephrasing. Don't use "you are" after "what" in a question. The correct form is "What are you..." not "What you are...". Don't say "much good", it should be "much better".
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    Dying Love

    Approved. -Minor formatting. -Grammar corrections and rewrote a couple of sentences to make it clearer. Bloody well done.
  11. Firstly, this is not in any specific order, as stated at the start of the list. Secondly, her article got on the list not because she's an ex-reporter, but because it was a genuinely good article worthy of a place on the list.
  12. Approved. -Formatted it a bit to aid readability. It's quite nice. 10/10 would sniff.
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    [Song] Imagine

    Approved.
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    Story Of My [Tanki] Life

    Approved. -Minor spelling corrections and capitalizations. Quite an interesting read :)
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    [Issue 66] Best of AWC: Round X

    Hello again, readers! Welcome back to the latest installment of all things AWC related. We've got epic reads, a new project and everything else you've come to expect from this article. Without anymore faffing about, let's get to it. Top 5 Articles of the Month Every month, we receive a few absolutely exceptional articles in the Amateur Writing Section, and we feel that they are worthy of your attention. Here, in no particular order, are the 5 best articles of the month. 1. Newspaper contests: An Inside Look by @M-axis Tweezers: An interesting read, with well put questions and a good conversation with the interviewees. BD30: This article was pro cuz I was in it This interview combined well-planned questions with super awesome interviewees quality interview conversation to make a good article that gives a taste of the 'behind-the-scenes Newspaper'. 2. Story Of My [Tanki] Life by @Sliced Tweezers: Another biography, but a very well written, subtly satirical and entertaining one. Brings back quite a few memories, and perhaps a few regrets too. BD30: This was pretty similar to how I started Tanki (#TheChromebookLife), and I definitely identified with this tale. Definitely well written even if it's in a somewhat common genre in the Tanki forums. :ph34r: 3. Food Wars: A Noodle of Hope by Tweezers: As parodies go, this is refreshingly original and well written. Woof! BD30: Pro story k thx bai. It was quite amusing to read and well written as a parody. 4. A Tanki Online guide: Discover who you are by @zaintahir Tweezers: A pretty solid guide, that nicely covers all the positions that the average tanker experiences in their career. BD30: Overall a very well-encompassing guide about positions on the battlefield that was nice and informative. 5. Inventing Parkour Tricks by @SwiftSmoky Tweezers: Well written, with engaging content and super formatting. Well done! BD30: Parkour tricks <3 The methods were nice and easy to understand, and combined with quality writing and formatting made this an excellent article. Distinguished Members It's very simple. You show us you've got brilliance, and we make sure that you get recognized for it. Congratulations to @zaintahir Project of the Month The project of the month is currently in progress. It is open to all members of the Amateur Writing Club. Check out the Project topic here, and get writing to win crystals and points in the AWC League. Announcements The Amateur Writing Guidelines have been translated into Hindi. Go check it out here. If you would like to read it in English, read it here. As the newspaper takes a break for the next month, the Best of AWC article will be posted in the Amateur Writing Section, so look out for that. There's always room for more in the AWC, so follow these instructions and send us an application if you would like to be a part of it! And so, we come to the end of another Best of AWC article. We'll see you next month we more of the same, so stay tuned, and be safe!
  16. Approved. -Grammar corrections. -Formatting corrections (added [.hr] and so on) -Changed a few words to aid readability.
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    A Bad Thing About Tanki

    Approved. -Grammar and spelling edits. -Spacing edits. -Replaced some words in a couple of places.
  18. Approved. -Corrected grammar and spelling errors here and there. Top job! I like.
  19. Thanks man! And Emma...maybe, maybe not. You'll have to wait for the next issue to get to know her better :P
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    Shaft - The New King of DM?

    Actually, if you count it I think you'll find that the word count is 396, or 403 with the title. This is just about enough to get it in, as the word limit is a minimum of 400 words, although such articles are still approved at the Reporters discretion.
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    Shaft - The New King of DM?

    Approved. -Grammar edits. -Added a few words here and there to aid clarity. -Added a title. Overall, not a very clear article. There is little to no outline, nor are there specific points. Plus, the entire article has absolutely nothing to explain or justify the title.
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    The Legendary Tankers

    Approved. -Grammar and formatting edits -Rewrote some sentences to make them understandable. Overall, the best tip I can give you is to keep track of your tenses, as you seemed to change between present and past tenses way more that is necessary and often in all the wrong places.
  23. Approved. -Corrected a few grammar and spelling errors. -Capitalized where needed. -Added a title. Remember, every time you start a new sentence the first letter of the first word should be a capital. When writing names, such as those of turrets and hulls, and even Tanki, their first letters should also be capitalized. And also, about your tendency to keep adding commas to join sentences, try reading it out to yourself. If you feel like it's dragging on and on, it probably is. A pretty solid guide right here but ordering pizza is a perfectly valid reason to go AFK :ph34r:
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    Tankiverse War

    Approved. -Corrected spelling and formatting. Remember, always capitalize the first word of every sentence. And also, don't use commas so much in the middle of sentences, since it drags on and on and makes it quite hard to read. I'll be waiting for the next installment :P
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