Which is precisely what I need to do, because my little game will be 3D. It's rather ambitious too, maybe too much. I could learn more - care to PM, anyone who knows more on the subject? Secondly, as I said earlier, I could do with some lessons by someone here who knows maths and has the time and courage to do so

I think the "we" in your post refers to the person posting the post. In other words, you're referring to yourself in the plural form :P Anyways. I could do with someone teaching me algebra, trigonometry, calculus, whatever lies beyond, etc (I'm only twelve, so all I get to learn at school is early level algebra) Wait wait wait... how? I could use that, I'm thinking of developing a game. Sorry for uh, quoting a months old post, but this sounds important.

Look where your mind forbids you to, look beyond the warning line, and trespass into spoiler land, and all shall be (un)clear. @Person Carter WAS narrating the whole time. In my version of the story anyway heh

When is it mentioned that Gerald killed Callum? It's merely mentioned that Gerald's assignment is complete. Two separate things, however similar they may seem. (Gerald's initial assignment was to obtain info) I can repair it if it's too big a hole, though

Hmm, I think I could do with a reply from Flex himself.

I'm surprised nobody mentioned E3... And since I play on a rather old laptop, half my Steam library is older than me, and 90% of it is unsuitable for 12 year olds :p Also, anyone play Dota 2?

The Truth Word count of the story is 899. I had managed to bring it up to 1040 words, and had to cut the 140 extra words :P And if anyone's confused, I can explain.

P.S. Grand can't enter because he won last time. I believe. Also, how did the family end up in their home, weren't they chatting in a cell in Chapter 3 and 4, with Gerald confined in?

Ahhh Zenith! Welcome back! :d

Nice one as always! Soo... War or Liberation? :p

I agree, wonderfully executed piece! I should probably start to not consider family secrets a cliched theme heh :p Also, won't you attempt?

Hmmm. Liked this. Good job, Hawaii! And tell me, when do you plan on ending your fanfic?

Also, cut down on the cuts (oh, the irony) and strikes and forum jokes, please. It might go in your favor to make the story a tiny bit slower, but then maybe the fast-paced action is your style. It's painful to the eyes, looking at all those green names - maybe next time you could remove the names altogether and match each person to their Tanki nickname in a spoiler. Hmm?

Penguin who? I'm honored to be called TNT though :P Also, you may want to give some spacing - I'm confused as to what's really happening. And maybe replace the older names with newer people? :P

The last few sentences, where the "I" (I figure its you) kills me and everyone's horrified

You killed me! Traitor! Eh. I laughed. :P But why can I slow down time?!

Well I'd like to know, because I'm Pakistani and don't get a word of what you're saying. Might be helpful advice. (though I love studying)

They aren't, period. Not so sure about whether this unnecessary-talk-better-done-in-Discord is allowed here. After all, that's what got you guys a closure a year, I think, ago :p

I've already sent it to Flex back when I was Staff Sergeant, but now that I can post, I figured I'd best post here too.

falling in love is bad, period. Let's enjoy the controversy that may or may not occur.

Is there any maximum word limit to any of these? I'm doing a story based on an English exam assignment, and I like to describe stuff. Which can lead to an enormous word count pretty early. Also, good luck everyone!

An interesting read... like your entire series. This is getting so large, I seriously wonder how I'll ever be able to read it all, and I've only almost finished the Training stories. Speaking of which, where would you set this one in, which era?

Sadly, a mere 133. I'm so ashamed of it I won't even post a picture, though I could find my way into browser history and open the page again... :(

Oh well. Goodbye Drakon. The newspaper, AWC, HD, we'll miss you. Farewell, and good luck in real life!

Hmm. Nice descriptive! I should learn... And no, you don't need a narrative. But how about a descriptive narrative?